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Date: 12-31-13 - 12:38 pm Title: Closures

That was truly a rollercoaster ride of emotions. My goodness but I loved Rogue's character. Nice twists and turns and I loved the sappy ending.

Reviewer: bee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-13-11 - 03:57 pm Title: Closures

Aaaah. Your work is always an emotional rollercoaster. Two chapters ago, I feared that you would end with drama and a bittersweet ending more bitter than sweet. I'm glad that they got a happy ending, because they definitely deserved one, after everything.

I have to say, that these last few chapters felt a little rushed. I wish we knew what exactly went down with Emma, Scott, Logan and Ororo. I have an inkling, but some clarity would've been appreciated. And some lead up to their wedding would've been nice - I'm not syaing entire chapters, though! Like, maybe a paragraph or two more leading up to their "happily ever after" would've been good.

... Still, that ending was very, very sweet. It's just like Logan to determine the number of kids he wants by the number of players needed for hockey.

Reviewer: anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-24-10 - 06:08 pm Title: Closures

Great story not overdone with all the characters and their point of view_ I truly enjoyed it!!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01-08-10 - 08:14 pm Title: Closures

Sorry did not like this story at all!!!! It was way too heavy and sad. The entire time I was reading it it made me depressed. I love ROLO and found this to be to shattering to their pairing. Even with the ending it was just too little too late!!!

Reviewer: shan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-01-08 - 12:48 am Title: Insecurities

thanks for the dash of Remy... he too is one of my fave x-men. great chapter! really put the RoLo in perspective.

Reviewer: shan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-01-08 - 12:06 am Title: Fantasy

omgosh! you know what i was thinking while reading the whole chapter...until the very last sentence. *gasp*

Nice! can't wait to read the following chapters!!

Reviewer: irish_sunset Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-26-06 - 07:45 pm Title: Conversations

Ororo is really fucking pissing me off! I mean I am a diehard 'Ro fan, but hell this story and specially this chapter is making me change my opinion. Get the fuck over it Storm..he slept with Jean, but he came to you to confess that he couldn't do it anymore.....(Nice job with evoking these emotions in me keep up the good work!)

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-25-06 - 12:11 pm Title: Fate

Rogue is a bitch..she needs to get off her high horse

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-25-06 - 03:02 am Title: Insecurities

I like Remy and his Stormy...there is a closeness between them borders on something more but better left where it is. Hoping to see Remy and Logan coming to blows(?)

Author's Response: Hmm. Even though I am not a big fan of Remy's, I still use him because of two special ladies, Storm and Rogue. Using Rogue is almost as a prerequisite for me as is using Storm. And except for one fic of mine (X-ed, the movie half), I usually tend to pair her with Remy, and vice versa.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-25-06 - 02:53 am Title: Trust

Although my review mean nothing in the greater scheme of thing being how this is a finished story I just though I would anyway. This chapter wasn't "oh my gosh" but it was cute seeing everything through Marie's eyes

Author's Response: Every Review matters, even ones after the completion of the story. After all, it is the reviews that are the only 'payment' we free-writers get. And who knows, why ideas can we from a reader's POV. Glad u liked the 'cuteness'.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-25-06 - 02:37 am Title: Fantasy

That was fucking (excuse the crude word...it just seemed like the perfect word) amazing!

Author's Response: Yup. It was fucking....wasn't it!! (*Winks*)

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-04-06 - 02:33 pm Title: Closures

I loved your story! I loved all the angst between Ro and Lo. Very very good story. You wrote Kitty, Jubilee & Rogue very well, their interactions always made me chuckle. The end was a bit sappy, but hey they deserved it after all you've put them trough. ;) The whole Emma whiping out their memories was a bit weird. It didn't make too much sense, but it served its purpose in the story. Also at one point i almost felt sorry for Jean, i tend to wanna hate Jean in ROLO stories. But that's compleetly subjective. *goes of to read other stories*

Author's Response: I almost didn't write this ending...but as you said, seeing what they went through I thought they deserved it. Well, the readers went from hating Jean and feelign sorry for Scott to the other way round. You never know what comes next.

Reviewer: Panther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-03-06 - 04:44 pm Title: Youth

ROFL! This chapter is absolutely hilarious! *goes off to read the rest of the story*

Author's Response: Thanks. This was the only 'light' chapter in this entire fic. Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-17-06 - 02:17 am Title: Closures

Logan and Ororo with a daughter,son and new baby on the way.And all is right in the X-man universe. When Logan and Ororo are together in love anything is possible.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing (all the chapters)!! Love to have readers like you!!

Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-17-06 - 12:23 am Title: Chance

Rogue and Ororo have made up as friends. What will Ororo do about Logan? Logan's daughier?

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