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Reviewer: Antiwa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-01-12 - 01:54 pm Title: Chapter Four

I enjoyed this story very much and cant wait for the next update. I'm curious to see what Kai has in store for his mother.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-12-06 - 11:39 pm Title: Chapter Three

Wow. I'm picturing his transformation, and of course, sinfully, picturing him laying outside in the altogether...

Great imagery. Kai's pretty sinister, but he manages to be likable.

Author's Response: Thanks Ceece, I'm glad you find him that way. Shows me that at least I'm getting my portrayal of his character right! :)

Reviewer: Darkdevil75k Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-09-06 - 06:41 pm Title: Chapter Two

This is getting really good. Logan's bond with his son, and his first bar fight with him, although he doesn't have the gene, you can still see he has parents fighting skill in his blood he's a true warrior with no fear. Like to see more soon.

Author's Response: I'm glad that you picked up on that. I've been trying to show the elements of both his parents. You can't compare to the fun of writing in a bar fight!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-09-06 - 04:27 pm Title: Chapter Two

She? She who? The plot thickens!!! I loved this, and I will of course be sending you emails to ask more about who is who. Kai and Logan together are a riot.

Author's Response: She. Ah, she. She's a character close to my heart, and I can't wait to get started on her!

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-09-06 - 03:54 pm Title: Chapter Two

loved the bonding b/t Kai and Logan, definitely seeems like the type of environment where they'd bond...but Ororo at the end? wow, i guess i'll just have to wait and see what that's about...so in that case, plz update soon! : )

Author's Response: Not a problem angel, already dug my hands into the next chapter.

Reviewer: Darkdevil75k Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-30-06 - 11:03 pm Title: Chapter One

Like Father, like son, love of fighting in bars. Loved it!!
"What is he dying of, or is it his mutation's in his genes?" Write more soon.

Author's Response: Answer's coming up in the next chap! And I'll get to finishing it up ASAP. (Btw, the fight's in an unused loading bay. But don't you worry, he'll get around to bars soon enough)

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-30-06 - 07:18 pm Title: Chapter One

wow...this was really good...i felt there was a lil somethin' off bout Kai, but wow, was not quite expecting that...please continue!!!

Author's Response: Hehe, he's a devil ain't he? (Did ya catch the double meanin' there? You know, he's a devil ain't... Ah never mind.) Thanks angel!

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-30-06 - 07:16 pm Title: Chapter One

Well howdy, hello and goddamn, Bard!

What a way to rekindle a story! I love the return of Xierra and the change in Kai. Glorious. can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks Rhap! Glad that there's at least one other person who remembers the story and characters!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-30-06 - 04:16 am Title: Chapter One

This is just what you described it as when we were spitballing back and forth. Kai was what I expected; you can hear Logan's cunning in his dialogue, and a bit of his ruthlessness. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Glad you picked up on the resemblence to Logan. Wanted to make it somewhat subtle, since I need to also illustrate the part of him that resembles Storm.

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