For about the entirety of this fic, I was in a state of "AHH AHHHH" and "SQUEEE". I am so so glad I stumbled upon this fic. this should be listed somewhere discoverable - I found it by accident, which is a damn shame because I really think it's one of the best RoLo AU's out there...!

I just. Crap. This was really well done. I mean, of course it is, since two amazing writers were behind it, but. ... Crap. This was so amazing. Equal parts drama, romance, humor and awesome. The plot was ten kinds of engaging kept me reading nonstop and is the reason why I haven't finished a report due in a few hours. AND I am so glad for the happy ending...!

I feel like I need to give an award to this fic or something. Geez.

AHHHHHHHHH !!!!!!!! How could you leave it there ???!! O by the way very good sex scene well it got me staring at the screen for a good 4 mintues with out stopping lol I would have personally thought if that idea myself if i was Ororo but im not *tear* lol very good hope you update soon !!

Author's Response: Aww! LOL. I wanted to leave ya wanting for more. Glad you liked the "do it" scene. It's actually my second one. Very much like the first one, it was short not very detailed, but funny and a little awkard. Kinda like the action I'm stuck with. :( I don't have the writting ability yet for an uber scene. I'm working on it. But I like it when the love scenes parallel the story. More to come.

Girl, I love you and every one of your wisecracking muses! Hugs and chocolate for Reiko! Still laughing at Jean waddling and the word "half-assicity." Awesomeness. This made my night.

Author's Response: Although I say it all the time, the first time I saw it written was in Windy's Kingdom Come. Its a great way to say something sucks. I see you used "Assery". You rock too. I left the story open if you want to write something else, if not I'll finish it up. Just let me know. GO CEE!!!

*sigh* That's a nicely written aftermath. Everyone's conversations were so honest. 'Ro and Logan, Jean and Scott, Jean and Alex, etc. I don't like Jean trying to be sneaky about that prenup, though. Girl never stops, does she? LOL! Of course, RoLo admitting their feelings was the icing on the cake.

Can't wait to see what Reiko writes!

Author's Response: I can't wait to see what Reiko writes, either!!! Reiko, you gonna give us an update??? PLEASE??? Jean...yeah, she has to change a lot of behaviors before things work for her. Yeah, we need some RoLo, stat!!!

You updated! Great chapter. I love the new bold Scott. I'm surprised Alex was as calm as he was about the whole thing. I was expecting him to a little more angry than that.

If Ororo knew that Logan was boning Jean already, why did she get upset when she was eavesdropping?

Last question...Is Jean pregnant or is she adopting? Because if she is pregnant is it Scott's or some others? *winkLoganwink*

Sorry for all the questions.

Author's Response: Don't be sorry about questions, silly. Its a good thing. Alex was calm because his son was with him, and he loves him more than anything. He loves Maddie too. Its the kind of love that gives you strength. No matter what had happened Alex knew that he was a good father and husband. I think Ororo keeps getting upset over Jean and Logan because it makes her insecure and paranoid. She's already a little uneasy about Logan because of her immense feeling about him that came on so quickly. What if he left her or cheated on her with Jean, she would feel really stupid, and she would have seen it comming. Jean is pregnant. I'll give you a hint. It's not going to be a carefree easy event. Jean hasn't been leading a healthy drug-free or alchohal-free lifestyle. And she is going to have to learn how to eat food. The paternity of the father isn't going to be as important as one may think. But that's only if I can write it right. We'll see. Wish me luck.

Wow there was so much to sort out in the chapter but it was a good thing. I loved it and I love how Logan was still trying to figure out his feelings. I'm sorry but I didn't feel sorry for Jean. lol Im mean there was a lil spark there when she was tlaking to Scott but thats it. PLEASE PLEASE don't let the kid be Logans....please !!! lol Loved it can't wait for more !!

Author's Response: Why hello there. ITs nice to hear from you. I'm glad people are hatin on the clutter I threw in on this chapter. I'm still new to writing and I did the best I could, but I knew that there was alot was going to happen in this chapter. It wasn't my intention to make people feel sorry for Jean as much as it was to see her able to change. She needs something other than herself to think about. I think that's been her problem for a while. Ever since she was a little girl, she's always been the other sister, while Maddie was perfect. So in Jean's mind its justified that she put herself first because no one else did. But she sees that she was wrong. But hey, I got that spark outta ya, so I did something right! Yeeeaa. I doubt that that the kid is Logan's.

Damn! That was intense. Jean was such a evil little princess. Ororo was funny and sad, and Alex aww poor guy.

I know just the thing for him.

Nate was just precious.

Author's Response: Nate should be kinda fun to write, I love to write kids. Or you could add on to him! I wanted to focus a little on Jean being ever so slightly manic at this point; I figure Logan dumping her, finally, should be the trigger. Me, I would love to see what happens when Scott and Alex have it out, hint, hint...(grins)

excellent story. Like a soap opera only less cheesy amd more mmmmmmy (yes that's a word). LOL. Loving it! :D

Author's Response: ...I think we got a comparison to Melrose once earlier, which made me grin! It was Reiko's fun idea. I have been happily following her lead. Thanks for reading and reviewing.