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Date: 01-17-11 - 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 21: Unstoppable

OK, this has to be one of my favorite RoLo stories to date! I wish the movie was more like your story!

I'm glad you found your files because it would be a sin not to continue this story!

Reviewer: dispatcher 652 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-01-11 - 11:51 am Title: Chapter 21: Unstoppable

I just found this story and I just finished it. Stayed up way til the wee hours to finish this and I'm like I need more.
So,please when you can update.

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-28-10 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 21: Unstoppable

"That almost tickled." LOVE that. So much of this reminds me of how good the comics used to be, with dynamic action, the team's concern for each other, and just the way the story would flow. Juggernaut's AWESOME! You rock that character, did I mention that? You redeemed Scott in my eyes, too, since it's cool to see him from Logan's perspective, how he grudgingly respects him, too. Good stuff. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Heeheehee, I'm glad you liked it. Using Juggy was a lot of fun because he's just a big unstoppable thing and groups often time throw everything they have at the guy and he barely breaks a sweat. So when you have titan like that you have to get tricky with the tactics. Which is where I was trying to show where the X-Men was stronger at. All the brotherhood mutants tended to fight solo but the X-Men work together to bring them down. I was just trying to show how a family unit fighting team might work. ^^ And also I love Scott. I often found Scott and Logan to often times be cut from the same cloth. They're both proud, strong men, that live by a strict code of honor...generally speaking. The difference lies is, since Scott's the leader he often times plays big brother to everyone, where is Logan can be that irresponsible Uncle that everyone loves. Both great guys, just different roles they play.

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Date: 11-20-10 - 06:28 am Title: Chapter 20: Rage

Please will you update your story, I just read it and Now I'm in love with it!!!! I need more of it and I love your characterization Rogue and Storm and there interactions and feelings for Logan. I can only wish that this was what the first X-men movie was instead of what we were given.

Reviewer: PAMELA DILLON Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-24-10 - 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 20: Rage

Please update soon to finish the story. i had to read it all over gain from the start to catch up. Very good

Author's Response: Uh...Well, I'm a ways away from finishing this part of the series. But I'm working diligently. ^^ Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-17-10 - 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 20: Rage

BRAVO! BRAVO! Yeah, baby!

Juggernaut and Piotr duking it out was made of win. Love this chapter. Love Scott laying it down once he got there. *claps*

Author's Response: Hee,hee, Glad ya likes. Once again I have to state how much I love Cyclops. And usually these types of stories no one ever gives a moment to shine. It's usually always about Logan, so I figured lets be different. And I loved it. Hopefully, it won't be another year when I update. ^^

Reviewer: RoMo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-16-10 - 06:14 am Title: Chapter 17: The Protector

This was very good, my only suggestion or constructive criticism would be that you need to come up with a different description for Storm. We know she's African and that she's a woman, you kind of played out 'African Woman' just a wee bit. You could have used a simple 'she' as a description since 'she' was the only female in the scene. Or just use her name or codename, Ororo/Storm.

Reviewer: sabertooth1973@yahoo.com Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-13-10 - 12:28 am Title: Chapter 19: Ugly

Please...oh please tell me that you are going to finish this story

Author's Response: I have every intention to, but I've caught a stint of writer's block that I still can't shake.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05-07-09 - 01:43 am Title: Chapter 19: Ugly

This made me think of the current Wolverine movie. I've never been happy with the whole convoluted Silver Fox storyline so I'm interested to see what you do with it. I'm hoping Ororo calms the beast Creed's taunts are bringing out.

Author's Response: One thing I will state, that in my story Silver Fox is dead. She's not coming back to life later on. Her time with Logan was real and not some sort of mind fuck control tactic. After reading and rereading those comics I still don't get all of what happened. What was actually real and what was just implanted. That was one of those weird times in the Marvel Storytelling. Anyway, I plan to do something a bit more down to earth. In regards to Logan, guy is in a really dark place right now. But our girl has the right stuff to bring him around.

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-14-09 - 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 19: Ugly

okay, this line made me grin, among many others:

If there wasn’t a hallway present in the original blueprints, there was one now.

That was awesome. Fun fight scene, cute arguments with the X-Babies back at the mansion, and good stalking monologues going on with the Beast. You can't wait for Logan and Sabertooth to hit it. Lots of fanboy goodness, B.

Author's Response: I was hoping to deliver that. My biggest concern was making sure that everyone got an equal treatment, not to mention correct treatment of their abilities. I honestly didn't want anyone to really outshine anyone else. Also show how well the X-Men work together as a team. So all in all, I think everything came out ok. As I said before, I love writing fight scenes and we have a bit more action coming up.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-28-09 - 04:37 am Title: Chapter 18: Unleashed

It took me a while but I finally got caught up with your story at work today though I read this chapter tonight. Yours and Cee's are the only stories I'm really following right now since no one's updating. I have to say I enjoyed Rogue's 'group hug' bit, like the fun rapport the girls have which says a lot for me because I don't like movie Rogue and don't see her fitting in with Kitty and Jubes who are two of my favorites. That says a lot but I guess I've said it before, movie fics just aren't my cup of tea and yet your story continues to intrigue me.

Author's Response: I have to say I'm very flattered. I know how a lot of the hardcore X-Men veterans don't like Movie Rogue. To be honest the only reason why I tolerated her in the movies because I treated her like a separate entity from the comic book source. Plus the fact she wasn't really a strong character in the first place. If anything I was trying to give her a more realistic feel. Like how any regular girl would react if they were cast in that situation. I think maybe that's why people are more respective to her in my story. But again, I have to say I'm very happy that you've actually been enjoying her character. And thanks for reading. ^^

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-28-09 - 04:30 am Title: Chapter 15: Want

My, my. Not bad at all.

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-26-09 - 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 18: Unleashed

Once again, Jubes Kitty and Rogue as the three musketeers in this story is priceless. "It was his abs, wasn't it?" wahahahaha...

Good stuff, good descriptions, and I like the chilly blankness Jean read from Logan and how unsettling it felt. Good job.

Author's Response: I have to say again, I love doing the Jubes, Kitty and Rogue scenes, almost as much as I love writing the RoLo. The three play off so well with each other. Kitty tends to be the more mature/serious one. Jubilee is the loud, zany personality and Rogue fits somewhere in the middle of the two extremes. The three have a nice weird but close friendship. And their also a nice break from the more serious tones that the story can have. Doing Logan for this chapter was a challenged because I didn't know exactly how far I wanted to take everything. I wanted to make the Beast seem like a separate entity altogether, that had only a sliver of restraint that could easily been broken. Which I think kinda showed. Next chapter is going to be interesting with X-men going up against the Brotherhood.

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-07-09 - 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 17: The Protector

This was something else. Lots of good dialogue, and I love the diagram of Charles' mannerisms, how you defined his steepled fingers. That made total sense.

Ororo and Logan were both very strong in this story, you feel for both of them and understand their respective anger. You don't want Logan to leave, you know that he has to, yet you root for Ororo to give him a piece of her mind. Keep it coming. More excellent work, B.

Author's Response: The bit about Charles is actually one of my favorite parts. I liked it because everyone gets the sense that (good or bad) Charles has this powerful images as a great sage or guru type person. That he's all knowing to the point where he seems infallible. I took that image and tried to take a step away from it to show that regardless of how powerful his mind is, Charles is still human. And he does clever stuff to get over, just like the rest of us. If anything that was humanizing bit of description that I loved. To be honest I loved Ororo and Logan in this chapter too. If anything you see how much Logan has become ingrained into the X-Mansion, as well as in Ororo's life. He finally has family, he finally has friends. He has finally found again, a person that he truly cares for. Ororo, in the beginning of the chapter everything is left field. I mean you spend the night making love with someone and in the morning they tell you they have to leave. But then she learns that he's wants to leave to protect her. So she's equal parts touched and slightly insulted because he doesn't trust her abilities. But in Logan's defense the guy hasn't had much lessons in trust or faith. He only knows how to fight for what he cares for. So its a big dilemma for both parts. Big chapter next time. ^^

Reviewer: Christina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-01-09 - 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 16: Fears

I am just in love with this fic!!! I find myself reading it over and over again and just happy that it's not complete yet because it just means it's going to get better and better. I can't wait for the next chapter. I may have reviewed before but hey, can't help but praise a good thing,

Author's Response: ^^ I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I have to say I'm enjoying writing it. This story has been two firsts for me. First time I'm writing a Marvel character based story and this is also the longest series that is still in continuation. And I can't wait till I can get the next chapter up for everyone. Thanks again!

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