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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01-16-18 - 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

Is this a ROLO story about them together or getting together?

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-02-11 - 07:40 am Title: Chapter 1

This could use a beta. It's good. There are a few formatting things, like using italics for thoughts, that might make it read better at first glance.

Also, change the "completed" status to no, since this looks like a first chapter. And cap Discovery in the title. These are nitpicky suggestions, but other than that, this was a good movieverse story, filling in what us RoLoers would have liked to see in the film.

Author's Response: Thanks Cee. But... that is the full thing. It's a "Between the scenes" from the movies. I wrote it before I read the novelization version, so it will look different in certain aspects, but that was the point. As for the italics, I really don't know how to work those on this site. It looks a little better on ff though.

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