Penname: Pari [Contact] Real name: Parisian
Member Since: 05-10-03
Membership status: Administrator
Bio:
I love RoLo, always have. I also love Spuffy (Spike/Buffy), and Poltergeist The Legacy (Nick Chick:)
Beta-reader: No
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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01-01-70 Updated: 01-01-70
Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: 07-29-07 Title: None

Testing

Summary: Logan struggles to keep it all inside, can Ororo help him?
Categories: Ficlets/Songs/Poems
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4544 Read Count: 2653
[Report This] Published: 07-02-03 Updated: 07-02-03
Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: 07-02-03 Title: Chapter 1: She Cries Your Name

I have read this fic a few times, and its still a wonderful read:) Thank you for sharing it here. And I do hope you will add more soon:) Pari

Summary: Ororo. Logan. A pool table.
Categories: Ficlets
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2878 Read Count: 4431
[Report This] Published: 07-06-03 Updated: 07-06-03
Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: 06-08-04 Title: Chapter 1: In The Side Pocket

WOW!!! That was wonderful...MORE!!! PLEASE!!!

Summary: Logan comes back in hope that nothing has changed, however someone has and she brings him a big surprise.
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8223 Read Count: 24745
[Report This] Published: 07-14-03 Updated: 07-14-03
Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: 07-15-03 Title: Chapter 1: Have You Changed

Another wonderful fic, you are a great writer, a great talent. Thank you so for sharing it with us:)

Summary: Ororo finally finds the appeal
Categories: General NC-17
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 0 Read Count: 19420
[Report This] Published: 07-14-03 Updated: 07-14-03
Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: 07-15-03 Title: Chapter 1: Victorias Secret

I love this story and I really appreciate you posting it and sharing it with us:) Keep it coming:)

Guilty Secrets by jasmine32 Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Ororo has some naughty fantasies about a certain 'bad boy', but what happens when he learns her secret:o
Categories: General NC-17
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2368 Read Count: 12660
[Report This] Published: 07-22-03 Updated: 09-03-03
Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: 09-04-03 Title: Chapter 1: Guilty Secrets

Whoa:) That's was hot, hot, hot...WooHoo!! Please say it aint over, please. Pari

Overpowering by StormyAngel Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 62]
Summary: Set in Ultimate X-Men. Logan gets a rather surprising greeting on his first day at the mansion, from a certain snow haired goddess and that's only the beginning to their unique encounters :-)
Categories: General NC-17
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12428 Read Count: 33676
[Report This] Published: 07-28-03 Updated: 12-07-09
Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: 10-18-09 Title: Chapter 7: You Win

Oh please write more, like RIGHT NOW!! That was so hot and good and Mmmmmm!!

Author's Response: Thanx for all the support and sorry it took so long for me to update. I've got a few chapters I'm gonna upload, it won't take that long this time I promise. Thanx again! :-)

Dream by TigerStorm Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Someone in the X-Mansion is having dreams about someone they never expected. Will the dream come true?
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 726 Read Count: 6769
[Report This] Published: 08-18-03 Updated: 09-10-03
Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: 09-11-03 Title: Chapter 1: Dream

Too cute for words, very playful and so how I picture their relationship being like:) Please continue;)

Destiny by jasmine32 Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Two of the x-Men are about to take the plunge...
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16351 Read Count: 14820
[Report This] Published: 09-02-03 Updated: 10-29-03
Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: 10-29-03 Title: Chapter 6: Destiny prt6 The Honeymoon

Whew...:) Yer right Nc-17 not high enough:) That wasawesome, can I have my honeymoon night be like that, with Logan included...lol. Another great chappy, come on with the rest, and glad to see you were able to finally post here:) Pari

Summary: Jean is back and lot's of things are happening at the mansion.
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6313 Read Count: 21514
[Report This] Published: 09-03-03 Updated: 09-05-03
Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: 09-05-03 Title: Chapter 1: The News

The word is Constructive critism, constructive being the opt word:) I agree that the story had some grammar no-no, but go read my fics, or any other fic here and you will find the same. I personally never get a beta reader, and there are some errors, but it's still readble and enoyable, I hope:) The point is this author is putting his or her work out here, possibly their first fic, and there's no need to scare them off with sarcastic comments, it's not helpful guys. Which just made me think of a new rule here, no 'Flaming'. Why not offer or suggest a beta reader:) I liked the story and it's obvious to me that this is a young new writer. And I'd like to offer to the author my help, I'll be happy to read over your fics and help you out before you post it. Please don't let anyone's comments discourage you from writing, Believe me I used to get flamed alot, not everyone will like what you write or how you write, but what I did was use what others said to write better. Granted it may not always be what you want to hear, but even 'flames' can be helpful:) My email is parisian@spikeluver.com (Or you can just click my name and send me a 'comment'). I meant what I said I'd be happy to beta and help you out:) Pari

Stormy weather by chacreed Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 4]
Summary: A great song by Ella Fitzgerald, Ro, Lo and chocolate ice cream, what more can I say?
Categories: Ficlets/Songs/Poems
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1029 Read Count: 2898
[Report This] Published: 09-04-03 Updated: 09-04-03
Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: 09-04-03 Title: Chapter 1: Rain and Ice cream

I agree 100%, this is very cute and well done to the song:)

Summary: RoLo romance, but not yet...*shruggs* lol Movieverse
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3829 Read Count: 8026
[Report This] Published: 09-04-03 Updated: 10-08-03
Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: 09-05-03 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Uhmm....where's the rest....Hmmmmm, you tease you:) I can't wait, and some call me the queen of cliffhangers :rolls eyes: lol Great start:) Pari

Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: 09-09-03 Title: Chapter 2: You'll Never Be Alone

Yeah...and then what happened....How is he gonna make sure she's never alone again...Huh? Tell me, yer killing me......:whines:

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01-01-70 Updated: 01-01-70
Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: 09-06-03 Title: None

Hot Dog!!! Whew...and this is your first attempt..I'm impressed. There's only one problem too dnag short..so go..get to writing, I need an update and soon;) Great job

Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: 09-07-03 Title: Chapter 1: Entry 2

Ok are you like reading my freaking mind..I think of Logan the same way:) Another great entry, ok now go do another one;) Pari