First let me say I love this concept. I love the mixing of Stargate with X-Men so I really enjoyed this story. Second, I think it’s too short. And last I definitely think it demands a sequel. I want to know what happens now that they’re going to get together unlike with the real Stargate where Jack took off leaving poor Sam abandoned more or less! I won’t get into that though.

Anyway, it's going to be a while before I can get caught up on the rest of your stories and all the other's here but hopefully by next weekend I'll have reviews galore.

Oh my, i think i need to read everything again from the beginning. It's like i blinked and it was all over. gotta say, happy she's not with forge though.

Author's Response: Thank you Rhapsady I wrote it as if it were an episode of Stargate, being I am a huge fan of the series. I am glad you liked it, means alot.

Well i think it's pretty good so far.

i really hope it deosn't take too long to get them together. love the intereaction between mariko and logan.

Author's Response: I promise Rhapsody it will not. this story is going to have about 3 or 4 ACTS so to speak. I need to finish my Opera.

A very nice beginning, and very nicely presented. This is certainly an original setting for these characters, but you've made it work. My interest has definitely been piqued, so I really hope that you continue the story and update soon. Cheers!