[Report This]Date: 03-30-07 - 08:24 pm Title: Budding Friendship Leads To Broken Walls
Both chapters 1 and 2 are great UPDATE SOON.
[Report This]Date: 09-30-06 - 02:38 am Title: Confessions In The Rain
Ah, now that's a very, very good explanation as to why Logan was into Jean. Thank you! Btw, I love your pen name it's lovely.
Author's Response: Thank You Very Much !! I really liked writing his part, hope I can keep up the quailty in the up coming chapters as well ! Thanks my muse thought of it !!
[Report This]Date: 09-19-06 - 05:19 pm Title: Confessions In The Rain
Hope there's more to read. ;)
Author's Response: o yea there is gonna try to have to next chapter up soon, but schools holding me back ! lol thanks for reading !!
[Report This]Date: 09-19-06 - 07:37 am Title: Confessions In The Rain
Yeeaah...Logan on a motercycle!! Good story, looks a bit cut-off, but I like it!!
Author's Response: Thanks ! yea something went woncky with my computer and some of it got cut off I'm gonna try to fix it today if not tomorrow ! I'm glad you liked it ! And yes Logan on a bike is yumminess !
[Report This]Date: 09-19-06 - 03:38 am Title: Confessions In The Rain
Looks like a teeny piece of the closing sentence got cut off. Was it supposed to be "Darlin', I don't say anything I don't really mean"? Kinda looked like it, at first read.
Logan's little soliloquy to 'Ro is great because there is a lot of passion and knowledge of himself in it, but a lot of it would have also been good as internal monologue, too, if you didn't already have it as words he speaks to her out loud. But whatever. Promising story, I want to read more, please! The motorcycle ride is fun. Logan on a bike is always fun!
Author's Response: Thanks !! Im glad you liked it, I spent the most on Logans part. wanted to really make it seem true to his character. Im glad you liked it and I got it ! yay lol and yes logan on a bike is always fun, fun to picture and would be fun to join !
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