Reviews For Lost Time
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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-11-09 - 05:15 am Title: Chapter 1

Short but potent. It reminded me of Hugh Jackman in Australia when he thought Nicole was dead. Potent.

Reviewer: charlii Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-25-08 - 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

OMG

Reviewer: Nickel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-06-08 - 04:43 am Title: Chapter 1

That was well written! Are you going to continue it?

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-03-08 - 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this. The image of Logan holding Ororo tighter to keep her with him was touching and believable. I like how you did this: No big buildup to watching her die. She's just dead from the beginning. It makes you feel for Logan more.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-02-08 - 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Poor Logan. The way that you wrote Logan's reaction very good, I felt his anger and pain as if it were my own.

Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-02-08 - 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

I typically don't like stories that have the character death of one of my faves, but you did it beautifully. Logan's raw and desparate emotions made me truly feel for him. I wanted to roar right along with him. This was great writing and I'll be looking forward to reading more from you.

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