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Reviewer: MissyA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-09-11 - 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 5

Im so gald you decided to finsish this story and i have to say the revised version is even better then the old one keep at it and this chapter is by far my fav :)

Author's Response: Thank you!! Thank you!! I must admit I like this version better than the other too. Thanks for reading and reviewing Missy!!

Reviewer: dispatcher 652 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-09-11 - 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 4

Please continue. I hope that Logan and Ororo knock Scott and Jean off their moral smug high horses. Those two can be so annoying sometimes. :)

Author's Response: Oh it's pretty much a given in all my RoLo fics that Jean will get put in her place *sorry but I am not a fan of that cock tease, at all* thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: elise50 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06-08-11 - 06:35 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm not sure if I ever read the original, but I do love this. Though I do feel a little bad for Forge, Ororo and Logan are just too amazing together. I definitely love the way Ororo is just as carnal as Logan.

Can't wait to see where the rest of the story's headed :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing elise. I didn't want to dog Forge out too badly in this version, though now that I think about it I didn't dog him out at all in the other version...lol, but anyone who stands in the way of my RoLo will have to get some kind of smack down *evil grin*.

Reviewer: AngelAloft Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-11 - 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ok, had a rough night, this insomnia is kicking my butt, but so is this story. I am simply loving the relationship you have written with Ororo and Logan. Forge has really been tamed down in this rewrite, which is undoubtedly a good thing for him. So happy to see this story, and with an update already no less. Lovin' it.

Author's Response: I too love their relationship, I even find that when I am re-reading during my proofreads I swoon at some of the stuff I wrote. I honestly don't pay much attention as I am in the moment/motion of writing. But at times I'll go back and read it and be like 'damn that's good'. :)

Reviewer: trina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-11 - 11:20 am Title: Chapter 1

I love the story and can't wait to see what happens next. Good story so far.

Author's Response: Happy you like it so far Trina. I hope I can continue it in a manner that you will still enjoy.

Reviewer: Victoria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-11 - 06:54 am Title: Chapter 1

Whoo just excellent all the way around thank you soo much for this wonderful revision just bravo bravo!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks Victoria, glad you are enjoying it!!

Reviewer: AngelAloft Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-11 - 06:13 am Title: Chapter 3

I loved this story when I got to read it before. As the author I have confidence that you have the vision as to where and what you want your story to be. That all said, this rewrite is equally enjoyable. Love the still possessive Wolverine and knowing that Forge is faced with what he missed.

Author's Response: Thanks Angel, I'm glad you are enjoying it. I felt I had to rewrite it because I had grown stagnate with the other version and really had no desire to continue it. Now I've been newly inspired :)

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