It's poetry, your words kinda wreck me...I am amazed that you are not famous or something..I can't really be eloquent after reading something as gorgeous and intense as this. Please update your other stories (codename storm, and odalisque) cause I am dying without new stuff from you.

I'm the last one to read this, but honestly, this was beautiful. I love how realistic the emotions are. People cope in different ways, and I agree with what one reviewer said that this wasn't romantic and could be considered dark but it's beautiful. It's real. It's the coming together of two people to heal and where it goes beyond that doesn't matter.

Well, I can't get into NC 17 stories here but I can get into the reviews and thus can leave one. Since I only read this at fanfiction.net I can only say I loved it there, loved the beautiful way you captured their coming together. Very, very nice.

I don't see too many fics on this site about these two focusing primarily on sheer emotional and physical need. This wasn't romantic, and it was incredibly dark, but it still managed to be beautiful. I enjoyed Ororo's point of view and the surprisingly brutal view she has of herself here. Great work.

Author's Response: Thanks. I think that was one of the things I really wanted to do with this story. Focus less on the romance and more on the physical and the emotional. That's why the ending took me so long to actually complete because I was trying to keep from giving into that romantic that lives somewhere in me. ;) Thanks for your reviews.

Very wonderfully done story, and I don't mind that you thought it out. It showed that even though they're superheros that they doesn't mean that they don't have emotions or react to a situation like we would. You make me sick in a good way. You're writing makes me so jealous. You do such a good job at writing out emotions. Even though it's fanfiction I feel that I can totally relate to a lot of what you write because you're writing has this realism to it that you don't find in many stories. I'm not judging anyone because everyone writes better than me. But you have stories that over romantic or over dramatic. Those are good reads, but I like a story that can really hit emotions on the head. I'm brown nosing. Will you marry me?

I have to add this.

IT'S THE JUGGERNAUT BITCH! I LIKE YOUR RAINCOAT! That was good internet television. You had Juggernaut who talked like Rick James. You had Black Tom with his pimp cane. Erik the red and his mustard looking (hahaha) I mean ketchup looking self who's a part time stripper/part time hair dresser. The gladiator talking like Ahhh-nold. Lilandra being ghettofied. Bad Scottish accents (Oh bloody... HAHAHAHA). The Professor talking like Ghandi. Juggernaut freaking out WTF IS THIS SHIT? Odd wrestling inserts. Those are Oscar winning moments. You can't tell me that wasn't funny. You cannot sit there and say that was NOT funny. Tu sabes!! My infanity! What about your infanity, Ms. 9999-Fandoms? You're the reason I like him in the first place.

Author's Response: Thanks Mon-luv. I really appreciate all your input, too, as this story was being written. You write better than you think, and you're pretty damn insightful. You just can't help spazzing, though, can you? I'm going to have to hit ya with my pimp cane. Yeeeeah. Tu sabes?

Ok. I'm cool now. When you're angry and hurt these are real emotions that you go through. It's like she wants to live but she can't because she's got too many conflicting emotions inside of her. Ace story.

That was a really creepy description of the boy. You can tell Ororo has some real death issues she's dealing with especially in the lines where she asks how the professor can play and do the bad guys have people who cared for them. Me likes. :) I'm off. Work time.