Date: 09-12-12 - 04:23 am Title: A Heart Stopped
WHAT?!??????!!!?! Are you serious! That b*tch weasels her way into their relationship and now their house! My.God! Will this madness end?!?!
(Emotions done) inspired chapter! I wish Ro would stop being so stubburn! If this was a normal case of a cheating douche I would be all for it, but it's not. I really hope Lo doesn't leave! That would be a horrible mistake.
Can't wait for the next chappy!!!
Author's Response: RedVixen7, I wish you could see my face right now.....a huge grin is plastered on it. lol It makes me so happy to see you have invested your time and thought into this fic. Don't give up hope with our couple in this, the end is near and I hope you will approve. Thanks always for R & R. More very soon, A A
[Report This]Date: 09-12-12 - 12:09 am Title: A Heart Stopped
Omg! He gave Jean the house! I'm so shocked I have to say it again. He gave Jean the house! Talk about a heart being stopped. I was ok right up until that sentence. Knowing Xavier there has got to be an alterior motive behind this but holy cow! There might not be a house after this little shake up. Lol!
I hope Jean is not playing Charles like she did Logan.
I just really want Logan and Ororo to swallow their pride and just give in to thier love. When Logan had Mofo bring the bag of new thongs for Ororo I chuckled and did my girlie aww cause it was sweet.
Your writing is just so amazing. This was really well worth the wait. I saw that you had an emergency and I hope that everything is ok. Update when you can and take care. :)
Author's Response: Dispatcher652, First let me say thank you for caring and all is well now, I do appreciate your thoughtfulness and more updates should be coming very soon. Now I know, I know that witch has the house. lol I am liking your idea of there being no house left after that. (smile) hmmm, idea bubble. Yes Logan and Ororo are two very stubborn and prideful people in this one, why don't they just suck it up. lol We are nearing the end so I have a lot of clean up work to do from prior chapters, Peter and Logan and Logan giving Storm the thongs. Glad you approved, and that it made you happy. You never fail to keep me motivated, thank you so much. Until next......A A
Date: 09-11-12 - 08:25 pm Title: A Heart Stopped
What The Hell! Oh you have got to update very soon, I need my RoLo to get back together.
Author's Response: Britt1990, good to know you are still with me. I don't want to be so long between postings again. Check soon and thank you for leaving a review and reading. You guys make me smile. A A
Date: 09-11-12 - 07:46 pm Title: A Heart Stopped
What the heck?
First Jean took her man...now she's taking het house?
Oh, heck no! Lol
Mojo is one smart dog. I'm glad he left. I don't want him to get injured when the fireworks starts.
Welcome back and great update. If you can't tell, I'm enjoying this very much.
I especially liked the kids' scene. It just made me smile. I think it's really endearing when kids act like kids.
On another note: Logan and Ororo should just let go their pride and get back together. (another giggle moment was his gift to her. Hehe)
Anyway, looking forward to more. :D
Author's Response: Thank you Shejams for making this 9/11 better. Hopefully more is on the way soon. I do so love your reviews and input. (smiling) Again thank you. A A
Date: 03-21-12 - 07:55 pm Title: A Stubborn Heart
Holy cow!!!! I love this chapter but I just wanted to shake Ororo and Logan and tell them for the love of god (goddess) swallow your damn pride! Did they both have valid points, yes they sure did. Logan was manipulated by Jean and that was wrong but Ororo made a good point by saying that some part of him must have wanted it otherwise it wouldn't have happened. When I read this all I kept think was here are two people that never once had to bend or beg from anyone. All thier life lessons taught them to always be strong and never back down when you know you are in the right. I don't think anyone not even the professor has shown either one when or how to bend. And you would think that Ororo being mistress of the winds would know that sometimes you got bend with the breeze or snap. I want to see these two together but I wanna see Logan be the one to bend first. It's his mess like Scott said. He need to clean it up. And if ya want something bad enough bub, sometimes you gotta go all in and damn the consequences.
Not sure of that was a good Logan impression but it felt good to say. Lol!
Keep up the great work and can't wait for more from you.
Author's Response: D652, I don't think any of you readers who faithfully review have any idea how you inspire us to keep doing what we try to do! THANK YOU. Humbly said. No need to touch on anything you said, it was more than well put, but I will say I think that was one helluva Logan impression and I'm glad you got that one out! LOL A A
Date: 03-21-12 - 02:41 pm Title: A Stubborn Heart
Yay, you're back! I've missed ya!
Sorry for the late review, but since this site rarely updates I just check once in a while. I glad I did. I've missed a lot I see.
I knew it! I knew Jean did some sort of Jedi mind trick on Logan. At least she apologized. (I still want to scratch her eyes out. :o) ) Great updates. I like how you don't have eveyone forgiving her right away. I hope Scott never forgives her. (don't worry Scott, I'm sure Emma or Betsy will give you a shoulder to cry on.)
I really thought Jean and Ororo's scene was very well done. It was a realistic outcome. After Jean's breakdown, I was sure 'Ro was going to forgive her. Even though eventually I know she will, I'm glad she let her know it's going to take some time to get to that point. I really hope Jean get her act together. She's not my favorite, but I do like her relationship with Ororo.
I'm a big Cyclops fan and I love his brotherly affection for our girl. Glad he gave Logan a piece of his mind. but i'm more glad he recognizes that Logan is perfect for her.
For Logan: I understand your anger and reluctance, but get it together, okay?
I can't wait got more.
'Til next time,
shejams
Author's Response: SHEJAMS, you've got to stop making me wonder what has happened to you!!! I'm back and writing and sooo loving it. Check back more often and I hope to not disappoint you. : ) Will be putting up more of 'Rage' after B T, is updated. Keep it coming with the word from you and I will try to keep it coming. As always feel free to tell me like it is. A A
Date: 03-19-12 - 05:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Great update. Scott was right Logan is always so quick to walk away. I hope he realizes that a stubborn Ro is worth fighting for. Thanks again or a great read.
Author's Response: Sasse, Ororo is a force to be reckoned with and a prize to be claimed, if Logan can just get past all his macho posturing to the point of sticking around I agree. I do however think with this one Ororo forgot that she told herself she was ready to fight for him. Hmmm. More is coming soon, thanks for continuing to read. All of you guys who review, be it good or bad, (any feedback can be constructive), are a strong support and thank you for continuing to do so. A A
[Report This]Date: 03-18-12 - 12:13 pm Title: A Stubborn Heart
OK I know that they are BOTH stubborn and prideful, and Logan did apologize, but I hope he realizes that even though he was under Jean's influence he has broken Ororo's trust. Apologizing once and saying "I love you" once isn't enough. He needs to prove to her that he loves her and that she is the only one he wants. Leaving isn't going to prove that to her.
Author's Response: QTFic, I'm letting you write my next chapter. : ) Your review is a quick synopsis of what needs to come next to wrap all this up. Seriously, I would like to read what you put down on paper. Thank you for reviewing faithfully and reading with such insight into this fic. . A A
Date: 03-18-12 - 04:00 am Title: A Stubborn Heart
Ahh, intense. Lots of extreme emotions here. I like that you point out Ororo's pride. I find that plenty of writers paint her out to be the victim in a Scott/Jean/Logan/Ororo love polygon, but her pride makes her just as guilty as the rest of them. If that makes any sense at all. xD
In any case, can't wait to see this continue. Is a resolution close at hand? I was hoping that the boathouse they worked so hard to restore would be truly theirs by the end. Let's see if I'm right :o
Author's Response: Hey Marbles, I think you make plenty of sense. : ) With this fic I want to show the confusion the two of them have with relationships due to the fact that they are both stunted emotionally. Will be posting more of this right after Blind Trans. upadate. We are really close to the end. Please stick with me to see how it all ends and I hope you will be satisfied. Oh yeah would like to read some more from you soon, hint, hint. ; )
Thanks for the feedback. A A
[Report This]Date: 03-18-12 - 02:20 am Title: A Stubborn Heart
Wow you are just an fantastic writer of storm/wolverine there is just so many emotions in this story i love it!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Victoria, If I have said it before I'll say it again, you are just too kind and good for one's ego. Thank you for such glowing praise, I just wish to be worthy of it. I try, often falling short of where I want to be, but I do so appreciate you reading and letting me know what you think. As always, thank you so very much. A A
[Report This]Date: 02-29-12 - 11:06 pm Title: An Honest Heart
I truly love that in true Ororo fashion she forgave Jean and let go of any hate, but in the same token did not let her off the hook for all the hurt her selfish actions caused.
I am just wondering if knowing how Jean tampered with Logan's mind will affect who she deals with him and if she will be able to forgive and trust him again.
Author's Response: QTFic, Sorry I typed your name wrong on your last review, was typing tooooo fast. : ) I always see Storm as the bigger woman in the comics, after all she is the other leader of the X-Men. Jean just always proved tooo duplicitous to me. Continue reading and hopefully your questions will be answered, and please don't get too mad at me. : )
Date: 02-29-12 - 01:36 pm Title: An Honest Heart
Thank You soooo Much for contiuing to update this wonderful story i am sooo glad that storm did not let jeans trifling deceiving ass fall into her arms with her little speech ororo handled the witch like a woman absolutly love this story it is so flawless!!!!!!1
Author's Response: Victoria, You are definitely too kind. But I love that you didn't mind my letting Ororo dish out a little bit to Jean, considering the hell she has put them all through. More will be up soon. I thoroughly enjoy hearing from you. Thank you.
Date: 02-29-12 - 04:21 am Title: An Honest Heart
I hope now that since all of Jean's indiscretions are out for all to see that Ororo and Logan can find a way back to each other. I loved how Ororo didn't act all warm and fuzzy to Jean's apology. She didn't let her off the hook. She let her know that you were wrong, you need help, and all of this is because of you and your misguided jealousy. I still think she should have kicked Jean's ass just a little but I'm good with the verbal smack down. :)
Now can Ororo and Logan have heart to heart talk? Please oh please? :)
Author's Response: Dispatcher 652, I too get so tired of the sickeningly sweet Ororo, who takes everything thrown at her and never gives it back. I love the Storm who kicks butt and stands with her hands on her hips afterward with a grin that would rival Wolverines. But above all I picture her as a lady, so in this one the lady won out with just a hint of the take no stuff warrior shining through. Hope to answer your questions soon. Thanks again for keeping me going.
Date: 02-26-12 - 04:58 am Title: Hope to a Pained Heart
What can I say but...wow! Such an intense chapter!! How difficult must it be to be living in the house and having to work with the person that broke your heart day in and day out!
No wonder Scott and Ororo have to go out each night and release some tension!
Welcome back and yeah for getting a computer!!!
Author's Response: QTFid, You have been so faithful with reviewing and it means a lot to me. I sorely missed my computer and have a new appreciation for the medium that it is. Glad you are sticking in there with me and still enjoying my writing attempts. THANK YOU.
Date: 02-19-12 - 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank you tor the long awaited update. It was great to read about the relationship btwn Scott and Ororo, love that Logan was jealous. He needs to man up and tell her what Jean did. I hope you update sooner than later :)
Author's Response: Sasse, Hope I don't disappoint you with my updates now. ; ) I hate the distance placed between two such strong characters as Scott and Ororo so I tried to rectify it with this story. Glad you like it.
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