[Report This]Date: 07-11-16 - 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 12
I'm glad Logan and Ororo are working things out. I was sad that they lost their child and how it brought them both down a dark whole. They are each other's light and can get through anything together.
I can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 07-07-16 - 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 12
Woo hoo! You're back and you got Logan kicking ass and taking named. I hope being at Jasmine Falls brings them some peace and maybe say a proper good bye together to their son.
[Report This]Date: 08-13-15 - 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 11
Really like the story read it on fanfiction.net but wondering why it says 11 chapters here but 8 chapters on the other site.
[Report This]Date: 07-06-14 - 12:06 am Title: Chapter 10
So this has another chapter added compared to the post on ff.net so does this mean its the last chapter or is this one unfinished as well?
Date: 02-05-14 - 02:40 am Title: Chapter 10
Ok, so its taken me awhile to review this last chapter because it has left me so conflicted. First I'll say again that I have loved this story . . . but this has me sad and angry. Honestly I almost didn't review because I don't want to come across harsh or mean because I do love your work so much, but this one threw me for a loop. I hated Ororo's weakness and Logans cruelty. It seemed disjointed with the rest of the fic. And I thought Ororo was too quick to forgive Logans borderline sadistic treatment of her. As much as I would love to just be flowery with my review I have to be honest and be big enough to accept that this is just my opinion and no by means detracts from your talent. No matter what I am still a fan my not getting my way with one chapter won't change that.
[Report This]Date: 12-07-13 - 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 10
This was heart-wrenching! I'm glad Logan saw the error of his ways.
Date: 12-03-13 - 01:39 am Title: About Last Night
I did the happy dance when I saw you updated. Why you kill the baby? I felt her and Wolvie. That Slutbucket Jean would have gotten a Nicole bolt up her ass for sailing that. Something tells me this story not over.
Date: 06-23-12 - 03:38 am Title: Chapter 9
Nobody writes RoLo like you Pari. I love your take on Logan in all of your fics. He's always good to pull out all of your emotions, and this just has me ROFL. Looking forward to more. A A
[Report This]Date: 06-22-12 - 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 9
Love it! So glad you're back! Please update soon! Can you update tabular rasa soon! It's my favorite fabric! I've missed u!
[Report This]Date: 06-16-12 - 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 9
Ha! I'm so happy that Logan set Jean straight! I'm also happy he set Ororo straight about his feelings for her.
Logan's way of "handling" their announcement was pure Logan.
Date: 06-14-12 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 9
awsome story =) love the end thats 100% logan lol
[Report This]Date: 06-14-12 - 04:21 pm Title: About Last Night
Logan took care of it all right. Omg that was funny and so Logan. I love the way you write him and his love for Ororo. I sighed a big girlie sigh when I read his explantion of his old love for jean vs the selfless love Ororo chose to give him. This was a great update. :)
Date: 06-14-12 - 08:53 am Title: About Last Night
first person is so hard to write for me but you did a beautiful job.
Date: 06-14-12 - 05:09 am Title: Chapter 9
Wow, Logan. Just wow! At least Jean came around a bit. I think Logan is right and she wants to be in Ro's shoes. Can't wait to see how things go during Ro's pregnancy!
Update soon!!
[Report This]Date: 06-13-12 - 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 8
SO GLAD YOU UPDATED!!! enjoyed going through the reading again and now we get to see the story unfold, can't wait for more. thanks
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