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Date: 09-30-06 - 03:59 am Title: All Children come home

The end? Please tell me this isn't the end! Not after the heart to heart talk - and what an intriguing talk it was. I think you really described what happened to them. Everything was fine till Wanda twisted the world and then after that it was all screwed. Maybe Marvel could use that to get them out of the mess they've gotten themselves in once they figure out it is indeed a mess.

So, is there a sequel planned or an epilouge or something?????

Reviewer: Andria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-24-06 - 01:36 am Title: All children Grow

Marvel needs to hire you to write.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-23-06 - 08:06 am Title: All children Grow

Whoaaaaa!!!! Oh shoot! Yes! Wow! I'm rather taken aback, I guess you can tell. How cool though. Now all that stuff about the bear clan is that made up or real?

Author's Response: Only bits of it the rest is my own imagination

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-23-06 - 06:34 am Title: All children Grow

Now we're talkin'. You had me at "Ah can win her as Ah attempted ta do before that entire house of M crap"

That was great. I thought things in the Marvel Universe were just fine before House of M, that just ruined everything, didn't it? I'm enjoying this story. Never offer heart-shaped leaves to a guy with a healing factor...might lose your throne!

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Date: 04-23-06 - 06:27 am Title: All children bleed

Still laughing about "shiny pants." Classic.

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Date: 04-23-06 - 06:23 am Title: All children heal

“What is it with magnetic personalities and my skeleton?” There are some great lines in this, and it is unfolding nicely. Off to read more.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-22-06 - 01:22 am Title: All children bleed

Whoa! A VIBRANIUM laced skeleton! Golly gumbucks! That’s interesting! So another short chapter, too short I think, could have been drawn out a bit more – okay I’ll stop being so critical but hey there’s no more now and I’ll have to wait till you update again. Curious about what debt Wolvie’s paying. And you know I’m late for a very important date because of you! Lol!

Author's Response: well I am glad to be the reason you are late for a date. Too bad I don't live in Cincinnitti.

Author's Response: :P lol

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-22-06 - 01:17 am Title: all children cry 2

Don’t like the Sentry. No perfect super heroes interest me at all, one reason Marvel was so much better than DC. But the story keeps getting more and more fascinating. I would have thought Cage would have spoken to BP first but I like that he's a loyal Avenger, he's one of my favorites from back in the day. Now, is the Mandarin dead? And just what is BP up to?

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-22-06 - 01:11 am Title: All children play

Short but - wow!

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Date: 04-22-06 - 01:07 am Title: All children heal

Dum Dum! Cool! I guess because I grew up reading my cousin's Sgt Rock and the Howling Commandoes I have a soft spot for Nick and his crew. Looking forward to that. And yes I should be going but I'm so intrigued I can't stop reading. I think I realize where I was confused - flashbacks? Oh, and I like BP giving up Ororo! Yes!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-22-06 - 12:57 am Title: All children cry 1

I’m a little confused why it pained Scott to tell Ororo it was Wolverine who was the casualty since she was already there. Did I miss something? And is that true that BP has to marry before a certain age and produce an heir? Please enlighten a boycotting ex-true believer out with your extensive comic book knowledge!

Now toward the end there you had Ororo informing Scott about Wolverine so you lost me a little there. A bit confusing this chapter. I’m more than half way through but it’s almost 10pm and the night is young so I’ll have to stop here. I’ll finish the rest this weekend most likely. Looking forward to answers.


Author's Response: What I have heard for the Mantle of the BP was if he is the undisputed wearer of the mantle then he never had to get married to a royal and produce an aire apparent, but because of the fact that her was beaten by Killmonger and the same Killmonger ate the root and survived(due to Panther's mercy) He now must fill these otehr requirements to keep Kingship. Thats what was explained to me along time ago about Mantles and such of Africa.

Author's Response: As for the sympathy Scott showed was that for the feelings of Ororo. I mean if you had a friend who did love someone and you had to tell them "Hey the were hurt badly or died" How would you feel. You'd feel sympathy toward that person you knew on top of pain because the person hurt was under your command normally and when a person under your command is hurt it pains you. Hence why he told Ororo he was sorry.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-22-06 - 12:45 am Title: All children fight 3

Ah, I forgot it was Echo and not the real Ronin that’s one of the New Avengers. Just can’t read that stuff after they massacred all my favorites. Is ZZZAXX a real Marvel villain? And I’m guessing Andria is your role playing bud? And Gwen and Norman’s son is now the new Green Goblin? Now that is completely ironic. I just hated that story arc, having her sleep with Norman was almost sacrilegious ruining the innocent and beloved character of Gwen Stacy I grew up with! Btw, whatever happened to her daughter, the girl twin? I’m full of questions, the least of which – the Mandarin has a son? Cool. You know so much! How many comics do you buy a month? And what a way to end a chapter! I’m curious to see what you’re going to do with an adamantiumless (sp? too lazy to look it up) Wolvie.

Author's Response: keep reading

Author's Response: Actually ZZaxx is a marvel villian from the Hulk. He was created as an accident then absorbed "Thunderbolt" Ross and the personality dominated the being called ZZaxx. Anyway I did alittle research and put together villians that could give the Avengers a run.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-22-06 - 12:35 am Title: all children fight part 2

I think I would have put in a few dashes and or dot, dot, dot’s ( . . .) instead of multiple quotation marks in the same sentence though it did stress their points. I also think Captain America would speak a little less formally with Logan using more contractions but other than those very minor details I quite liked this chapter. Gotta beat that beta inside me down a bit more though. I liked how you had them talking as they worked out, again another way you’re so original.

Btw, I haven’t had time to finish The Dragon but should be able to this weekend. The format was too difficult for me to print off, don’t know why but it only printed a random page when I tried to print it out.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-22-06 - 12:23 am Title: All children fight Part 1

Had to pop you into my favorite author’s list because your ideas are so completely original and I love that – so refreshing – and as I did I noticed you had a new bio (I love reading peoples bio’s) and I LOVE it! That is just so cool! And yes you are indeed a real man. Only a real man could admit all that you did and strive to meet challenges as you so obviously intend on doing. My hat’s off to you.

Now about the story! I don’t know if I mentioned this before but I love the name and how all the chapters fall under that, very appropriate and very creative. I’m so not liking the Black Panther’s part in this but you’ve made him bearable, even likeable – why? Lol! And as always I love your knowledge of the comics. Don’t know that many remember Logan was part of the F4. Well, on to the next chapter before I have to go!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-11-06 - 02:39 am Title: All children fall

Now that's a twist. I'd forgotten you had the Avengers in this. I love your knowledge of Marvel comics. It might take me a while but I'm actually starting to read fan fiction again. I have a lot of catching up to do, a lot of reviewing and a lot of writing too but I will finish reading all the stories I started ages ago.

Author's Response: Thank you

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