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Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07-20-14 - 09:25 am Title: Chapter 2: Rapport

I think I've read this three times while waiting for an update. Glad I found this site, the new movie had me completely into Rolo and finding an active fanfic site for them was awesome. This story is how the movie should have ended, instead of going back to the tired Jean/Logan ship that wasn't even a ship to begin with. It's written so heartbreakingly beautiful. :)

Reviewer: Carmen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-12-14 - 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 1: Memory

OMG i'm already in love with this story and its just getting started. I haven't seen the newest movie yet but I can't wait if that is what inspired you to return to writing. Thanks for the new RoLo love.

Reviewer: bluewatersky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-12-14 - 04:56 pm Title: Prologue

I love this story so far. The tenor of this story is perfect and I can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing this.

Reviewer: charly43 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-09-14 - 06:32 am Title: Prologue

Love this! I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: irish_sunset Signed [Report This]
Date: 06-07-14 - 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 2: Rapport

Sooo damn good!!! Please continue!

Author's Response: Thankyou and will do!

Reviewer: Vas2139 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-14 - 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 2: Rapport

Don't know if it's the hormones but this chap made me cry. I really felt for Ro&girlsl Hopefully Wolvie gets back to his old self for his family

Author's Response: Its ok, writing it made me cry, so you're in good company!

Reviewer: Orororo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06-06-14 - 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 2: Rapport

Oh storm;( don't be sad.
Gosh i love this story! Perfect fit after DOFP!

Author's Response: Poor Stormy. Thanks so much! I couldn't stop the muse once I saw DOFP!

Reviewer: Marbles Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-06-14 - 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 2: Rapport

I thought the same thing re: Ororo and Logan hooking up at least once (at the very least!) in the Bad Timeline. No matter what's waiting for Logan in the new and restored timeline, I think that considering Logan, Storm, Charles and Erik showed up together on the Blackbird just implies that it'd been just them for a while. And the way Logan puts it here ("Wasn’t roses and moonlight, ‘Ro. It was war, it was sex, it was something to get us through the night.”), is something I think really could've happened.

(tl;dr I liked that part, but it was also a punch right in the feelings, ow. the end to this chapter didn't help at all and 'roro must just be struggling so much and while that's terrible, I also think it's a neat way to show her strength of character.)

The staff all getting together and gossiping is cute. And heartwarming, considering how they couldn't do even that in the previous timeline. And haha, how ironic that Kitty's the one most vocal about not wanting to hear about that life, considering she's the one who made Logan's mission at all possible!

(I'm sorry, I ramble a lot when I review something I really like! D:)

Author's Response: Oh, I completely agree. there was something there, like they were the last two teams standing. I love that aspect. Logan has his way with words every now and then. I know, right in the feels, huh? I can't wait for Kitty to find out what her purpose was and how much she went through to send him back! I'm so glad you're enjoying my fic!

Reviewer: weatherwitch2305 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06-06-14 - 07:55 pm Title: Prologue

So happy your back. I've read all your stories and i love them. This story is awesome, keep it up.

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely words!

Reviewer: Orororo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06-05-14 - 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 1: Memory

Pllsssss continue this asap:)))))
Loveeeeeee thissss!!!!

Author's Response: I've got about half of chapter two done. Probably post it today or tomorrow!

Reviewer: Marbles Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-05-14 - 11:07 am Title: Chapter 1: Memory

Gah. I am loving the twist here. I like how they were all preparing for this to happen, that they knew it would happen (it makes sense that they would pinpoint a year and try to anticipate Logan's... reverting? something?)

That said, twins! Named Laura and Anna-Marie! Be still my heart, that's really cute and I already like them both (and it's great they have distinct personalities already.)

What a cliffhanger though! This thing about another man replacing the Logan that had been husband to Ororo, father to their twins has me super hooked. Can't wait to see how things turn out!

Author's Response: Well, if Charles knew...why would he let 'Ro and the others just be blindsided. Not cool. I've been dying to start this forever and chapter two is almost complete, look for an update today or tomorrow. Yeah, I've got some aces up my sleeves...brace yourself. All I'm sayin'

Reviewer: Marbles Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-05-14 - 10:54 am Title: Prologue

Ahh, how exciting! I've been toying with the idea of a post-DoFP fic myself but words are so hard. I know you'll do the concept justice though, so I'm really looking forward to reading this! :)

Author's Response: Words are hard. I really hope I can do this justice. Its RoLo, how can anyone resist?!

Reviewer: Vas2139 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-05-14 - 06:37 am Title: Chapter 1: Memory

First to Review & so happy you're back!! I havent seen"Days" yet but still had to read. Love this so far. I love your take if the movie verse in your stories. This one is going to be my one of my favs!

Author's Response: GAH! DOFP is EPIC. I couldn't not write a fic. Thanks for the review. I can't believe it took me so long to get back!

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