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Reviewer: Raeyna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-05-06 - 11:22 pm Title: Tears and Rain

Now would I leave you with a tiny, almost nothing review? N..wait, that's a dumb question, I already did. But would I leave it like that? Ok, now I can say 'no'. Cuz I have this....


HE'S DEAD, HE'S DEAD, HE'S DEAD, HE'S DEEEEEEEAD!! *dances the snoopy dance on T'Challa's grave* Yay!, now Wolvie can swoop in like the hero he is, comfort Ro and care for the baby, and oh, the possibilities! But as much as my face is hurting like hell from smiling so much at his timely demise *cackles manically*, that was EEE-VIL. I mean, you have him marry Ro, be this disgustingly good guy, have her fall in love with him, get me to like this guy just a bit (it's only a bit, like smaller-than-a-speck-of-dust bit mind you, but it was still enough to get me confuzzled and depressed), and then you kill him off! GOD, I love you!! *muah* Even with will all my moanin' and groanin' about Panther I don't think I ever got around to wishing him dead. Or maybe in my subconscious I did but I was too angry to recognize it until now. I think I just wanted them to break it off somehow. See, I told you, confuzzled. But lemme tell you, when I read about his death, I was in shock, seriously, like for a couple of seconds, no movment. And then happiness and joy of course. Am I going to Marvel H-E-Double-Hockey-Sticks for wishing death to one of their characters? Oh yeah. Should I be feeling guilty? Probably. Do I? Nope. That's what they get for introducing this Ro and T'Challa debacle. And that's why we have *insert butt-kissing words 'here' (too many to choose from, wouldn't do you justice anyway)* authors like you to fix it. Have I mentioned that I love you lately?

On with the other parts...
Oh man, when I read the confrontation between Wovie and Ro, I cried, again. What is this, I cry like almost every other chapter. And NO, Bloody Mary has not visited me. Babe, that's you and you're supurb writing. The confession was all Wolvie. No pansy-ass declaration of love for him. “Because I never loved Jean like I love you!” I was rootin' 'you go Wovie, go get im' Ro. And the realization that Ro had of what was happening again to Wolvie; that he love another married woman. Man, that's harsh. Once is enough, but twice? I wouldn't be surprised if Wolvie swore off love all together. Luckily for us, that won't happen, right? 'Course not. And I cried for him, I could literally feel the pain he was going through.

I won't get into the Ro and T'Challa scenario parts, 'cept the countdown and the his demise *cackles maniacally* and the end. I like that, 'the countdown to T'Challa's death'. When I was first reading it, I didn't register what the number's were for, then I'm like, 'oh, that's what those are for'. Yeah, I'm a little slow in the head. I was hurting here, except this time for Ro. To lose another *gulp* loved one *gulp* to a collapsing building. Do I sense a recurring theme here? That's all kinds of brilliant and talented creativity. All the emotions and underlying themes, wow. And finally when she wakes up and later asks Wolvie to do 'something' to her. That was the final blow. Undescribable, what felt. And again with the waterworks. Through all this I was listening to a band called Default and their song Count On Me. I was bawling gallons. The song is just so fitting to what Wolvie and Ro will have to endure. As for the baby, I only hope everything will be resolved before it's borne, if it's born. Mixed feelings on that, won't go into detail.

So, what do you think? This enough for ya? ;P


Actually, when I posted the other one, it was almost midnight and I was really tired, but stayed awake enough to read and post that. I figured I'd spend the next day thinking up and writing a review. When I said it took me forever (well, a couple hours) to write one, I meant it. But real life got in the way. But enough with the excuses. Allow me to grovel at your feet and humbly request a thousand apologies for my grave error.

*grovels at feet* I'm sorry....I'm unworthy....I'm sorry....I'm unworthy....please bring back the cookies and poopey diappies in case I fall of the deep end again....

Author's Response: Yaaaaaaaaaaaaay A true Raeyna review!! Bonus!! The "Snoopy dance" on his grave? Ooooh harsh. (But points for knowing the Snoopy dance!) You cried? Awwww **cackles maniacally** LOL. There is more to come in this story, and thank you , thank you, thank yo for the review and for sticking it out! This and KC coming up. **grins like a loon**

Reviewer: Vixen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-05-06 - 10:13 pm Title: Tears and Rain

You, my friend, are evil indeed.

Author's Response: Mwuahahahahahaahahahahaha **Rubs hands Mr. Burns style**

Reviewer: Lady Dreamwalker Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-05-06 - 04:10 pm Title: Tears and Rain

I should be happy now that he's gone..I should, so why am I not? Because you made me fall in love with him. Hoplessly and insanely. I actually feel some of 'Ro's sorrow. Logan will have a hell to try and help her cope with this. He has been there himself, but Ororo didn't just loose the love of her life (yeah I know now that she loved Panther) but her child too. it's cruel and so unfair. But that is life and you have depicted it in a wonderful, wonderful way. I had to wait for all this to sink before I could write a review.

It should take time before 'Ro let's another man into her life, even Logan. And the way you now write him, I belive he knows that all she need is a friend that will be able to withstand her sorrow and possible anger.

Reading your stories makes me wanna burn my works, really I'm so far behind it' takes me back to kindergarten. You have a beautiful way of writing and bring out the soul of the characters. And you really pull me into your world. When the countdown started I held my breath and I just knew something bad would happen. This is what an author does. Creates a world and makes a reader feel like she is a part of it. You are an author and this is your finest work in my opinion.

I am in awe!

Author's Response: I am speechless. Wow. Thank you, with heartfelt hugs, thank you for this review. It makes me so happy to know that I've grown as writer since last summer, and to have that followed and appreciated, well, I can't describe how happy that makes me, especially from such a wonderful author like yourself. To tell the truth, i fell pretty hard for T'Challa too. **Sigh** More soon. ;)

Reviewer: Stormcrow Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-05-06 - 03:48 am Title: Tears and Rain

that was heart renching Windrider...wow.

Author's Response: Thank you. More emotions and heartfelt chapters to come soon. :D THanks for the review.

Reviewer: salad Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-05-06 - 03:40 am Title: Tears and Rain

OH MY GOD! *tears*..... oh wow... now i really feel bad for T'Challa... oh man.... killing him off under rubbles is sure gonna make Ororo feel more responsible about his death then ever!.... and a BABY! oh man.... u are good u noe that? *still in shock here*.... now Ororo's gonna retreat from life like no other... that only brings hope to Logan... who if he dosent take him i'm gonna seriously think that u dun want them to be together.... even thought they'll come together soon.. right???.. right??.... i just dun think it's fast enough and Logan's just too... SLOW! my god! i never thought i'd say that about Logan!.... first u make me like T'Challa... which is practically impossible cos i totally hate him. and now u got me thinking that Logan's just too slow!... I HATE YOU. but i totally LOVE the story. like nobody's said this before... YOU'RE A FUCKING GENIUS! where do u come up with this stuff anyway??!!!.... MORE MORE MORE!

Author's Response: I love the user name salad. I really do. Okay, moving on to the review... First as always **muah!!** Thank you soooo much. Ro and Logan have a lot of sh...tuff to deal with so as for coming together soon... Depends on how you view it. *tease* You hate me? Harsh, but hey as long as you love the story *grin* I can deal. Genius? Wow. **Blushes** As for where it comes from--it really just sorta comes out. If I plan it I can't write it, so it just comes when it wants, lol.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-05-06 - 02:56 am Title: Tears and Rain

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. I've been waiting with baited breath for this chapter, and you totally delivered. On the one hand I'm thinking "Black Panther's out of the picture...seemingly. Good, right? Right?" At least in the current 616 universe, but in your universe, he's likable. That's what makes me so conflicted.

What I really loved about this chapter is that Logan matured and wised up, not only admitting that he messed up, but also being honest with 'Ro. Loved that. He didn't send her away brokenhearted, he left her to her happiness. Definitely makes up for the puking and prostitutes from the previous installments!

...and I have the funny, suspicious feeling that a) T'Challa ain't dead yet, and b) Logan may be helping 'Ro recover from her injuries? Possibly? Or are you planning something even more delicious diabolical? Can't wait!

Author's Response: Delicious and diabolical. My two favorite compliments. :D T'Challa is very much dead, sadly. As for Logan helping Ro, he'll certainly want to--whether or not she's willing is an entirely different matter--and will be addressed in coming chapters. T'Challa in Marvel is written (now) not to my liking, so I wrote him how I'd want him to be for Ororo. Thanks for coming to care about him--I know I certainly did. ;)

Reviewer: CinnamonBriar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-05-06 - 02:21 am Title: Tears and Rain

Yep, it is your best ever. Damn you for making me like T'Challa....a lot. *glare* You're just too good.........

Author's Response: Thank you, Cinn. Been too long since you've graced me with your musing and wonderful reviews. **hugs** Y'know how I love ya!

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-06 - 10:42 pm Title: Tears and Rain

This was a very moving chapter...wow...i felt so bad for the pain of both Logan and Ororo once everything was finally out in the open...loved how Logan handled himself once it was time for Ororo and T'Challa to leave, and i found myself smiling when Ororo and T'Challa had alone time together because they both truly loved each other.

And the end of the chap? wow...i sat in my room in stunned silence as i reread Ororo's last plea to Logan and felt my heart breaking for her...

I love how your stories are so well-written that they get such emotions out of me...truly beatiful chapter...

Author's Response: **grinning** Thank you very very much. The fact that you felt her heart breaking is such a wonderful compliment to hear. Yes, Ororo and T'Challa really love one another and with him gone, Ororo must find a way to grieve and accept his loss....we'll see if she can. ;)

Reviewer: toyathegr8 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-06 - 06:19 pm Title: Tears and Rain

After i finally got to breathing again i looked up "freaking genius!" and it said.."see windrider!".
This chapter..this chapter..im speechless..my vocabulary lacks the word to describe this beautiful, emotional, fantastic and unexpected piece of work! When you said "Waaaaaaay too much to discuss" you meant it! I...I mean first Logan tells her he loves her then its revealed that she is preganant, then she tells T'Challa then he dies[ protecting her]!! *struggles to catch breath* Now theres questions left unanswered: hows tha baby? Whats gonna be 'Ro's and Logan's relationship dynamic? Will she go back to Africa as queen or no? Was T'Shan gonna do now that the king is gone[ 'Ro outa kick his faux-royal arse!] oh yeah! whats with her leg??
W- is for WOW!!!
0-is for OMG!!!
W-is for WINDRIDER you must update soon! this wonderfully written and insanely addicting
:-B

Author's Response: LMAO! You looked up 'freaking genius"? Nice!! Let's see if I can answer--or at least hint some answers--to your questions. ;) The baby--undecided (not pulling your leg i really am undecided) Ro and Logan's relationship dynamic--complicated. More revealed soon on that. Yes--she will go back to Africa. T'Shan is rebelling, his forces seek to declare war, and with no king Wakanda is extremely vulnerable...Her legs? She can't move them. At all. Hope that whet your appetite for the next installment. ;)

Reviewer: Panther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-06 - 05:25 pm Title: Tears and Rain

Oh...wow...hah....so intense! So emotional! OMG! How can you fit so many things into one little chapter...OMG! He's dead. And i don't like it. I feel so bad for him. And for Roro. And for Logan. I mean...i was crying trought the whole chapter. You have a way of experesing feelings like no one else.

Loving this story is the major uderstatement of the century! It's AMAIZING! And i know these words pop up so often in my reviews of your stories but only about 4 other people have heard it from me. 8Takes deep breath* I think i'll drop a sane review later.

Author's Response: **grabs Panther for bearlike hug** You are a constant inspiration!! You know that right? You better know that!

Reviewer: ebony8302eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-06 - 04:11 pm Title: Tears and Rain

the tears are clouding my vision I have to review in more detail when I don't need anymore kleenex. great chapter. I can't belive it ended this way. alll of the roads the story could take now are mind blowing. I can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: Lots of different roads this story could take. LOTS. Which one I travel? No idea, lol.

Reviewer: playwiththewinds Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-06 - 03:52 pm Title: Tears and Rain

i'm crying!!
that was so sad, i cant believe i'm crying as i'm reading this chapter, but it's so sad
but yet beutiful
and needed to be done for the plot
but god!
truly brilliant instalment
i'm completly absorbed in this story

Author's Response: Awww. **hugs and tissue** If it makes you feel any better, I cried a little too. ;) T'Challa was damn hard to let go.

Reviewer: nickel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-06 - 03:00 pm Title: Tears and Rain

yAY!!! he's gone!!!! oh was that not how i was supposed to react. bah i just hate all this black panther and storm business.. but at least your story gives consolation and acceptance.. beautiful chapter, btw. beautiful.

Author's Response: LMFAO. Thank you for the review--you're the only one (so far) doing the 'ding-dong the cat is gone" dance. More soon, and again, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-06 - 02:53 pm Title: Tears and Rain

I loved it! and not because he dies. I happened to have liked T'Challa- well, the T' You've written. You weren't kidding. that certainly was emotionally driven. It was wonderful and i loved the reconciliation between Logan and Ororo and the way he was there for her at the end.

beautiful. i swear, if you ever doubt your abilities ever again i will beat you mercilessly.

Author's Response: Ok, ok. Good lord....**backs away from Rhaps slowly...**

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-06 - 08:54 am Title: Tears and Rain

Typing as I read.
Oh god, he told her! She knows now! And he's hurting so much it makes me cry! When Ro and T'Challa left the mansion I hated and loved it at the same time. I loved what Logan said to T'Challa, loved what he said to Ro, but hated that both didn't want to let go but had to. I feel for him.

OMG, she's pregnant. And obviously not from the man I want her to be. Gah! This hurts even more. Not that I'm not happy for Ro or something... it's just pure selfishness here, heh. I want my RoLo! *stamps feet on the ground pouting*

Who's this T’Shan guy? Oh... what's that now? A countdown? A bomb perhaps? Must be... Is he going to die? Ro? The kid? ...I feel awful because deep inside I'm hoping for him to die! I'm so horrible! *goes back to reading* Wha... omg, that's for my horrible thoughts! Now Ro's gonna die! - Oh, she's at the mansion now? She's alive! *feels a ton lighter* But what about... him?
Oh ...Logan refuses to tell her. That's not so good I guess. Oh shit. He really IS dead! Uhm... I wish I could take back the thoughts I had before...

Now I'm all confused 'cause even the die hard RoLoer in me is hurting. Hurting for Ro. And for Logan. What a horrible position for him to be in! He loves her, he told her and now he's sitting by her side being the one to tell her her husband just died.
And what's with the baby? Did she lose it, too?

Great, now I'm heartbroken, confused, totally numb inside and feeling completely awful for the thoughts that ran through my mind at the beginning. I wanted him to die and that he did. I never expected it to happen though *yeah, great excuse*. Why am I not feeling anything but bad now? Because she's hurting so much I guess... because she really loved him, because she's carrying his baby. And because I hoped for it to happen! Damnit...

... I want more! I need to know what's with the baby! Need to know what Ro's gonna do now. Logan will be there for her, right? As a friend I mean. That's what she needs now. A friend. Will they find out who's responsible for the bombing? Will Logan gut them? Will Ro fry them? ...

The more this story makes me cry, the more it confuses me, the more it makes me like characters and character pairings I didn't even wanted to think about before, the more I feel for all parties involved, the more it makes me feel bad for having ugly thoughts [...], the more I LOVE it! :D

Author's Response: Aw, Steph, I love ya! This is a wonderful, wonderful review. For a number of reasons, showing how involved you are in the story, and I love that. LOVE that! The fact that you have emotional attachment is the highest compliment you can give, and I thank you (endlessly) for it. More soon, and I hope you enjoy it as much!

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