I hope you update soon this is a great story!

Author's Response: Sasseb, I am working on the re-write now. Before I can post I have to go over what I already have. More is on the way. Thanks for reading and taking time to leave feedback. Angel A

oh my fruicking gosh that selfish bastard slept with that hateful slut uh i am so pissed he should cry and that b itch jean should get her in the form of scott dumping her classless trashy ass uhhhhhhhhhh poor oror all her love shot to pieces cause logan nasty ass can't keep it in his pants!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Victoria, Victoria, Victoria...you have no idea what your reviews do for me! You are a breath of sunshine, wrapped in a blazing fireball. Keep those reviews coming Lady. You make my day and I look forward to hearing from you. Just don't be too upset with me...the end is yet to come. Angel A

I'm slowly coming into the community and starting to comment a few of the RoLo stories here. I've got to say this one is so great; it pulls out tons of emotions from the reader (at least for me) and I just love how it everything started off with a dog :)

I do have to admit though, especially after an Ororo v. Jean debate with a friend on FB (I know lol) that reading this section ripped my heart to shreds.

I'm actually really interested in seeing how you pull Ororo and Logan back together (if that's what you've got planned). Logan's gotten himself into a situation that seems almost impossible to fix (as much as I love the guy, he gets the majority of the blame in my book). He has to find a way to get Ororo to trust him again while allowing her to heal and deal with the all thats happened on her own terms; it's just a big mess :/ But you've pieced together a compelling story so far, I have no doubt you'll get everything on its right path by the end of your story. And I am looking forward to it :)

Author's Response: elise, Thank you so much for taking the time to read and write such an insightful review. Glad you found the realm and that you are using your writing talent here. Please keep writing and I hope you will continue to read and review. Hope this story continues to entertain you and draw out all of the emotions I try to express. Just don't hate me for that. :) AngelAloft

YAY Update! okay now I'm done with that.

Love the way that you've put him in the hot seat even though it's not precisely the one that he likes to be in (battle seat that is). Not too sure about the Jean thing however I do like the twist to it. Hope that everything works out well ;)


Author's Response: Ya' know ya' can always give me input to influence the outcome BLP. :D Angel A

The bastard!

Author's Response: Aline, 2 words, nicely put, but I still love him. :P

Omg!!!!
This was so worth the wait. Logan is the man! When he so eloquently put Jean in her place,first my own jaw dropped,then when he was done I had a huge smile on my face. I really wanted Ororo to just let him say that they are together and tell Jean to take her skank ass home.
And the closing of the chapter with Logan saying there is no one else and Ro saying she loved him was fabulous. :)
Please update when you can.

Author's Response: Thanx for making me laugh with Jean's skank ass! Sorry for the wait, but thanks for understanding. Hope to post more frequently. I'm happy to know that others feel Logan should be portrayed more intelligently than he is elsewhere...ahem, that place shall remain nameless! :) Angel

Actually, it's funny that you mentioned Logan not being so dumb. I was going to include that in my review but didn't realize I had forgotten until I hit submit. I was just as proud as Ororo of Logan's little speech. My mom (who is a school teacher) has always told me that using big words doesn't make you wise but that it takes a truly intelligent person to take a complicated matter and break it down so that even a child can comprehend it. The fact that he is intelligent but chooses not to flaunt it over other people but chooses to be himself and is comfortable in his own skin makes him even sexier. So well done!!

Author's Response: I could drone on forever in reply to your wonderfully wise remarks, but you said all that needs saying, and very well I might add. Thank you AngelAloft