Reviews For ...Until it's Gone
You must login () to review.
Reviewer: Lady Dreamwalker Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-20-06 - 04:53 pm Title: Choices

Oh windrider, you are one wicked woman. How can you do this to me? Ororo and Logan is the couple, they can't be with anyone else it's an universal truth, and yet you have me wavering. Panther is too damn sexy, wonderful, charming and all other positive adjectives!
I was first afraid you'd make him a monster in disguise that woud force 'Ro to marry him, now I wish you had. This is so infuriating. I dunno what leg I'm gonna stand on. RoLo or Ro/T'Cha? Please, can't he be a superscrull in disguise? :P

But there is actually a glimmer of hope. I do love Ororo, but I don't think she deserves T'Challa. She doesn't love him, and that is reason enough she shouldn't have accepted his proposal. She may come to love him (what sane woman wouldn't?) but until that moment, she doesn't deserve him. I can't believe that was what her heart told her. I think she went to him, because she really couldn't hurt him. Ofcourse he would be able to please her (that devil could give a nun multiple orgasms). You see what you have done to me? gah I'm so torn. And ur rendition of Logan really don't support the Ro/Lo bit.

He payed for a blowjob? Unforgivable! Like Panther said, how could he sleep with 'Ro and then go to a whore? Idiotic man! Gaah, I'm rambling.

You must know that ur one hell of a writer when you are able to stir up such emotions in readers. Your characters seems soo real, and I can just see they scens you paint up. Wonderful!


Author's Response: **blushing profusely** Wow. I mean WOW. thank you soooooo much. Ah, but 'Ro does love him--perhaps not the same way she loves Logan, but she does love T'Challa. (Like you said, what sane woman wouldn't). Logan isn't in a happy place right now, so paying for a blowjob while shitfaced drunk (though stupid) was his way of trying to prove something. Dumbass, I know. Again, thank you for the wonderful review, it made my face hurt I grinned so wide!! :D

Reviewer: Starnoble03 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-20-06 - 04:43 pm Title: Choices

This was perfect. I love this. Everything is working out nicely. I am so happy that Ororo chose T'Challa. For a minute I thought that she was going to choose Logan....seeing how her new husband gave her a way out. It's obvious that Ororo and Logan have an extremely stong Soul Tie, one that I can relate to on some crazy personal level, and the way you described how they work through that individually is great. What was up with Dora talkin about “He is certainly gifted in the arts of pleasure. Our Queen will be a happy Queen” ? Did I miss something or did at somepoint T'Challa and Dora get freaky? She sounds like she knows this from experience. I'll have to go back a few chaps to make sure. If so All I can say is that the Drama continues, cause If I had a thing for the King: As fine as he is and now he's got a new woman I would hatin' on Storm real hard. Especially if I was living in the same place as she was.

Your writing technique is very descriptive and I love the images I get when I am reading it. I almost feel like I should be seeing a graphic novel to go along with the words that I am reading. As expected T'Challa rocked Ororo's world She has a Fine, rich and thoughful husband, with 11 more phycical attributes going for him, so I hope she doesnt go an mess it up now. I love the way that you have developed his character I feel like I know him....and I want him for myself (T'Challa).

Anyway just wanted to say again Keep up the good work I appreciate the great Drama, and I cannot wait to see what happens next. PLS UPDATE SOON!


Author's Response: LMAO. T'Challa is becoming quite a wanted man it seems. ;) With all of his **ahem** attributes, it's not hard to imagine why. As for the Dora's comment. The Dora Milajai were T'Challa's wives in waiting--part of his harem, so i'm certain she knows from personal experience. Not recent however, T'Challa is nothing if not dedicated to Ororo. And her to him. An update will be forthcoming. ;) Thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: ebony8302eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-20-06 - 01:28 pm Title: Choices

I am just so stunned that it turned out that way, but I love it! I want see logan suffer a little for being so dumb. I am not sure that I want them to end up together in this fic. I am looking forward to seeing how the other x-men react to ororo's marraige mainly those that are really close to her. Job done and I can't wait to see the update for this one. I was glad to see this chapter up so soon after the last one. oh yeah 11 inches oh if only! Sigh

Author's Response: LOL. That eleven inches again, eh? Hahaha. Wow. That made an impression. T'Challa is a well endowed, sexually gifted boy. Hmmm....if only....*ahem* what were we talkin' about? Oh yes, update soon! XOXO for the review!!

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-20-06 - 09:22 am Title: Choices

I just don't know how I feel. This story has me confused...that's for dang sure. I am a RoLo shipper all the way, but Logan is just a little too stupid in this story for me to completely wish he and 'Ro get together. But at the same time I don't think T'Challa will ultimately make her happy. Darn you Logan. I just don't see this situation getting any better...please make it better Windrider, PLEASE! I'm begging you. I REALLY don't want to like T'Challa, and I REALLY don't want to hate Logan, but I'm finding both of those things really hard to do at the moment. :::passes out from the strain:::

Author's Response: :::Pours cold water on JG's head::: You gonna make it? This story has a mind of its own, so we'll see where it heads together. With all the wonderful feedback i'm getting I'm sure updates will be coming soon!!! As always, lovely muse, thank you so much for taking the time to review. It is most assuredly appreciated. :)

Reviewer: Raeyna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-20-06 - 08:02 am Title: Choices

It took forever to get the gumption to write a review and another forever to actually send it. But this time it didn't take so long. Be prepared, it's an emotionally long one....

gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasp...cough..cough..cough (loses breath)

NOOOOOO..a gagillion O's...OOOOO!!! Why, oh why do I torture myself like this! Because I'm a loyal reader, that's why (...talks to self...ok, just keep reminding yourself that. She's given you excellent RoLo in the past, and maybe, just maybe if you hang on long enough she will again). All this torture I put myself through better be worth it. I mean, I knew they weren't going to get together in the next chapter but this is...this is...aaaaaahh! I'm so grrrrr mad I can't speak. Wait, no, yes I can, so can give you a piece of my mind! Oh, crap, now that means I actually gotta read it, not just scan the thing (yeah, I read the end first, then scan the rest, then read it whole, so sue me). Hold on a minute, or a couple....(goes back to READ the chapter)

....make that one hour. OH MY GOD!! I had to stop a couple of times, calm down, then force myself to read, to the point I had to open my lids with my fingers a couple of times. I'll give you one guess as to which moments those were. And I was not happy, nosirreebob! That chapter was sooo disturbing on sooo many levels. And didn't anyone tell you, or Wolvie, that two wrongs don't make a right. Now they're BOTH screwing other people and not each other. Well, at least you didn't have him do it with Jean. That would have been just cruel. WHEW!! But still, the fact that Ro was doing it with Mr. Housepet; bleachhhy. Yes I read the WHOLE thing. Those parts were all kinds of yuck. But I will admit, as much as that chapter did disturb me, I thought it was a well written chapter, to the point that it made me cry a couple of tears (I kid you not, real tears!). I cried when Ororo realized that she loved Mr. Housepet. That meant no more RoLo (sob...). My heart shattered; I could still hear it (crack, shatter...). Then I wanted to boink Wolvie's head a couple of million times with a mallet when he realized, too late, that he loved his fair haired best friend. Ohhhh, the irony of it all! And I'm still majorly, mucho peeved at you for making Mr. Housepet a good person. Why couldn't you make him some a$$hole. But noooo, you had him forgive Ro and be a nice guy and all. And then you had to give him an ELEVEN inch long thingy! You had to make him be a nice guy with an ELEVEN inch long thingy!! And FOURTH orgasm for Ro, with HIM! What is wrong with you! (...gasp...) I think I'm having a heart attack from the outrage of it all (clutches heart), but wait, my hear shattered (make that an empty chest). I thought you were for RoLo!! (shakes fist in the air wildly) You better write Wolvie as having a bigger thingy than Mr. Housepet, or else....or else....ok, I can't think of anything right now, but when I do, let me assure you that it will not be pleasant. There, that's my piece of my mind. Now get your butt cheeks on a chair in front of the computer and start typing!! This time with some RoLo in it!!

(deep breath.....and relax....and imagine) Okay, I'm in a far away land, Egypt, sunbathing by the river of De Nial, and a couple of miles away Storm and Wolvie are together and happy and no Mr. Housepet exists....
...damnit, reality had to go bite me in the butt.

(bangs head on key board repeatedly) Why do I torture myself, oh why, oh why, oh why........

Oops, you did it again
you played with my mind
and now I'm insane
oh baby baby

If I go to the loony bin, it's all your fault!



Author's Response: **can't breathe....laughing too hard** I--I---Oh my...**wipes eyes** I am SO glad you emerged from lurkdom!! Mr. Housepet? Wow. No T'Challa love from you, eh? LOL. My favorite line of any review ever: "You had to make him be a nice guy with an ELEVEN inch long thingy!!" You know, now that I've had a couple of your reviews, I just don't think I can live without them. See what you've gone and done. Now I'm a review whore. Nice. If you go to the loony bin, I'll send you cookies and diapers. I know how it gets. :P

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-20-06 - 07:52 am Title: Choices

OMG!
You had me on the edge of my seat the whole time!
What shocked me was that I wasn't able to decide which outcome I would prefer, heh! I'm a die-hard RoLoer! And here I sit being okay with Ro and T'Challa. Wow! How did you do that?! LOL! *scratches head* I'm confused :)

When Logan finally realized that he loves her I was like "Gee, that took quite some time to get through your thick skull! Now move yer ass and tell her!"
On the one hand I was hoping for Logan to get to her in time. I was hoping for Ro to make her decision and leave. But then again... there was T'Challa. Opening up to her completely, telling her that he knew about her and Logan, that she still had a way out of this, still had a choice.
Then she went to go to his room and I was like "Oh god! NO! Don't go there..." But it all felt so right! Damn!

I even feel that here (and by "here" I mean in this story and this story only! You hear that MARVEL?!) T'Challa deserves to be with Ro. Even more so than Logan (Is that really me writing this?! OMG... I need help!).

Hhm... I see this story isn't over yet... So, what's next? Another twist, another turn to make me even more confused? LOL

Damn, what did you do to me?! LOL I'm a RoLoer by heart but don't really feel like one right now. omg... *feels the urge to draw something RoLo-like*

Author's Response: I am insanely flattered. This Realm is full of die hard RoLoers and for all of you guys to be so actively involved in this story is beyond flattering, it really is. No, the story isn't over yet, and who knows what lies in store... *feels the urge to draw something RoLo-like* OOOOOOhhhh, please do!! :) As always, thank you for the kind words and motivation. Reviews like this are why I write!

Reviewer: ro's-not_a_ho Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-20-06 - 07:09 am Title: Choices

This chapter definitely tops the last one, and I'm so pleased you updated so fast. These reactions are so perfectly in character with each other. And you bring such depth to T'Challa, a character I rarely follow in comics, when many other writers might take the easier option of making him unsympathetic in order to feature Logan more favorably, no matter how much of an idiot he's being.

Each of them recognize their desires, needs, and limitations and you've effectively sold me on the outcome so far WITHOUT shoving either pairing down your readers throats as "meant to be", which Marvel could take a lesson from. Once again, I cannot wait to see the follow up to this and the next inevitable meeting between Logan and Ro. Should it get down to it, I look forward to the Panther being much more challenging toward Wolverine in the future as their last interchange was flawless.

As for this and last chapter's love scenes...*fans self* If you ended this with "And the three of 'em together had hot sweaty jungle sex happily ever after," I certainly wouldn't mind but....eleven inches? Damn.

Author's Response: "And the three of 'em together had hot sweaty jungle sex happily ever after," Hmmmm...there's an idea, lol. Y'know I'm getting alot of feedback on those now infamous 11 inches. That came straight from the comics (the actual length was never specified but it is stated the T'Challa is reeeeeeeeaaaaaalllllllyyyyyy 'gifted' in the anatomy department.) As for T'Challa and Logan, T'Challa can hold his own, so don't espect to see him cowed by Wolverine any time soon. More forthcoming, I promise, as soon as I can. :P

Reviewer: Vixen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-20-06 - 05:41 am Title: Choices

You're killing me slowly, here. :-/

Author's Response: **hugs** sorry. Thank you for the review!!

Reviewer: LaydeRogue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-20-06 - 04:19 am Title: Choices

JEZUS FREAKING GAWD! I can't speak. There is so much i want to say about this chapter. I'm so confused and torn. I don't know, i'm left speechless. All i can think of is ELEVEN Inches! I ain't mad at Ro at all.' Ain't mad one bit.

Author's Response: LMAO....*ahem* Caught that did ya? LOL.

Reviewer: Stormcrow Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-20-06 - 02:34 am Title: Choices

as always I enjoyed it.

Author's Response: And as always, i appreciate the review!! :D

Reviewer: RHapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-20-06 - 02:29 am Title: Choices

goddamnit!

okay, that's all i had to say to the whole ro/lo relationship. But, to the fact that she ended up with T'Challa the way she did and the emotions and feelings behind it, wow. i couldn't hate him. still not rooting for him, but i can't hate him.

I love the way it all worked out. it seemed right... in a way. I love the tension and the fact that T'Challa knew about Ro & Lo. If only he were real and i could somehow bump into him here. **sighs**

Author's Response: Yeah, if only he were real. **sigh** :P

Reviewer: Alex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-17-06 - 03:30 pm Title: Phone calls and Revelations

.....more!

Author's Response: ....okay!

Reviewer: Raeyna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-17-06 - 02:18 pm Title: The Wedding?

My RoLo world as I know it has just blown up (KABOOOOM!!!!). ....Crawls out from under her lurkdom rubble... What's this! Now they're married! One of my most favorite, wonderful, awsome (and other various butt-kissing words that I can't think of right now) RoLo authors writing about the marriage of Ro and some... some..., oh I can't say it. It's a conspiracy to tear RoLo apart in various worlds. Not only does Marvel anally rape my by hinting RoLo in the movie when it really isn't happeing, but it also throws in my face the whole Ororo/what'shisname marriage fiasco. Then there are the various fanfics that had RoLo together at one point but not anymore. And now this!!! Let's now forget your other fic that's in the works. I recall the chapter didn't end happily either. To top it all off, you got me liking this sucker just a tiny, teensy, itsy, little fraction of a bit. I'm a die hard RoLo shipper DAMNIT!! Liking the sucker isn't suppose to happen. But you've done it, and now I'm lost and confused.

Slides to the floor, curls up fetally, and chants brokenly.... I'm a RoLo shipper, I'm a RoLo shipper, I'm a RoLo shipper, I'm a RoLo shipper....

Do you see what you've done?

Author's Response: ROTFLMFAO!!! This is hands down one of the best reviews EVAH! Stay out of lurkdom, enjoy the light!! Because with reviews like this, Raeyna, I just want to plant my ass in my seat and write, write, write--just to see what you'll say. :) **picks up off floor and hugs** All will be well. Somewhere.

Reviewer: modernbard Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-17-06 - 01:02 am Title: The Wedding?

Please, more of this! I love it! I hate the idea of her with anyone else; and I can't believe she said yes. But I wonder just how much more Logan would be willing to fight for her. Hopefully enough that they end up together.

Author's Response: Definitely more of this. This story--started as a one shot--has morphed into it's own living breathing entity and I am just along for the ride. As always, your review and enthusiasm is more than appreciated!

Reviewer: ebony8302eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-16-06 - 10:23 pm Title: The Wedding?

I love this story . It is nice to see this side of these two. I find myself liking whatshisnameagain this time. keep it up I can't wait to see where this goes. I am so hooked I don't know which man to pull for!

Author's Response: LOL. Root for both, that way you're happy either way, right? More very soon, and keep cheering!! It does wonders!

You must login () to review.