Date: 08-01-16 - 11:28 am Title: Chapter 1
I really appreciate the author's approach how to define sex in real life. I was little bit depressed before reading this post but to visit this site http://topaussiewriters.com/ has now encourage me how can I complete my task now.
[Report This]Date: 01-16-16 - 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 14
HE TREATED HER LIKE A DOLL
sorry for the capslock haha. I came back to read this again, finally, because I remembered how much I liked it. (I also remember it hitting too close to home, which is why I hadn't come back to reread it after the first time)
I love this fic. It's drama that's relatable and intense without being hammy and soap operay. And though I'm on this site for RoLo, I'm really happy that their being a "couple" here takes a back seat.
Lovely lovely stuff. I miss your work!
[Report This]Date: 06-28-13 - 02:59 am Title: Chapter 14
I know how Storm feels. Been there done that, don't wanna go back. Great chapter, and thanks for finally revealing WHY she left.
Author's Response: Yeah, it's always sad when kids feel so strongly towards their parents. I'm sorry you had a similar experience- that's really tough hearing. Check out Kim Daul, she's the major inspiration for this story. And haha, I had to eventually.
[Report This]Date: 06-28-13 - 02:48 am Title: Chapter 13
Finally!!!
Date: 06-22-13 - 12:19 am Title: Chapter 14
Awwh I loved Ro's and Logan's date. I hope Jean and Scott will attempt to understand what she was going through.
Author's Response: Hahah! I'm glad you liked it. I thought it was cute. Hopefully they'll understand Ororo. THANKS FOR THE REVIEW
Date: 06-21-13 - 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 13
Poor Ro it seems like everyone has just about given up on her.
[Report This]Date: 06-19-13 - 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oh, aw, Logan being protective is cute. At first I was like ?? Logan, being considerate and taking her out on an early morning date?? And then his quip about making it up in the car came up and I grinned. Stay classy, Logan.
That said, I can imagine Scott and Jean not taking this big reveal seriously (gosh I hope I'm wrong but at the same time that would make for great drama), since on face value it could seem like a shallow reason. But this is a curious chapter where I can actually claim being able to relate to Ro's experiences here. So I don't blame her.
Great job, as always!
Author's Response: Lol I had to break up all the bad with something good, otherwise this story would be too drama heavy. That being said, I like drama so their reactions to Ororo's answer can't be perfect. But yeah, I drew a lot of inspiration from Kim Daul (like, so much of the dialouge is her.) And I'm really sorry that you could relate but it's nice to know it's believable. THANKS FOR THIS AWESOME REVIEW
[Report This]Date: 06-18-13 - 11:24 am Title: Chapter 13
yells a lot because all this would all be fixed if they just spoke to each other!!!
Haha, I love all this emotional tension. I feel for Ororo, of course, but man she isn't helping the situation by being so tightlipped and flippant about things. At the same time, I'm sure she's gone through issues of her own that Scott and Jean need to understand! (Which they might/should, if she spoke about them??)
Logan's got the right idea though. She needs some space and a non-involved party. Then she needs to come clean.
I can't wait for the next bit! Don't feel bad about the slow updates, they're great and worth the wait, in my opinion. :)
Author's Response: Some people are terrible at communicating! Haha! But yeah, she needs to stop being so head strong and just bend a little. Which she does... And I really feel badly about not updating quickly. It's frustrating because the longer I'm away, the less I'll update. THANKS FOR THE REVIEW.
[Report This]Date: 06-16-13 - 02:58 am Title: Chapter 12
I liked Logan's thoughts. Best part of this chapter. If only he could' e secretly rubbed his hands together, that would've made my day.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 05-22-13 - 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 11
Wow! What in the world did Charles do??
Author's Response: Haha! Hasn't the tune changed from "What did she do?" to "what did Charles do?" So who's really to blame for what happened? SO MANY OPTIONS.
Date: 05-20-13 - 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 11
Whoa...
Author's Response: Emotions die hard, y'know?
Date: 05-16-13 - 04:23 am Title: Chapter 10
Worth the wait! Especially since I'm only getting to these two chapters now, haha.
It's not easy to write conflict, but you managed it really well! Also, congrats on passing the Bechdel Test! This fic of yours is now officially 5000x more awesome.
Excellent teasing, though. Mean, but it keeps us hanging and now I'm itching to know what happens next! You're such a great storyteller. :)
Author's Response: Really? I wasn't even aware I wrote a conversation like that... Didn't feel like it so I'll just take your word for it. I swear the next chapter will illuminate some things for you. This is gonna be a beast of a story, so thank you for the compliment! I appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 05-14-13 - 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh you are a tease! It look like I was about to get my answer as to why Ororo left. I think I caught a glimps of it in her comment to Jean, but I can't wait to find out more. Or why she was gone so long and what she was up to while she was away. And what changed her from the Ororo that Jean and Scott once knew. Also I sense a weird tension between her and Scott that is different from the resentment between her and Jean.
PS I hope college life is treating you well and you are meeting LOTS of hot guys!!
Author's Response: I'm promising that the very next chapter is going to illuminate things a little more. And how curious that you pick up on tension! Lol, I guess the pool chapter is to blame and stuff... Thank you for liking this story! It means a lot. (PS: I met a really nice guy and I think we might get serious so thank you for your sweet well wishing.)
Date: 05-05-13 - 04:53 am Title: Chapter 9
Oh snap!!! Sheesh what on earth made Storm leave and make those two besties enemies?
Author's Response: I will reveal the reason soon enough. This story won't go on forever.
Date: 05-05-13 - 04:47 am Title: Chapter 8
ouch
Author's Response: I agree, nothing worse than getting caught in the act.
Terms of Service | Rules | Contact Us |
Skin created by Kali