Reviews For Ororo's last day
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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-05-07 - 09:43 am Title: The LAst Day

But I want more! I really do. But yes I guess. An author can do what they want to their readers - torture and intrigue. : P

Author's Response: I could take that one comment in so many ways...lol. I'm sorry hun, When I wrote it I just wanted to get the cob webs out and see if I could lure you as the reader out.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-05-07 - 08:45 am Title: The LAst Day

I loved the 4 versions of Doom part, that just made me smile. And Logan living for more than three thousand years – whoa! I do think this story was way too short, reading more like a long obituary. I’d like to know why they all lived so long because if Ororo was in her hundred’s Remy and Forge had to be as well. And I’m curious about Sam sitting with her, that was rather romantic. It’s a story that makes me ask a lot of questions, makes me want to know so much more. I like death fics quite a lot, they’re some of my absolute favorites as morbid as that sounds.



Author's Response: Is that not what an author is suppose to do for the readers? I actually wanted it to read like an obituary to set a mood I was shooting for.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-17-07 - 08:32 pm Title: The LAst Day

Now this was different. Good use of canon and all the possibilities for Ororo's life. A planet called Wakanda? Now that's neat! Again, neat to see a far-flung future with these characters, and I like the idea of Logan, a guy with a long life and a lot of loyalty, being by her side at her deathbed.

Author's Response: well I was thinking about the song "you know my name" as I wrote this....don't know why though....

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