Date: 04-03-15 - 07:23 am Title: 11. He Hasn't Finished
Wow!!! Crazy cliffhanger. Please update soon. Ororo and Logan's relationship just started and what about Forges's motives and I hope someone really puts him in his place for what he did to Ororo. Great job in the sex scenes also.
[Report This]Date: 03-28-12 - 10:25 am Title: 11. He Hasn't Finished
Jeeeesus Christ this is one of the best suspense/serial/drama stories I've read in a long long while. It's got me on the edge and your stalker is creepy as hell even if he hasn't shown up in a couple of chapters and this whole thing has been an insane rollercoaster of emotion and believe me when I say that this has been what I personally believe as the best fic that dealt with the Scott/Jean/Logan/Ororo love polygon, hands down. Even if, you know, Jean and Logan aren't telling anyone. Still, best best best. And the RoLo in this is amaaazing and I am seriously so upset you haven't updated in forever, this fic is fantastic. I really wish you would update :( !!
[Report This]Date: 05-19-07 - 03:12 pm Title: 11. He Hasn't Finished
This isn't another review, I just have to say "Yay!" to you being a fan of The Wire. I have sick addiction to that show.
BTW, please update soon!
[Report This]Date: 04-17-07 - 04:53 am Title: 11. He Hasn't Finished
I'm on the edge wondering what's going to happen next.
[Report This]Date: 04-15-07 - 04:19 am Title: 11. He Hasn't Finished
Why do you insist on raising the hair on my arm? This was OH SO GOOD and I can't wait till the next chapter. hurry, hurry, hurry, hurry, hurry
Rolletti
[Report This]Date: 04-12-07 - 01:51 am Title: 11. He Hasn't Finished
Crimony! That is really scary! But of course we know that Covert is a loony perv. Now I wonder where he is....
Author's Response: As we've seen in the 'Ro and Lo Show' Covert watches from the shadows. He's closer than they know.
[Report This]Date: 04-11-07 - 04:39 pm Title: 11. He Hasn't Finished
If this were a movie, I would be munching popcorn and leaning in closer to the screen! Creepy and suspenseful. Bishop's last line has me screaming "Evil cliffhanger!" I know you will give us more when you have time, Pandora, so thanks for the update!
Author's Response: I know, I am kind of addicted to the zinger ending. I am kinda bummed that I not only haven't had much time to write but I haven't had much time to read! I see you've been writing up a storm (pun definitely intended) and I'm going crazy cuz I can't find two minutes to just sit and read.
[Report This]Date: 04-11-07 - 01:35 pm Title: 11. He Hasn't Finished
Great chapter!!!! It starting to get really good. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE really really Really SOON.
Author's Response: Yeah, things are picking right up. The momentum increases in the forthcoming chapters. I've laid all the groundwork, now the payoff.
[Report This]Date: 04-11-07 - 01:00 pm Title: 11. He Hasn't Finished
I was gonna ask why Jean or Det. Fixx didn't sense the three girls in the room, but then I remembered that there are no powers in this fic.
What can I say? I LOVE the way you write. I also love that you've brought in more characters from the Marvel universe. Mortimer Toynbee is an insurance investigator? Bwahaha!! Thanks for having Marie and Kitty make up. I don't like it when a guy tears friendships apart.
And "Mr. Covert" is a psychotic mofo! I can't wait to meet him! *rubs hands eagerly* Please update soon!
Author's Response: I was actually going to spin out the Kitty/Bobby/Marie triangle a bit longer. But then I realized I really wanted to kick the Covert part of the story and the Lo/Jean reveal up into high gear. I think the Marie/Kitty /Bobby business just slows things down. They have a part to play in upcoming events so I needed them to be friends, not enemies. Just like I needed Jean and Logan to make up, sorta.
And I had always known the insurance guy was going to be the one to discover the smoking gun -- or at least the flattened bullet -- that linked Covert to the Mall killings. I hadn't any idea who he might be. At first he was simply going to be an original character but then I was like "well there are so many Marvel characters to pick from who can I co-op?" Toad just seemed like the perfect solution. I also decided to go that route with the detectives. Bishop was a great fit for that too.
[Report This]Date: 04-03-07 - 09:40 am Title: 10. Unchain my heart
I read the firs chapter of this fic and was totally hooked. So I printed out the rest and read it on the train. My goodness this is excellent! I like the combination of suspense and romance. I love Ro and Lo's relationship. Unlike a lot of Rolo's here (smile) I also like Jean. I was afraid she was just going to be superbitch Jean but I think you are doing some interesting things with her.
I also like the pace of the story. You are a very, very good writer. I am astonished that this is your first story, it is so polished and really keeps the reader hooked and wanting more.
I am dying for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I am glad that you like Jean, maybe you can keep my feet to the fire with her so that I can't let her devolve into evil Jean.
[Report This]Date: 03-31-07 - 01:48 am Title: 10. Unchain my heart
caught up on all the chapters. Great stuff, really digging the story and wondeing who the psycho is that's feening for Ro.
Author's Response: We're gonna learn a lot about Mr. Covert soon. We actually learn his identity in the next chapter or two.
[Report This]Date: 03-31-07 - 12:52 am Title: 10. Unchain my heart
Whew! I'm glad that Jean and Logan worked that out. I thought she had lost her mind for a while in there what with her bringing up that he was seeing someone. It is curious that Forge came back to Xavier's. I wonder what is on his mind. Hmm....Good chapter.
Author's Response: Like Emma said, nobody turns down Xavier! In my universe there is a sorta mythos about Xavier. I haven't done any background exposition but I am trying to convey the idea that Xavier has influence with very powerful people. He is a respected and feared. He can literally pick up a phone and ruin your life.
As for Forge, he came back because he actually regrets leaving the way he did. So far we've only seen how Ro has dealt with his abandonment but Forge also needs closure. This is the way that both of them will get it.
I also think people will be a bit surprised that Forge believes he is the injured party in the break up.
[Report This]Date: 03-28-07 - 02:40 pm Title: 10. Unchain my heart
Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
[Report This]Date: 03-27-07 - 11:43 pm Title: 10. Unchain my heart
Forge is back, Jean's jealous, and we still don't know who the mystery man is. I smell trouble on the horizon.
This is really good.
[Report This]Date: 03-27-07 - 03:12 pm Title: 10. Unchain my heart
forge is the stalker isnt he and he is going to tell ororo and scott isnt he write more plz
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