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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04-16-15 - 01:22 am Title: Be There

I hope you continue this story. And logan says what's needed to be said to ororo.

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Date: 01-09-11 - 02:47 am Title: Be There

I really like this story and wants to see what happens next :)
But I cant find the sequel "Or Forever hold your peace". :(
Did you not post it or what?

Author's Response: I dumped that story, unfortunately. I couldn't get it to take off in the direction I wanted it. I want to see what happens next, too. And in all honesty, around the same time, my buddy windrider1 wrote a fantastic chaptered fic called "...Until It's Gone" that did a much better job with the same theme of Ororo having second thoughts about getting married. So there's a fic rec from me, if you haven't read that one already. Thanks for the feedback and stopping by to visit. If I ever do Hold Your Peace here, it will likely be a oneshot with an epilogue.

Reviewer: DanielleduLys Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-27-10 - 06:30 pm Title: Be There

Oh my! I started reading "Something..." and at first I thought it was going to be something light and fluffy - but things are not as they seem, right?

I really love the depth you gave to all this characters... Please keep going, I still hope for a happy ending ;)

Author's Response: It's not that cut and dried. Back when I wrote this, I was inspired by windrider1's "Until It's Gone" story out here, and by my own muse nagging me that Ororo's wedding would be "conveniently" interrupted if Logan spoke up when the preacher asked if anyone in the church had any objections. But the problem was trying to write this in a way that wouldn't make people think "Damn, I've read this story before." The problem is, Logan doesn't have a clear enough reason why she shouldn't marry her old sweetie, since T'Challa has less baggage than he does, and he's been so noncommittal before, what with his frequent absences, and with Ororo always being there when he breaks up with his girlfriends, when they die, etc. She's been his consolation prize and "just one of the guys" too often for it to work in that context. That's why I'vebeen writing so many AUs with these two, since mainline comics are leaving me high and dry for inspiration. Thanks for the review, I appreciate it.

Reviewer: Ladyluck523 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-24-09 - 07:43 am Title: Be There

Who knew men could get so introspective at a bachelor's party? LOL
Poor Scott he's had the rough experiences to give good advice. Let's hope Logan wakes up and smells the flowers!

Author's Response: ah, they probably all were just waiting for the strippers! I figured Scott would have something interesting to say, whether it was well-received or not. Thanks for reading this old chestnut!

Reviewer: XnTRK-1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-25-08 - 10:13 pm Title: Be There

GAAAH!

you can't just leave us hangin' like that! I want MORE!!!

....please?

Author's Response: Man, I wish I could grant that wish, but I've grown so far apart from this story. I'm up in the air, because originally this was supposed to be the second part of a trilogy, Something Borrowed, Somthing Blue; The Best Man; and Or Forever Hold Your Peace. The third chapter was supposed to be the wedding, cheerfully interrupted, but with an angsty outcome. Problem is, I don't want people to end up hating the second story because its Logan basically stepping out of the way to let Ororo make up her mind and love who she loves. I know plenty of people would hate that ending to that piece of the story, so I've left it alone. Thanks for your feedback, though, I appreciate it.

Reviewer: SuperXfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-14-07 - 09:44 pm Title: Think About It Every Night

I am new to this site and I just wanted to say how much I am liking your work. This is excellent.

Author's Response: I'm really flattered. Thanks for the nice praise and review. Glad you like it.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-12-07 - 08:31 pm Title: Heh, Heh, HENH...SNIKT.

S-E-Q-U-E-L! S-E-Q-U-E-L! S-E-Q-U-E-L! Because both stories were amazing! This was way better than what Marvel would ever write. Because Ororo is not made to be someone's queen. Seriously, do a sequel! Please! Pretty please! I loved this style written in Logan's POV. You could have a story alternating Logan's POV with Ororo's.

Author's Response: Logan will have one more chapter to air his thoughts. Me, I think that if Ororo were ever supposed to be a queen, her mother never would have married a journalist and moved to the states. Marvel never thinks about it like that. Ororo's point of view will come up in Hold Your Piece, my part three.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-12-07 - 02:15 am Title: Be There

Wow this is lookin' mighty grim. I wonder if it will come to blows....

Author's Response: still deciding on whether they need a fistfight...now see, there you go, Miss Evilista, encouraging me to violence!! (grin) I promise it will continue to be a pissing contest.

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-12-07 - 12:44 am Title: Be There

I still don't like him. Seems like an ass. But I am enjoying the story! Of course I would like it better if for some unknown reason T'Challa dropped dead and 'Ro ended up with Logan instead... hmm... maybe after the wedding he drops dead so 'Ro can still be queen... he doesn't have a fatal peanut allergy or anything does he... damn.

Author's Response: fatal peanut allergy...hmmm. I smell "loophole"...heh heh heh. See, this is why I like you, Tiger. Glad you are enjoying the story.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-11-07 - 10:33 pm Title: Be There

I read this at ff.net. I always wondered when(or if) you would continue it. I've enjoyed what you've written so far. I hope there's more to come. :-)

Author's Response: For the Best Man, there is one more chapter. There is also a sequel called Or Forever Hold Your Peace.

Reviewer: Drsgon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-11-07 - 09:41 pm Title: Be There

Great chapter ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I can'twait to se how RO and LO get together. I also can't wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.


Author's Response: This is part of a trilogy, so they do not get together quite yet. Stay tuned. "The Best Man" is the sequel to Something Borrowed, and Or Forever Hold Your Peace is a story I started and might post when it is more complete. Thank you, Dragon.

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