Maybe now I can post a review. My browser seriously sucks.

I got a dedication. Oh yeah! m/ Detail = awesome. You really did a good job of painting everything out for me. It was gritty and raw. Definitely like the hardcore!Storm. Update "BnP" *cough* Sorry got something caught in my throat.

I believe we have another winner. You are amazing, I just can't get enough of your stories. Fan-tastical!!!!

As always I am in awe of such talent. I was drawn in and thoroughly entranced from the get go. I love a dangerous Ororo and I can see where she'd be attracted to Vic. You added Shinobi, who I stll love even though I made him an ass in my story, and I hope we see more of him. I can not wait for an update, so stop reading the reviews and get typing!

Just got home and read your email about your story. You know that I really like it so far.I really like the atmosphere that you painted. I can definitely see this multilevel club filled with rich people who can get any and everything their heart desires. I sort of see Sebastian Shaw standing on like this podium overlooking everything with this shit-eating grin on his face because that's the way he always seemed to me. I also liked how you portrayed Ororo. You always give her a unique flair as a writer. You add something new and complex to her character. I know you said you got her sass from Ultimate but I still imagine her with the 'tude she sported during her mohawk days (hahaha-that makes me think of that AFI song-I Wanna Get A Mohawk (But Mom Won't Let Me Get One). She was really sassy then. I still think you could've used a more hardcore song for a bondage club than Party in the Morgue. ;) Out of all that loud shit you listen to you pick PITM? I am shocked.