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Reviewer: lychee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-02-11 - 09:02 am Title: Chapter Three

Ohhhh, this is fantastic. I think every RoLo fan hopes for the story behind how and why Storm and Wolverine got married in One Man's Worth. The way you write flows so seamlessly into the story we already know, too!

Aaaa, I wish you'd update. The twist of 'Ro being pregnant in this story makes my stomach do somersaults because I keep wondering if it's possible for them to get a happy ending :(

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-28-07 - 02:18 am Title: Chapter Three

Great chapter ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I can't wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: Dd75k Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-09-06 - 12:33 am Title: Chapter Three

ohh! please finish this it is good. I'm going to look at "One mans worth" in a diffrent sight now. You drawed me into that story line with delete scenes from the cartoon. So don't stop there.

Reviewer: W6C Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-23-06 - 07:19 pm Title: Chapter Three

This is great! My favorite episode in prose. I love yer take on it and the idea of RoLo bein' pregnant in this. Can't wait for the next chapter. Great job. --- W6C

Author's Response: Yeah, I've always wanted to rewrite One Man's Worth. I hated the fact that we didn't know much about Rolo before Bish showed up, or what kind of people they really were. I hoping I can get into that a little more. Thanks for the review. I'm really glad this caught your interest.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-18-06 - 08:10 pm Title: Chapter Three

Awwwwww....Man that is so tragic. 'Roro is preggers and doesn't know. So brilliant of a twist! Great update! I can't wait for more. I've seen the episode a dozen times, but this takes that extra step and gets me in the world with them. **claps and whistles**

Author's Response: That is one of the best compliments I've ever gotten! *HUGS* I have alot more in store for this story, it was just temparily put on the back burner. Hopefully if comcast stays on and the electricity holds out in the heat, you should see more soon.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-18-06 - 07:35 pm Title: Chapter Three

This line was cute:

If she was, and she was purposely putting herself in danger like this, he was going to nail her down to a chair in the safest place on the planet and fill that place full of food.

I love that. Interesting that Logan could detect Ororo's pregnancy before she could! That's a change from what we usually see, I like that. Good update, keep it coming.

Author's Response: Yea, for some reason I had this obscenly funny image of a mohawked Storm ducktaped to a chair and Wolverine setting up fancy fruit plates all around her. I can't wait to write more of this. Thanks for reading so much already!

Reviewer: digital tempest Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-10-06 - 05:58 am Title: Chapter Two

You've done an excellent job in painting the gritty world they live in, but despite all that, they share something that transcends even that and becomes something beautiful despite the desperation of their situation. Can't wait to read more. :D

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to notice the details. I wasn't sure if I was overbearing in that department or not giving enough. This particular Rolo'ism is so close to my heart. I hope I can do it justice.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-06-06 - 12:13 pm Title: Chapter Two

FLAWLESS VICTORY! Loved it, heck I love any homage to MK.

She loved his shortness, and had made a joke about it. She had teased him saying that he was an attentive lover because it took him less time to get to the goodies. Ahahahaha. Perfect.

I loved this chapter. I really like how they express laughter and happiness with each other in a war ravaged world, because there is no greater expression of love than when despite the circumstances, no matter what they are, you can love and laugh with someone. Update soon, girlie. I'm waiting!!


Author's Response: Lol. Ya'll keep catching all my gaming references. Awsomeness! I love Rolo. Everytime their together they have a special untouchable bond between them. No matter what Marvel writer has control over them, they have all shown it. One day we'll see it in Uncanny or Astonishing. OR ELSE!!! I am really gonna enjoy writting this story, the sequel (Stormfront episodes) and its epiloge (Graduation Day). Rolo are going to go through an emtional wringer before its all over. I hope I can really get into the foundation of their realationship. Wish me luck!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-06-06 - 06:12 am Title: Chapter Two

Spunk and love juice...back in college, my friends would have called the rag or shirt used to clean that up the "hoochie coochie towel." Brings back memories...

Fun, raw love scene. Not the usual "poetic" RoLo lovin' that it's so easy to get used to, I liked the feel of them stealing time for themselves. This story is a real departure from your other one. I like them both, but I like that it's hard to tell that the same person wrote both of them.

Author's Response: Thanks for the complement. Changing up the tempo from the stories was something that I was trying really hard to do. Thanks for noticing it. As for the love scene...heh. I guess I got used to the movie-esque like stuff. The kind where you can see the fog, hear the music and see the graceful flow of body movements, but uhm I honestly don't know of anyone whose ever really had an experience like that. I couldn't describe something like that even if I was paid too, lol.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-05-06 - 01:42 pm Title: Chapter One

Ohhh, I love "One Man's Worth"! Can't wait to see what you have planned for this fic. Well, since I'm already hooked, please update soon :)

Author's Response: Sure Sure. The next chap is gonna be my first attempt at a wuv scene :O. Wish me luck!

Reviewer: digital tempest Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-05-06 - 05:12 am Title: Chapter One

Nicely done and definitely a good question to pose about their relationship in that particular timeline. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: WOW! I just got complimented by a master. Sweeeeet! I heart Summertime...and Odalisque! I totally need your autograph.

Reviewer: ROLO__LOVER1979 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-04-06 - 12:29 pm Title: Chapter One

CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT UPDATE SOON

Author's Response: : ) ME TOO!!!!

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-04-06 - 09:31 am Title: Chapter One

I loved One Man's Worth, so happy to see a storyu like this come from that. Update soon. :D

Author's Response: This one is so much fun to write. Finally canon Rolo that's just as passionate as I always wanted. Writting this is like christmas on steriods. *giddily unwraps everything in sight!*

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-04-06 - 04:22 am Title: Chapter One

FINALLY! You went ahead and uploaded this story that you promised us! And it's frickin' GREAT!

I still haven't seen that One Man's Worth episode that everyone raves about, but I want to. I thought I found it on Amazon, but I wasn't sure.

Talk to you soon. I have writer's block on my RoLo fic, so I'm working on a New Mutants piece that I have up on Superstories instead. I needed a break.

CeeCee

Author's Response: I left a link for you in chat about that, if you didn't get it just email me. Thanks for the review :) I'm glad it's being enjoyed!

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