[Report This]Date: 03-19-14 - 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 7
Ahhh, my heart. Ow. That was painful to read. I couldn't decide if I wanted to smile at the mental picture of a tiny Ororo climbing into Charles' lap, or cry at all this imagery of the sun setting and Ororo being so convinced that everything is going to go terribly. (and that's realistic isn't it? that reaction, to have a hard time finding the strength to have faith in the people she loves and trusts.)
I hope this isn't the end! I hope you have more. I normally don't like teenager!AUs like this, but this is just written so honestly and simply and thoughtfully that I can't help but love it all the more. I know it's close to a year since last update, but I'll wait for however long it takes! Since this is the best RoLo I've read on the Realm in a long time!
[Report This]Date: 03-19-14 - 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh god how did I ever not read this before? This is simply worded and intimately sweet because of it. I love it so far, and I'm only three chapters in. I had to pause to review because this chapter is so so so wonderful, especially because it just feels like something that could and would happen (and not, as Ororo points out in her introspection, like what happens on TV. Gahhhh. Gah. I CAN'T WORDS. I love this. This is great.)
[Report This]Date: 04-06-13 - 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 6
Wow. Jean. Ro is really counting on you to be a true friend and not judge her. Everyone makes mistakes. However, I felt both their pains true signs of a great friendship. I hope it can be repaired.
Author's Response: eh... alright: I totallt get what you're saying but finding a friend is pregnant is SUPER confusing. But like my friendship with that girl, I stuck around because getting pregnant doesn't automatically make you an entirely different person. So I SWEAR they will be reunited. Does that count as a spoiler? Lol whoops.
Date: 04-02-13 - 03:09 am Title: Chapter 6
Wow, a little tense, but definitely realistic. Keep going!
Author's Response: thank you!
[Report This]Date: 03-25-13 - 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
It's about time Ro. All that pressure she put on herself and look what happened: Logan accpets her pregnancy. Love it.
Author's Response: he's got no choice but to, right? And the pressure is understandable- she's young and didn't expect it. THANKS FOR THE REVIEW.
[Report This]Date: 03-25-13 - 01:38 am Title: Chapter 4
FINALLY!!! Now I wanna know what Logan wants to do about it? If he breaks up with her.... Wait, he ain't gonna do that. Never mind. :
And, you're welcome, girl! Always happy to leave one.
Author's Response: yeah... he just doesn't strike me as the time to not be around for his kid. he's no deadbeat. Well, it's nice seeing reviews and knowing people are there to care.
Date: 03-24-13 - 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love this story please post soon
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it! Makes me feel special! I am gonna try and get another post in by-or before- Wednesday. But seriously, THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW.
Date: 03-24-13 - 01:28 am Title: Chapter 3
Aw! Storm just tell someone!!! You'll feel a million times better!
This feels so real! Keep writing!
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you're into it. She's gonna have to tell someone soon, right? She's gonna start showing eventually. THANKS FOR THE REVIEW!
Date: 03-24-13 - 12:16 am Title: Chapter 3
Wow. I have to say I really like the way you intertwine how Ororo reacts to questions outwardly and yet reveal her feelings, which often oppose her outward reaction, to us as you go along; without missing a beat or confusing the situation. Nicely done.
W6C
Author's Response: I am so glad the thoughts are translating properly. I wanted them in italics but can't figure out how to do that, nor do I have the patience to spend time trying to figure out how.
Update Day in the Park. It was seriously the first fic I read on this site and it holds a special place in my heart.
THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW.
[Report This]Date: 03-24-13 - 12:11 am Title: Chapter 2
Hmm... can't say I'm happy to hear Ro thinking about ways to harm her unborn child... but it's realistic in her mixed emotions and not wantin' her life to change over such a life-long unplanned event. Hope she starts to wonder about Logan's feelings in the situation... he has the right to know. But I'm sure Ororo will realize that herself. She's a good woman.
Nicely written and an easy read.
Thanks- W6C
Author's Response: I'm glad the mixed emotion thing is coming across as realistic and not too much! I was honestly worried about that... And she does consider his feelings, she's just wrapped up in the reality.
I am SO glad this isn't confusing because I have yet to figure out how to use italics without having it go over the entire piece. (Does that make sense? I only want italics for a small portion-like a thought.) THANK YOU FOR REVIEWING. SERIOUSLY.
[Report This]Date: 03-23-13 - 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice.
Had a little time to kill so I thought I'd come check out the RR Twitter thing and found this. Intriguing start... I was drawn to the "beginning of Kendall" plot... can't wait to see how this develops. Nice job so far. - W6C
Author's Response: I am HYPERVENTILATING! W6C reviewed my piece!
[Report This]Date: 03-23-13 - 02:09 am Title: Chapter 2
Well, I'm against abortion because it's pretty much murder to me. Anyway, despite the difference in our views, I do like the chapter. I live how she feels conflicted, and it seems REAL! Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Too each their own. But I am glad you appreciate it's relevance in the story; I thought it would flesh her out a bit because I hate when people write teen pregnancies (or just unplanned pregnancies) with total acceptance and joy. It's so phony. THANKS FOR THE REVIEWd84;
[Report This]Date: 03-21-13 - 01:17 am Title: Chapter 1
So she IS pregnant? That would mean she passed the pregnancy test. Just wanting to clarify.
Author's Response: Yes, she's pregnant. But if you're eighteen and about to go to college and you find out you've got a bun in the oven, you're gonna feel like you failed, too
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