Oh thank you Pari! Thank you! I am so relieved! It's almost pathetic at how relieved I am. I have to say your plot twist with Emma captivated me but it made me so angry with Logan I felt like snatching him out of the story and slapping him around a bit! Now with this new revelation I am so ready for the next chapter! I don't keep tabs like I should so I got to read two chapters instead of one which was wonderful but I do hope you update soon.

Ah! I really liked this. The line - I think I shivered a little - really made me laugh. I like the whole premise, very nice. Btw, I noticed this was in W6C's favorites and as I sometimes am away from the Realm for months at a time, or was, I didn't always catch good stories when they were posted. I'm glad I took a peek!

Girl, you're writing some seriously good stuff and I am not kidding! This story was exceptionally good. No, it was exquisite. Just so real, so well thought out and so believable. You made me feel every emotion that Ororo was feeling and what's more you made me feel Logan's odd emotions in this chapter. Very brilliantly done! Now I saw this at the RoLo Realm but I don't usually read 'adult' stuff so I didn't read it there and thought let me check out Digital Tempest's live journal and see what's up only I found I couldn't review and returned to the Realm to review AND found you had more chapters here! I've been up all night but I couldn't stop reading your stories. I hope you update as quickly as possible. You are now officially one of my favorite authors!

I wondered what was up with all these stories with pregnant women! The details were so exact that I thought, 'Hmm, she must have first hand experience.' And now I see my instincts were right! I'm very happy for you. Now you'll have to get all your stories finished because free time is hard to find once the little ones start cooing. So! You know I loved this chapter.

Though I reviewed this at fanfiction.net I had to tell you again how much I enjoyed this story. I'm really hoping for a sequel but if you have none planned the ending, though sad, is still full of hope. This is probably my favorite story by you. Nicely done.

A fun note to end on. It’s good to have you back. I’ll be looking forward to this sequel, quite different dynamics and many possibilities.

Must agree with you about the book Memoirs of a Geisha – wonderful read. But I wonder about the choice of having Chinese actresses play the Japanese Geisha’s. It's something I hadn't thought about despite knowing the lead was Chinese but then it was mentioned on the BBC a few weeks ago. The Japanese people are not pleased and they shouldn't be. Myself, I was crestfallen when I thought about it because I was looking forward to the movie. Sadly It reminds me of the ‘olden’ days when Blacks/African Americans, Mexican's, Asian's and Indians were portrayed by White people as if it didn't matter, as if real people of color were not good enough, or articulate enough or pretty enough and that rankles a bit.

Maybe because I'm old enough to remember when Dianah Carroll (sp?) starred in Julia and how wonderful it was to have someone that looked like my mother and my family on TV. Here we have commercials and television shows with all races and sexualities and yet it seems Hollywood's still stuck in that ‘they all look alike’ phase. Maybe I’m just too particular but that bothers me. It bothers me enough so that I won't be going to see the movie. Hmm, guess it rankles a whole lot more than a bit. Sorry for the rant. Man, Julia was sooooo long ago! :D

I reviewed at one of the Yahoo groups but wanted to review here as well when I saw this delightful story was here as well. I still think this is refreshing!

Ah, Digital Tempest what can I say? I just read this story today and about half way through it I just had to pause and let the simplicity and freshness and sheer excellence of it seep into my stunned mind. After finishing it I had to read it again. It was that good. The characters all act as they should at their young age, teasing and curious all at the same time. The way you had Scott and Bishop teasing the 'twins' was a riot and it's just what silly boys do! LOL! You've captured all of their personalities superbly. It was also nice to see you'd added Maggott and Rory. Who thinks to add Rory and poor Japheth to a story nowadays? I think I liked this story so much because it rang so true and brought me back to my own summers at that age thinking about boys and still being innocent. Maybe that's how best to describe this story. It's full of innocence and that's what makes it so powerful. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. and I hope you update soon! I'm glad I can still find your RoLo stories and thankful for Pari and this site so I have the privilege and enjoyment of still reading your excellent work. Now as stupendous as this story is please don't forget Ororo Munroe, Vampire Hunter! You know how I felt about that story when you were posting on fanfiction.net and the horror I felt when I thought you'd abandoned it! :D I did not mean to write my own little book here but your story really left a strong impression on me and, hey, you're the first review I've given for a story on this site!