This fic is basically the poster child (of RoLo AUs) for the Earn Your Happy Ending trope, haha. Jesus Christ. I feel like Anna summed it up best in this chapter; you just want to bang their heads together to make them see reason.

I felt Tory's ache in this :( That was really painful to read. And I mean that in the best possible way! They're both being so stubborn and proud, but with Ororo and her particular history of loss and heartache and bad case of abandonment issues(!!!), it's just. Ow. Like, I know Logan's suffered just as much, but maybe it's me being a female that I feel like Ororo must feel her loss that much more keenly, which is why she's finding it so hard to get over her past and put her trust in Logan again.

At the same time, I'm really liking all this drama. It would have been strange if things were suddenly fixed and fine and dandy after the emotional rollercoaster that was the last few chapters. This feels right (even if it feels terrible!) I just kind of hope that a happy ending isn't too far off, and that there's one planned for them eventually! (sorry, I'm such a sap. I love happy endings.)

This was a great update, Cee! I'm so excited that you haven't given up on this story! :)

Talk about a memorable vavation

Talk about a cliff hanger. I've thoroughly enjoyed reading this fic and can not wait to see what happens. Thought that the introduction of the reason why she left was fitting especially with the surprise of RoKs condition. I hope you update soon. I really enjoy your writings.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for visiting my story and leaving feedback. I'm still figuring out how I want to resolve 'Ro's situation. I want it to be a happy ending, but I want her to work for it.

this story is simply amazing! you have done such a good job at putting this together. i'm speechless! i found this story yesterday & couldn't stop reading it. i read 21 chapters in one day & i couldn't stop thinking about this story all day! i want them to get together already....please continue this story. and please, please give it a happy ending! ororo come to your senses and give logan a chance already!!!!!

Author's Response: That darn Ororo does need to give him a chance, doesn't she? :) Working on it. I'm flattered that you read the whole thing in one day! I see a happy ending for these two, they both deserve it. Thanks for visiting.

Don't feel bad CeeCee, I'm having a slight slump too with my own original story. Best thing to do is keep going at whatever pace you can manage. Anyway, it was nice to see something new from this story again. Reading it, brings back so many good memories. And it looks like things are still still strained between Logan and Ororo. I was wondering if Logan was going to be stubborn and just let Tory leave without at least trying. Even though, she turned him down, (why I'm still not getting) I think if anything he'd know he'd given everything he possibly could.

Tory, on the other hand. She's something else. I mean, if anything if she was suspecting that she was pregnant that she might at least want to clue the guy in. Now, a bun's in the oven and Logan for the time being is out of the picture. I don't know what she's going to do.

Good work as always hon, great to see your still writing too. Later!

Author's Response: Brandon! Baby doll, I've missed talking to you! It's so good to hear from you! Ororo is at a funky point in her life. She's going to be hyper-focused on that little bun in the oven, because she's lost one before, and this one is special, since it owns half of Logan's DNA. Logan isn't going to make it easy on her, not to worry, and even if she gets her moving truck packed, it won't be without a few obstacles... hahaha. Yeah. That's how I roll, buddy. I want to hear about your original story. That sounds exciting!

Of all the amazing chapters so far, this is by far my favorite. They finally get to be together again and I get all the RoLo goodness I could ask for. Wonderful, well worth the wait and well written.

I told my Logan that I had not left a review to this story (totally just too shy at the time when I first read it to even attempt a review) and he gave me a look saying was I crazy. Need to let you know this is another phenomenal piece of work. Please update soon. A A

Author's Response: Hi, Angel. Thanks for visiting my story again, sorry it's woefully unfinished. I have ideas in mind for it, but I keep getting backlogged in other projects. In real life, I have a family, full-time job, and a painting/sewing hobby that every once in a while gets me commissions. Take care.