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Reviewer: Vas2139 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-13-13 - 11:11 pm Title: A Hearts So Tired

Wow , what an ending . I would like to know what happen to Jean & Scott but great story.

Author's Response: Vas2139, so smart and oohh so wise, the outcome for Jean and Scott is locked in another story, .... maybe. lol A A

Reviewer: WLS Signed [Report This]
Date: 02-13-13 - 10:04 pm Title: A Heart Contrite

okay so I said I had to register to review. have read your stuff a million times it seems and love every bit of it had to come back to review. Can't wait for more from you.

Author's Response: I don't have words. AA

Reviewer: dispatcher652 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12-11-12 - 07:45 am Title: A Hearts Resolution

Ok, I'm going to be corny for a moment and say
"You had me at hello." Lol!!!
As always you never disappoint. This chapter had everything I was looking for and some things I didn't even expect. Like that song.
The song you chose just summed up all the feelings these two have gone through without each other and where they are now trying to find each other again. It just tore away the veil and made them finally see that they had to throw away all that selfish pride and give into their love or forever lose the best thing that ever happened to them.
When the song was over and they embraced each other I was like finally yes! They are together and stronger than ever. (Girlie sigh) :)
And I know I said I was going to be sappy for like a second. Sorry that it turned into a few minutes. Lol!
What can I say..I'm a sucker for a good romance ;)
Oh and I gotta tell ya ,I loved when Logan said for Jean not to touch Ororo because it was just too soon and he didn't want to smell her on 'Ro. I'm with Logan. I can forgive Jean but I can't forget what she did.
I'm so glad that there is one more chapter because it looks like Logan has something special to give to his girl. :)
As always AA, thank you for the wonderful read.

Author's Response: i wish I had the time to say all I would like to on this visit to the Realm, but alas i have to go soon. I have to say your detail in review keeps a smile on my face and gets me through to the next post. I am so glad I haven't let you down and look forward to your support in one of my greatest loves...RoLo. Thank you AA

Reviewer: QTFic Signed [Report This]
Date: 12-02-12 - 07:58 pm Title: A Hearts Resolution

No arrows from me only happy dances and virtual hugs!!

Now everything makes sense even the using giving Jean the boat house to jump start their anger enough at what they lost to fight for what they deserved.

I think my favorite of this chapter was Logan shutting down Jean's hug for Ro not want her scent on his woman. Wonderful chapter!!

Author's Response: I shall live and smile after reading your first sentence. lol After jean got the house I thought I might have been boiled in oil. Almost done and thank you once again for being such an encouragement. AA

Reviewer: angel24buffy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-27-12 - 10:42 pm Title: A Hearts Resolution

The chapter touched my heart in many was. I'm so glad Logan and Ro were able to overcome their differences to get back together. After all, true love always prevails. Also, I loved that they are moving back into their boathouse. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: My job was done if i truly accomplished what you say. That means a lot to me and is heartfelt in return. Thank you. AA

Reviewer: RedVixen7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11-26-12 - 07:38 am Title: A Hearts Resolution

I'm no sap but I love you for this!!! It's about time!! I'm glad they didn't have this massive tug of war that the probably would have had and they got some 'alone' time. 😏😉

Great chappy!!!

Author's Response: I have wanted to get back to my RoLo for so long and have been hindered. I want you to know I really do appreciate that you enjoyed this chapter and want to get this done for all of you who have been so faithful to read very soon. I am trying...AA

Reviewer: Beautiful Storm Signed [Report This]
Date: 11-26-12 - 02:51 am Title: A Hearts Resolution

*shoots flaming arrow and dart* Just kidding, I couldn't resist. Loved it. Any person who enjoys adding lyrics and seeing lyrics in stories, especially love stories would love this. You get 0 flames and 1000000 hearts from me. :D

Author's Response: So it wasn't so lame after all. i for one love songs in fics as well . Appreciate your words so much. AA

Reviewer: Sasseb Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-18-12 - 04:59 am Title: A Heart be Told

So freaking awesome... I love this story and your writing at the end was brilliant. I can't wait for an update.

Author's Response: Sasseb, If you're not careful you just might give me a swelled head. lol I'm trying to wrap this story up to post others that I have. Hope you will be reading. Thank you for you time. A A

Reviewer: shejams Signed [Report This]
Date: 10-15-12 - 08:14 pm Title: A Heart be Told

It's about time, 'Ro! Go get your man!
This update makes me wanna howl with Mofo. Lol

Can I tell you that I just love Scott in big brother mode? I think that Scott's and Ororo's familial relationship is one of the most underused relationship, I wish there were more of that. So thank you.
I also love it when writers end the Logan/Scott bitter rivalry. They may not like each other, what with their alpha male personalities, but they don't any longer hate each other. I absolutely loved their conversation in the bar. It was serious and hilarious at the same time. I'm super glad Scott had the last laugh there. That was priceless!

To Scott: Don't worry; we all heard Logan's apology. :D

Favorite lines this chapter:
(Charles and Ororo's scene)

This was their private time. Not for anyone else to see. This was the norm for Ororo, Scott and Charles. The natural affection shown between a father and his children. Pure and untainted.

Awww!

Oh, PS
To Charles : I forgive you. :D

Author's Response: Shejams, what do I say...I'm speechless. Thank you. I love reading your reviews so much. A A

Reviewer: RedVixen7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10-15-12 - 06:29 am Title: A Heart be Told

I love MoFo, I really do!! (Just had to say that ^_^)

I have to say I am beyond thrilled that Charles told Ro to fight for what was hers! And that he also was angry at Jean for her actions. But it was a little hard to read in that area. It seemed a bit disjointed.

I also found it hilarious how Scott got the last laugh at the bar. I could only imagine the looks on everyone's face there! I know I almost died laughing ! ^_^ 😂

Great chappy!

Author's Response: You know what's funny, I don't do dogs in real life, but I love writing about them. Not that I hate them or anything, I am just a germa-phobe and don't like touching them, (my bad). Sorry if the flow of the fic got a little askew for you, but I hope it didn't ruin it for you. Just needed to convey that Charles was loyal to her as her parental figure. So glad I could make you laugh too. A A

Reviewer: QTFic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-15-12 - 02:58 am Title: A Heart be Told

OK Angel, I don't know how you do this every chapter I read it and it just makes me yearn for more!!

I understand what Charles was doing, but I don't know if I still fully agree with Jean getting to benefit from the fruits of Logan and Ororo's labors after everything she has put everyone through. I am truly hoping that now Ororo has been forced to really look at everything she has lost she will steel her spine up and fight for what she deserves.

I also hope that Scott's talk with Logan will help him realize that even though it may be painful for him to face the pain and hurt he caused Ororo day in and day out that she deserves so much more than him taking the easy way out and running away. I hope he sees that the only way Ororo is going to see that he really cares for her is to stick it out and fight for her and to prove to her each day that he's there for her and that he's not going anywhere. Doesn't he realize if he leaves he is just feeding her insecurities that she isn't deserving of love or worth fighting for? Come on Logan don't make me come through this screen and shake the metal of your bones!!!

Author's Response: You have me laughing so hard right now I can hardly type. I just want you to know that your response to my fics has more influence than you may know. You are very insightful QTFic. Thank you for always taking the time to leave a review, and reading in the first place. A A

Reviewer: dispatcher652 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10-15-12 - 01:30 am Title: A Heart be Told

Ok, the rational side of me excepts Charlie's explanation. He did what he thought was right for his children and the members of his extended family. I get that. She and the rest of the xmen need time to heal and the distance the house provides will help close the deep wounds. Now, the not so rational part is screaming to hell with that! You want Jean to heal, then let her build her own damn house. Let her sweat and toil like Logan and Ororo did. She will not appreciate the hard work they put into it. The not so rational part laughs because Jean will be in house that is covered in Logan and Ororo. Literally. :)
Rational side taking back over now.
I hope that Scott and Charles words finally register with Logan and Ororo. It looks like they both finally realize that cant live without each other. I hope that will make them ready to move forward.

Author's Response: Dispatcher652 I do sooo enjoy your reviews. Makes my writing these so much more fun. Your views on this fic have been phenomenal. If I could pass the reins over to you I would. : ) It truly pleases me that you gain some entertainment from this. Thank you for reading along with this fic and leaving such remarkable reviews. You have no idea how it spurs me on to finish. Almost there. A A

Reviewer: Antiwa Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-17-12 - 04:46 am Title: A Heart Stopped

I just want to say that I did not see the end coming out the way it did. I was shocked to her that Jean of all people will be living in the boat house. I wonder what the professor is up to and hope that it goes in his favor. I cant wait for the conversation between the four individuals who are in the living room. Please update soon.

Author's Response: I keep reading and reading the next chapter I have and I just don't feel it's right. I want to get it up though, truly I do. Glad I gave you a little surprise at the end, hope you didn't hate me though. (smile) As always I thank you for taking the time to leave a review after reading. A A

Reviewer: QTFic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-14-12 - 01:20 pm Title: A Heart Stopped

Oh no this heffer didn't...she just comes sauntering in like she owns the place?? Oh wait she does because Charles gave it to her!! WTF Chuck? Logan and Ororo put their blood, sweat and tears and you give to the cheating hussy??

I love you 'Ro but you gotta let go of some of this pride. I understand where she's coming from, Logan is strong-willed and even with Jean's influence he may have been able to resist and it's leaving her unsure but Logan is really hurting here and I think he would do anything to get her back if she would just let him in.

Great, great job...please don't stay away that long again! :oD

Author's Response: QTFic, QTFic....., Thank you so much for your generosity in reading and reviewing. I enjoy reading you critiques as much as writing the fics. I am still waiting on your own stories, with such moving and concise reviews you definitely have a gift I think worthy of sharing. All that said, I am so trying to end up my fics so that I can post new ones. I hate having open stories posted without completing what is already there. Check soon and I hope to have more. A A

Reviewer: angel24buffy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-12-12 - 04:48 pm Title: A Heart Stopped

All I can say is wow. Jean is so cruel to Ororo. She already has Scott. Stop messing with Logan....I didn't see the ending coming. It was great. Can't wait to read the next chapters.

Author's Response: Angel24buffy, I am enjoying reading your reviews. Thank you for your response to this little story. And I am happy to see that I gave you a bit of a surprise, even though not too pleasant, sorry. Will post more very very soon. A A

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