Date: 04-04-07 - 07:33 pm Title: The Tea 'Thing'
I think the story could be really good, but i'm getting way too confused by it.
[Report This]Date: 06-21-06 - 06:59 pm Title: The Planes
The elemental plane. Now that's pretty cool! Good thing Ro refused to take them there, well, take Jean there. I wouldn't take that risk either.
Cat, Elephant, Mouse :) Sooo cute!
... now get to the ultimate RoLo, will ya? Pleeease :)
[Report This]Date: 06-19-06 - 03:55 am Title: Their Story
James and Anna :)
[Report This]Date: 06-18-06 - 07:28 pm Title: Their Story
OMG, she set the bed on fire? Heh, talk about making a first appearance ;)
Despite the difficulties she had at first, Ro's changes sound quite beautiful. Logan's too.
Will there be an explanation on why Logan and Ro changed so drastically in this dimension? And if they ever find a way to go back to their world, what about those changes? Will they remain?
[Report This]Date: 06-17-06 - 11:11 pm Title: Their Story
Interesting mutations! good thing her mom can make rain...
Good birth scene. Can't wait to see how you resolve all the pieces of story.
Author's Response: Yup. Mamma knows best and takes care, don't she!! Glad u liked the birth scene. I didn't pull it to too long as it was meant to bring resolution to the changes that (movie) Logan and Ororo have undergone.
[Report This]Date: 05-15-06 - 09:35 am Title: Hearts & Minds
"Rocky-Orange-Beer-Gut-Show" LOL! Ben and Jubes, that can only end in disaster, heh ;) What is it Henry found out?
Aww, poor kids. They were just playing and almost got attacked by a guy that looked pretty much like their daddy.
And poor Ro :( Like she said, first Hank, now Logan... who's next in breaking her heart, please line up and take a number... I really hope Logan will come around. Soon! I hate seeing her hurting like that.
Author's Response: Well, one can always count on Jubes for a good time. And as for Ultimate RoLo, haven't quite decided what to do with them.
[Report This]Date: 05-15-06 - 09:17 am Title: The Tea 'Thing'
Whoa, the boy's a shapeshifter! What about the girl? What can she do? UX Logan really should have checked the boy/wolf's scent bevore attacking him.
And what's going on elsewhere? Did Kitty and Jubes just break into the Baxter Building?
Author's Response: Got the girl's powers in the latest chapter. Also, UX Logan 'did' check the scent, but didn't get any.
[Report This]Date: 05-15-06 - 08:57 am Title: Changes
Had to re-read a couple of chapters to get back into things. Has been a while for me *damn real life ;)*
... uhm. I'm not sure but I think I'm still not getting it LOL. Not everything. But I got the feeling things are starting to make sense now... My guess so far: MV Logan and Ro are somehow totally out of sync in this dimension, living through time way faster than the rest. And their abilities seem enhanced quite a bit since Logan can hear thoughts...
On to the next chap, can't wait to find out more!
[Report This]Date: 04-29-06 - 07:30 pm Title: Hearts & Minds
Very nice story! And also very interesting. I loved the firs few chapters....but you seem to be as lost in all this mess as i am. The last few chapters have been very confusing, and somehow they seem to dragging along, delaying the explanation more than it needs to be. Ultimate Logan has been acting very weird in the last few chapter, very un-Logan like, and so has ultimate Ororo. While seing your older counterparts would be desconcerting, but their moments seemed a bit out of place.
Like i said, i really like your writing, and you manage to get the characters right. You seem to find the right moments for fun and for emotion. I'm anxiously awaiting an update and maybe a rewrite of the last 3 or 4 chapters.
[Report This]Date: 04-28-06 - 10:27 pm Title: Prologue
okay what is up with the kids,why are they so much older already and will the other logan and ororo fianlly get their act together and fall in love tha way they are supposed ? keep more of those cute little family interaction scenes in also, i love them. update soon!
[Report This]Date: 04-27-06 - 01:12 pm Title: Hearts & Minds
I love having the interaction between movie X-Men and movie F4. I really enjoyed this chapter - love this story but we still have no answers as to why and how Ororo and Logan are seemingly living in Ultimate universe with rapidly aged children. The suspense is killing me here, BW!
[Report This]Date: 04-25-06 - 08:00 pm Title: Hearts & Minds
Get to Ultimate Ro and Wolvie....:P
[Report This]Date: 04-23-06 - 10:02 pm Title: The Tea 'Thing'
Okay who is kitty with first of all? What world is that, is it another time period we don't know about? Another Other world, or the movie world?
Now as for the rest of it..so I'm liking their son...he's a sweetheart. Absolute sweetheart, I'm still wondering how ultimate logan was unable to tell that the little wolf was his son who's a shapeshifter....I'm sure there's more to his powers than just that. Interesting though....
I want to see more one on one with Ultimate Logan/Ro.
VB
[Report This]Date: 04-23-06 - 08:45 am Title: The Tea 'Thing'
Well, that's interesting. Hurry up with the update!
[Report This]Date: 04-23-06 - 12:12 am Title: Even More…
O kay, now I'm really confused! lol
I've got to keep reading, find out what I missed!!
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