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Reviewer: shejams Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-22-12 - 01:27 am Title: Chapter 6

How you're gonna stop there?? LOL

How is Logan gonna get out of this?
(loved how the phone kept interrupting him)

Will Ororo fry him when she finds out?
(I sure would. Bad Logan)

Will Steffan keep calling all night?
If so, will Logan even tell her?
Will the hospital get in contact with Moira and she spill the beans?

Inquiring minds wants to know.

Will you update soon? (tomorrow would be nice :D)
I have a whole lot more questions that has to be answered. I'm hooked already. Please don't let curiosity kill me. If you want to save my life you'll do the right thing and update very soon. LOL

Peace

Author's Response: I only have one thing to say to you Shejams.............ha ha ha ha ha ha ha. Thank you, you are very much a muse. Update will be soon.

Reviewer: The Scribe2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04-21-12 - 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 6

Fantastic story. I am so hooked. I can't wait to see how Logan gets his ass out of this one.

Author's Response: Thank you Scribe2, Just a thought, should I let him off the hook quickly, or at a slow roast? Ha ha ha. You tell me. I do listen. : )

Reviewer: dispatcher 652 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-21-12 - 08:42 am Title: Chapter 6

I'm surprised Logan is keeping up with the lie. Even he recognizes how bad it is to keep someone's past away from them and yet he's still doing it. To bad Logan's lying but even a lie has some grain of truth.

Author's Response: D652, You always give me something to think about. Thanks for reviewing again and reading. I don't know if you know it or not but everytime I read a review it more than likely has an effect on the next chapter rewrite. Your thoughts move the hands on the keys. ; )

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-21-12 - 04:43 am Title: Chapter 6

Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.   

Author's Response: Dragon, Glad you like it so far. Please keep reading and reviewing, I do listen to feedback. : )

Reviewer: shejams Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-20-12 - 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 5

"Time, breathing and coherent thought all stopped."

That is exactly how I feel right now.

I can't believe I missed this one.
I love it already.
I'm literally speechless right now.
I definitely need to check this site more often.
Please update soon!!

Author's Response: Shejams, Oh no you didn't miss my fic! : ) Glad you found it and that you are enjoying it. I told you to check the realm more often Lady. I am thrilled to see all the updates these last few weeks. I have to get on the ball and catch up with my reading and reviewing of these wonderful stories. Come back often and I hope you will continue to get a wonderful surprise. Thanks for being a fantastic reviewer. Angel A

Reviewer: LovyDovy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-10-12 - 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 5

Great story! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Soon please.

Author's Response: LovyDovy, You asked for it and you shall receive...this weekend! : )

Reviewer: Msking Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-01-12 - 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 5

When I read the beginning of this fic, I wasn't too sure of where it was going... every chapter up to now has me hooked. I can't wait to red more from you! :-)

Author's Response: Msking, I hope you continue to follow this attempt at Rolo fiction. I do so love them. Glad it has been an uphill journey for you so far. It's good to now the suspend builds instead of leaving you bored. Thank you for reading and reviewing. Angel A

Reviewer: dispatcher 652 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-29-12 - 09:52 am Title: Chapter 5

Omg! Not friend. Not teammate. Wife!!!! Holy Cow!!!
Poor Ororo. Just when she thinks she's starting to get some kind of foot hold on her turbulent life Logan comes in and pulls the rug from under her in true Logan ya never see it coming fashion.
You got me with that revelation. Talk about blind sided. Lol!
I wonder how this conversation is going to start for them? How do get past the fact that not only does does your wife not remember you but she was about to screw another guy in your living room. I think that put gas on the bridge they are going to be building. Please do not keep us in suspense long. This is just too damn good.

Author's Response: D 652, Sorry about the delay in posting next chapter, I have really wanted to finish up with 'Rage', but darned rewrite and tweaks has kept me from posting a new chapter. Soooo not happy about that, but thank you for reviewing once again and continued interest in this fic. . New chapter will be up this weekend. Angel A

Reviewer: Marbles Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-29-12 - 03:09 am Title: Chapter 5

Props to Logan for keeping his cool for as long as he did there, before dropping the word 'wife' into the conversation, haha. I mean, he did just walk in on his wife(!!! jeez I gasped aloud at that part) and some stranger playing tonsil hockey...

Though that does beg the question, just how messed up was their relationship before this, if Ororo was so sad before the accident and if Logan was brooding in another country.

Burning questions!! D:

Author's Response: Hey Marbles, You definitely give me something to think about in tweaking my already finished fics. All I can say is thank you for the burning ideas your review brings to my mind. ; )

Reviewer: QTFic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-29-12 - 02:24 am Title: Chapter 5

Oh Logan! ....that's all I can say!!!

Author's Response: QT, you can say a whole lot and I will listen. I do concur with you about Logan on this one. : ) Thanks again for reading and taking the time to be so precise with review. As always... Angel A

Reviewer: RedVixen7 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-29-12 - 02:06 am Title: Chapter 5

I just register to this site just to review this chapter!!

Wow! I seriously think that Logan said that at the end just to ruffle Steffan. I think if Logan was really married to Ro, and caught them doing what they were doing, Steffan would be dead!!!!

So waiting for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: RedVixen7, I'm floored to know that you registered to review this fic. I am humbled. And yes, I totally agree with you that Logan is not one that ever learned to share what was his. Thank you for reviewing and........Welcome to the Realms family. Angel A

Reviewer: soapyharlequin Signed [Report This]
Date: 03-28-12 - 01:15 am Title: Chapter 3

That darn Hank! Assuming--it is Hank. Clearly, it ended badly. Was it his insecurities, likes it was in the comics? That poor sheriffs falling under Ro's spell he better step back. She's taken! lol

You were spot on with those descriptions!

Author's Response: SH, Hank hunh.? : ) Let me see...what is it you told me about 'Forced', oh yeah nothing. LOL And yes you're right our girl is taken, we do so agree. I'm glad you think I was descriptive enough, we can be our worst critics. And by the way...good job putting me on blast in Chit Chat. Loved the double response from you it was well worth it. LMAO. By the way April is only a few days away. : )

Reviewer: Marbles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03-27-12 - 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 4

Interesting to see how their lives are going so far, apart. I loved loved loved chapter 3, though. You could really tell how displaced Ororo felt, especially with the rediscovering the photos of herself... Creepy in a way, but also so sad! Poor girl.

Chapter 4; Wolverine's a jerk. What else is new? XD Well no, I liked his introspection about the X-(wo)men. Very telling. Can't wait to see what'll happen next when he finds out Storm's been 'lost'.

Author's Response: Marbles, Thank you for reading this fic and responding. Will be reading yours as well. What can I say, I think we all just have a love for these two characters and let's be generous, some of the other X-men as well. LOL

Reviewer: dispatcher 652 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-26-12 - 06:03 am Title: Chapter 4

I'm surprised that Charles or Jean can't sense that Ororo was hurt or that her connection to them was lost. Since she can't remember her mental blocks should be down. Charles is slacking. :)
I really like chapter 3. I could picture Ororo in my head going through the house and touching items to jog her memory. I could see her fingers brush across something and hoping it would cause some type of light bulb to go off. And for Chapter 4 loved Logan kicking that car thief's ass. I know how it feel to have your car broken into and someone going through your stuff. So I just pretend Wolverine got some pay back for me too. Lol!
The anticipation is building now that Logan is getting closer to his home. I can't wait to see Logan's reaction to find Ororo at his home with no memory.
Please keep going! Loving both your stories.

Author's Response: Hi D652, Glad you are still liking this. Good to know that the imagery I try to convey is recieved. Sooo sorry to hear about your empathy with the car scenario. Hopefully Logan helped vindicate you if just a little. : ) Charles did get the message about Ororo, as he tried to tell Logan and I like to think that Ororo is just a strong bad ass that even the professor can't get to without her permission. Thank you for following both works this far.

Reviewer: QTFic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-26-12 - 03:26 am Title: Chapter 4

I love you so much for updating! I can hardly wait for Wolverine to make it to the cabin! Also, thank you for the insight on Wolverine's feelings for Ororo.

Author's Response: You are more than welcome QTFic. I really don't want to leave any stories unfinished. OCD isn't always such a bad thing. Anyway, as I have said my stories are all finished from journals from long ago. Just have to tweek or in some cases re-write certain chapters. As always Thanks for reading.

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