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Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-06 - 08:40 am Title: Tears and Rain

WHOA WHAT THA FUCK?! you cant kill off the king like that, he's the king!

Author's Response: He was...More soon. (But yeah, he's dead) :(

Reviewer: LaydeRogue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-06 - 08:38 am Title: Tears and Rain

Windrider, Dammnit why do you do this to me?! First you get me all pissed off with this story because you have me liking Panther. I'm glad to see i wasn't the only one with the inner conflict.

So i go from liking Panther to loving him, you make it seem as though it all make so much sense for Storm to be with him. I mean really, you're just that damn good.

So, what do you to me? You kill him! You kill off Panther! Now maybe 2-3 chapters ago i would have been totally Gung-ho about the whole thing. Shit i would have set the bomb up or set up a snipe attack myself.

But he loved her so much. The way you wrote T'Challa's character made me all for Storm getting that love. She deserves that kind of love. And now...its gone. *Sigh* This story is appropriatetly titled,..."Until its Gone" I can't wait to see if Logan and Ororo can help each other out in healing a torned heart.

You're a fucking genius! I want more! I'm off to go dry my tears. R.I.P. Panther. *Jeeezz* Never thought i would ever say that.

Author's Response: Two or three chapters ago his death wouldn't have meant what it means now. ;) And I didn't like doing it. I must have stopped typing like five times to go off and do soemthing else, just for the excuse to delay his death and give my imaginary Ro that much more time to be loved so absolutely and completely--as you said--like she deserves. Indeed RIP T'Challa. :( More soon however... :)

Reviewer: Raeyna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-06 - 06:35 am Title: Tears and Rain

uhhhh....*jaw hits floor*

Author's Response: That's it? That's the review you're gonna leave me with! After all the...urgh. Y'know what, no cookies for you. You hear me? I am not (repeat not) sending you cookies and depends in the asylum. :P

Reviewer: serial_charmer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-06 - 05:35 am Title: Tears and Rain

i had been typing up a review as i went along bc i didn't want to miss anything, but when i finished...i dunno. it all just seemed so trivial. nothing that i said in that review could even begin to do justice to the chapter you just wrote. so...i'm just going to say that i'm stunned. and heartbroken. and all i want is to pretend nothing at the summit happened. i just...wow. my chest hurts.

Author's Response: **hugs** Much love, Charmer. And thanks for the Wolvie. His comfort was much needed after this chapter. **hands him back** Your turn.

Reviewer: rowanmae Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-06 - 05:22 am Title: Tears and Rain

Wow...I was *not* expecting that!! I must admit, this story has made me actually respect and like BP - which I didn't think would be possible. Marvel definitely needs you to be on their writing team!!

But now...now...just when he was growing on me...poor Ro! And Logan's reaction at the end...ACK!! Made me just want to cry!! I can't wait to see what happens - you are one of the best Windrider!!

Author's Response: Marvel? Hire me? Riiiiiight. I'll e-mail Joe Q today...wait no. I'm a woman, and he's an idiot. not a good combo. LOL. Thank you so very much for the wonderful review. I'm grinning like a fool! :D

Reviewer: Starnoble03 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-03-06 - 04:50 pm Title: Divergence

And the DRAMA continues. You sure know how to build a story. There was a nice flow between Ororoand and others and then BOOM! Here comes logan with his intense grey eyes and blatant disrespect for T'Challa. I love, love, Love this and I cannot wait to see more. Please Write more soon.

Author's Response: Update up! I do hope you enjoy it, and as always your feedback is appreciated and welcome. :D

Reviewer: storm_the_windrider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-01-06 - 03:53 am Title: Phone calls and Revelations

Man have i been missin out or wat!!> lol jus read this whole thing, an realised i need to come visit the site a bit more often, Goddamn windrider1. :) ur story is great an i like da Ororo T' Challa thing. Its wonderful. i personally don't mind this nt relli revolving around RoLo being together, its sort of a refreshin point of view. Altho my thoughts might b one sided, if it were the other way round and Logan was wid Jean or Emma even (Ugh, lol, ) am not sure i'd like it so much.... :( guess am a bit buyist. but stil, KUDOS< U DOIN A WONDERFUL JOB, proud to b part of this community of talented and inventive writers. XXX peace :)

Author's Response: Yes, where have you been? Thank you for the review, and a new update is up, hope you enjoy! :) Don't be a stranger!

Reviewer: BladeStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-28-06 - 02:35 am Title: Divergence

Okay, usually I read and run, but my conscious wouldn’t let me enjoy another chapter without leaving a review. I love this story and how you’ve written Ororo, Logan and T’Challa. You just know that before it’s over all three are going to be put through the wringer. Hell, even the way you write the supporting cast reminds me that there was once a time (long before the internet and Marvel loosing it’s damn mind ) that I actually found something to like about the majority of the X-Men and their Villains.

That you haven’t demonized or written T’Challa as lacking next to Logan is incredibly refreshing. At best I’m a passing fan of The Black Panther, but even I’m half in love with him at this point. His put-down of Emma and Val was lovely. As you’ve written him, he is exactly what Ororo needs right now. I actually got chill’s when I read her thought about wanting to have a dream of her own after she’d lived and fought for someone else’s. It’s what I’ve been saying for years. You write each emotion Ororo experiences so vividly that I’m right there with her. And can I just say how happy I am that you didn’t go the ‘who’s the Daddy’ route after her two eventfully nights.

As for Logan… well, I can’t say that I’m feeling sorry for the man. He’s getting a taste of what Storm has been dealing with for how long? Except she didn’t have a night of passion to relive nor the luxury of hating the object of his affections. ‘Cause, you know, it’s in the X-Men handbook that Jean must be loved and adored no matter what.

I have to admit I’m not a die hard RoLo’er ( though I’ve come to realize if one wants decent Storm fiction one had better develop at least a soft spot for the paring ) so I’m actually rooting for the Cat Man.

Can we have more of the Queen Mother? I’m loving her!

Can’t wait for the next update.



Author's Response: **Blushing crimson** Wow. **ahem** wow. Thank you. Sincerely and truly, thank you. The "who's the daddy" is waaaay too contrived and trite, but thank you for picking that point out, I know several people thought i'd play that card. :) More of the Queen Mother? Yes. N'Yami will be making an appearance very soon. :) And yes, if you want good Storm fiction, the RoLoers do it best!! **Go Team!!** ;)

Reviewer: ebony8302eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-28-06 - 01:44 am Title: Divergence

ummm it's me again on 2nd thought ro and lo will get together in the end right ? just wondering I still love this story and your writing style in general keep all the good stuff you know the sex,the drama, the tears and supense. I am bracing myself for the next chapter. xoxo

Author's Response: Stay braced. It should be up soon!! **hugs for the reviews!!**

Reviewer: Raeyna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-27-06 - 08:46 pm Title: Divergence

I took a peak at the chappy, and what I saw, I couldn't stomach. I couldn't read the whole thing, so I'm probably missing a couple things, sorry. I'm weak. Just knowing that my two favorite people aren't together is bad enough, but for her to be with someone else and falling in love with him, if she's not already there....I don't think I can take it. I feel like I've lost hope for any Ororo and Logan for this story.

God, I feel so depressed. I think I'll go back to lurkdome (and overdose on some chocolate and Karmel Sutra ice cream), at least for this particular story (I'll be there for KC definitely!) but not this one, for now anyway. Show me some good stuff and I might come back. I think it's worse this time because it's not just a casual fling between Ororo and T'Challa, but they're in l...lo...loo...love (there, I said it, ugh!). I just can't handle it. So I'll see you for KC. *goes back to lurkdom hidey hole, depressed*

Author's Response: **Sigh** Fickle little RoLo creatures. So eager to turn on you when they don't get exactly what they want. :P I do hope you come out of your hole and read this, and review. I love your reviews. They make me smile from ear to pointy ear. I'd hate to have to crawl into your lurkdom hole and drag you out by the roots of your hair...but I will. :) Ps. Enjoy the icecream.

Reviewer: Alex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-27-06 - 05:54 pm Title: Phone calls and Revelations

i agree with you.
i can't see Storm doing something so stupid only because she can do it without thinking about the consequences.
this story is not going in a good direction.
not for a Ro/Lo story anyway

Author's Response: Well, that would depend on your definition of a RoLo story. ;) No where does it say that to be a RoLo story Ro and Logan must live happily ever after--all that is required is that they be the central characters...which they are. Depowering the sentinels is something I can easily see Storm doing--which is why Iput it in there. She's the same woman that defied Xavier and created her own team, the same woman that went wild in Japan with Yukio, the same woman that formed a massive hurricane over the city of New York waaaaay back in the original Uncanny. I guess it depends on the character interpretation. But as for it being a 'stupid' thing for her to do, well, that is of course your opinion, and I'm glad you thought enough about the story to make one. :)

Reviewer: Lurker Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-27-06 - 05:37 pm Title: Divergence

So storm attacked the Sentinels, not a smart move. I can imagine the conversation.
"Are we at war king T’Challa?"
"No Mr president"
"Then why did your wife attack my troops?"

I would also expect the forces around the mansion will be heavily reinforced and, the X-mens lives made more difficult due to her actions. As team leader Storm would never have forced a confrontation with the government. Is this a sign of her mental state?

Author's Response: First, thank you very much for the review. :) Second...nope-- Not a sign of her mental state. If anything she is blissfully happy, so nope. As for her low impulse electromagnetic pulse, it didn't harm the troops, or the sentinels, just powered them down. Not a hostile act, so no declaration of war needed. Plus she asked "and they can't retaliate for any actions you or I take?" before she made her decision. Hope that cleared that up for you, if not, keep in mind this is "fanfiction" and I'll probably take some liberies.

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-27-06 - 12:21 pm Title: Divergence

Getting more interesting indeed...just this once, I agree with Emma. LOL. Okay my biggest problem with this chapter is that I want to hate T'Challa, I mean I really want to hate him, but you write him so dang-blasted nice that I just can't. So then I find myself hating him because I can't hate him, and that just doesn't work because now I'm hating him for the wrong reason. Ughhh! Please come in put me out of my misery...update soon, and I mean real soon. ;-)

Author's Response: Update soon, JG. Promise. As always, lovely muse, i thank you and hold dear your wonderful feedback! **hugs**

Reviewer: salad Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-27-06 - 02:25 am Title: Divergence

oh my god!.... oh my god!..... OH MY GOD!....... how do u do it???!!!!..... im feeling that somehow Ororo and T'Challa are better together than she with Logan!.... NO! make this right!!!!!......... its suppose to be RoLo! i hope something good happens in the next chapter or im gonna kill myself!

Author's Response: **Takes away all sharp objects in salad's vicinity** No. Don't kill yourself. Jeepers. **frantically writing update**

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-27-06 - 01:46 am Title: Divergence

GAH! it took all day to do this.

Love the role Emma is playing and the jabs and quirks!
You are still making T'Challa likeable **grumbles**

in other words. YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!! now write more, now!

Author's Response: on it, ducky. On it.

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