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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04-24-15 - 11:55 am Title: Ororo's Escape

Please update. This is a good story so far and I loved sin city.

Reviewer: frekiashika Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-19-09 - 06:04 am Title: Ororo's Escape

NEED TO FINISH IT DAMMIT

Reviewer: Roxxi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-22-09 - 02:23 am Title: Ororo's Escape

I know what happened do you - writer's block no more. As I said in previous reviews, I really enjoy reading this story and love Sin CIty. Two wonderful combinations with a great writer. I really do hope that you continue with this, your writing and excellent and so much fun to read. I hope you keep working on this : )

Reviewer: Roxxi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-22-09 - 02:15 am Title: Don't Let Him Get Me

Yay, another update. Great chapter.
Loved the set up of each character, Scott is seems a little bit more laid back in this story even if he take a kick to a groin with saying anything, lol.
Love Logan! I want him to come and save me! : )

Reviewer: NoWhere_Man Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-21-09 - 05:53 pm Title: Ororo's Escape

Bah, why do they always run. That was almost expected. Granted police cars the backseat doesn't open from the inside but besides that not a bad chapter. I wonder when the two of them will meet up again.

Author's Response: She definitely had to escape. It's very important that she does. And you're a step ahead of me, Logan will be talking to Scott about not making sure that backdoor was locked. Don't worry! It's Scott's own personal car.

Reviewer: tigerstorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-09 - 04:30 pm Title: Don't Let Him Get Me

I've been waiting for an update of this! Loved this chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: NoWhere_Man Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-09 - 04:23 pm Title: Don't Let Him Get Me

Keeping moving along with the second chapter. You have a few details that I loved. The origin of Logan's Wolverine name, I thought that was kind of clever. Not to mention a few key sentences of description, such as the light bulb color.

I honestly thought Ororo was going to ask to stay with Logan, until they capture the killer. But perhaps that comes in the future. Either way, some good stuff hon. Great to see you updated.

Reviewer: Christina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-09 - 03:43 pm Title: Don't Let Him Get Me

Wow I like the way this is going - yeah she's a bit young so I wonder how we'll get around tht one - either it'll take longer to solve the case and she'll be the perfect age or . . . I don't know. Can't wait for the next update, keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Roxxi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-14-09 - 03:18 am Title: The Witness

I read this story that first time you put it up, I am not sure if I reviewed or not, but I will tell you that i've never forgotten this story. I loved it the first time around and I like it even more now. I'am a fan of Frank Miller's Sin City, and I like what you've taken and turned into a RoLo story. I am very excited that you decieded to try this story again. The writing is great, throughout the whole story and I seeing everything visually and was kinda upset I had to stop. Thanks for updating! Keep it up, I wanna see chapter two soon!! : )
- Roxxi

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-11-09 - 08:59 am Title: The Witness

Love the angst and the excitement of the story. Update soon

Reviewer: NoWhere_Man Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-10-09 - 02:02 am Title: The Witness

I have to say this was a strange story to come upon. A combination of two of my favorite loves RoLo stories and Sin City. Can't say enough how much I love Sin City. I'll probably go watch the Hartigan story after this in fact.

Anyway getting back to the actual story, there was some interesting liberties you decided to take from the original. Granted, I don't see Vic being the child molester sort, so its understandable.

All in all, I'll diffidently be looking for more from this later on. And I hope if anything this motivates you to finish the story. Later!

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