Finally had a chance to catch up with this story! I printed it out and just finished reading.
Wow, what an ending... I never thought he'd actually do it and kill her. She hurt him. A lot. More than his worst enemy ever could. But... whoa... he killed her. He still loved her, and it hurt. He was probably hoping to finally put and end to it, maybe he even wanted to save others from this kind of pain. It was an ugly game she played with his emotions. Both men's emotions actually, since the other guy loved her... *shudders* I feel for them both, Logan and that guy, I mean. And you never revealed who that mystery guy was, ahhh! *pulls at hair* LOL ;D

I am truly alarmed to find I didn't review this here. I read it over at ff.net and know I reviewed there, how this slipped by I've no idea. But I love this story, it's so completely different so I'm utterly delighted to see you've updated!

I don't know what to say... but this is really deep. The clue too this mystery lover is very in the story. Am I right?" After I read it all I figurerd out who he was.
But i won't give it away. My thoughts after what Logan did to Ororo is if I can't have you no other man will. I Loved the whole supense of this story. Keep up the good work, write more soon.

At work. Thought I'd drop you a review while I had some free time. Did she bring out the worst in him or what? Speaking from experience as guy who has rather stormy relationships, it's funny how someone who means so much to you can bring out these different sides of your character. You started the story showing how Logan felt he couldn't hurt her, but then things just began to deteriorate until he felt he had no choice. I'm assuming, anyway. Because wow that final confrontation shows that he did let this eat away at him. That's the scary part about letting someone become so much a part of you that they might as well be encoded in your DNA. You do things you think you'd never do in the name of love. And I think you showed that well in this story. It was a mind fuck.

I died. I died nine million times over. I'm still dying. This story was such an elaborate, painful mind game. The title fit well because from beginning to end you left me wondering, left me asking and left me pondering. It really was this intricate game orchestrated by Storm. To see her break Logan down like it was nothing just made me hurt for him, and to some extent, hurt for her because she's the misguided one. Logan's love for her is strong and true while she obviously felt she was missing something to have an affair. I felt sorry for this other lover, too, because he has the feelings for her. I felt like he harboured some illusion that she'd leave Logan for him. I think he felt that he was worthy of her attention and love when she was only satisfying fleshly whims. I wish I could I felt sorry for her, but I can't. I feel worse for the people she deceived, hurt and forgot about.

Still defiant to the end. Congrats on finishing. I'll throw you a digital party. Tragic. I didn't see this having much of a happy ending for anyone. And it didn't. It's fitting because it was just a big mess. No fair. You didn't tell. I understand though. You have to do what you have to do as the writer.

Well... shit. Seriously that's all I can say. I love Storm to death, but she had that one coming. My heart went crack when I read this: “Ya might fall in love with someone today, an’ ya might fall in love with someone else t’morrow, but everybody ain’t that easy. I’ll always love you, just you.” Talk about powerful. Such a tragic ending. Even though you reference 6 Underground. This is Post-Modern Sleaze definitely by the feel. I can see Ororo using some of the same expressions that Kelli used in that video especially that last half-tearful half-whatever look she had toward the end. I can't believe it's over.

I really admire your writing style, it's very good. You can just feel Logan's pain. Poor guy...
And the mystery man? Somehow my mind wants to make me believe it's Alex... but I have no clue why...