Reviews For WIP: Rememory
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Reviewer: made Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04-08-16 - 08:07 am Title: One Shot

I bought a fine watch today,Omega Replica it is my favorite sky blue. It is I bought ten yuan, although not expensive. But for me it is the most precious, looks pretty good. Exquisite workmanship, the LCD screen and the piece made of leather straps.Place finish school,Panerai Replica I am familiar with old classmates and go together. I often went to the canteen when I stopped, replika Rolex klockor kopiorI am ready to go there to see. Clutching the hands of ten dollars. I walked in and saw a lot of nice stationery, pencil and a variety of toys.

Reviewer: friyourass Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-31-10 - 06:30 pm Title: One Shot

So are you ever gonna post this bad boy in it's entirety or am I gonna be legal first? DO WANT! Oh and Swahili Speaking Ororo=Bitchin'! Nuff said.

Reviewer: VenomQueen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-31-08 - 07:46 pm Title: One Shot

Wow! his is a really good fic.

Reviewer: nickel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-18-04 - 02:49 pm Title: One Shot

i loved that!!! i loved the ending. amazing. i loVe the language idea. i lOve how you broght in 'ororo'. beautiful piece. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Nickel! Your opinion is worth WAAAAAY more than $0.02, $0.03... even $0.05 any day! (and when did they remove the cents glyph from QWERTY? Where was THAT memo?)

Reviewer: Pari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-17-04 - 11:18 pm Title: One Shot

That was very lovely indeed:) I hope you do more:) Pari

Author's Response: Thank you, Pari. Your sentiments are very much appreciated!

Reviewer: bluemist418 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-17-04 - 08:12 am Title: One Shot

Oohhh....what a very cute fic! I hope you do update this. It's just so lovely. Never saw Ororospeak Swahili. UPDATE please!!

Author's Response: Muchas Thankas, Blue! I do hope you enjoy my finished piece, or at least the chapter in which this scene is placed. I look forward to your feedback. I am warmed and revitalized by it more so than my usual gallon of morning coffee. I hope everyone follows up with another set when you see it! (Smiles broadly, back of hand on forehead, unable to contain her euphoria)

Reviewer: AracTheDragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-17-04 - 02:43 am Title: One Shot

Oh my goodness, *SO* cute! I love it! Very original, too, we don't see our beloved Ororo speak Swahili very much...or teach it to Logan either. (Once again, *SO* cute!) I personally love the language of Swahili, so please tell, where did you learn to speak it? Did you find some website to translate it, do you have a friend who's fluent in it, what? I must know! (If you don't mind explaining. *friendly smile*)

Author's Response: Thanks, AtheD! I don't know how to speak it but from my research I am starting to appreciate its beauty. My research was, of course, the web. If you do a general search for Swahili Kanga, you'll find a lot of euphamisms and folk phrases that are used. Of course, another general serach for Swahili Phrases will bump you into a lot of touristy sights that will give you the general "Hello" and "Where is the bathroom". Maybe I should try to find a way to fit in that last example into a story... hmmmm...

Reviewer: ToughSpirit Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-17-04 - 02:30 am Title: One Shot

I loved it a lot. I thought it was funny, sweet, and sexy. And like Marikosan said even poetic. Hope you update A.S.A.P cause I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks, ToughSpirit. (Cousin of 'Stands With Fist'? Hmm?) I really do want to post the story in its entirety but I am stuck on a couple of scenes. I am really to get feedback from all of you. I hope you do like it when I post. Please let me know!

Reviewer: Marikosan-7 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-16-04 - 11:25 pm Title: One Shot

Absolutely loved it!! Such beautiful use of language and sound...poetic even. I seriously can not wait to read more from you. A wonderful piece... M'iko,xx

Author's Response: Whoa... THE Marikosan! I'm a huge fan of your work. (Nem grabs a pen and a cocktail napkin and starts to furiously write... anything to please her!)

Reviewer: storm_the_windrider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-16-04 - 10:17 pm Title: One Shot

WONDERFUL, wonderful story!! Very original and intersting too. Great job, hope u write more stories. :) xxxxxxxx

Author's Response: 'Sanku, 'sanku! (Nem giggles inwardly)

Reviewer: Darlin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-16-04 - 07:08 pm Title: One Shot

Oh my! This was very, very nice. Very sweet, very intimate. Nicely done. I would like to know what language it was they were speaking and what they were saying some of the time though. Never the less, a very nice piece.

Author's Response: First off, thanks for the review! Your point about following what is being said between the two in another language is well taken. I will keep that more in mind as I progress. And the language in use is Swahili (or at least my researched version of Swahili). Thanks again!

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