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Reviewer: ToughSpirit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-04-07 - 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really like how this fic began. You have to continue. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-01-07 - 09:28 am Title: Chapter 1

Poor Ro, I so felt for her. It was totally understandable where she was coming from.
There will be more chapters to this, right? Please? :) Logan's POV maybe, letting us know that he made up his mind a long time ago. What'd he want with Jean anyway, ugh *shakes head* ;D

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-30-07 - 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

This caught me unawares as I don't usally read NC17 but it was at the windrider yahoo group and I needed a RoLo fix and I don't think you've written anything else so I was intrigued, read and enjoyed. It's a very nice piece and the last three lines say it all. Well done.

Reviewer: ladyleofn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-26-07 - 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great Story ! I would love to hear Logan's point of view.

Author's Response: I'm working on trying to get Logan's view point of this situation. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-25-07 - 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very nice. Is this a one-shot or are you going to post another chapter? I'd like to see a follow up.

Author's Response: I was going to let it stay a one-shot, but I'm going to try and write Logan's POV. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-25-07 - 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

awww, thanks for the shout out, but this was all you. Wonderfully written and emotional straight from the start. I love it, and I do hope you add a chapter or two to it. If not, it's a great oneshot. **loves**

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the advice, windy. I really mean that. I do want to add more to it, so I might be asking for your help again.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-25-07 - 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

Too many good things to describe. But I will do it anyway.

I love how this was told from Ororo's POV. The theme was definitely classic, the woman who loves a man against common sense and who can't let go of him. You could feel her torment, it made you wince, yet at the same time you understood how she felt and why. The language was smooth and easy to read.

I hope you'll keep posting stories, woman. This was fantastic.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Cee. It really meant a lot. I do hope to keep writing and I hope you update Abandon. :)

Reviewer: STARNOBLE03 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-25-07 - 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was pretty hot! Im feelin' the tormented love thing. I think that you wrote this very well...I feel drama coming...maybe Jean changes her mind, maybe Logan changes his? Who know's ...Its gonna be good though. UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response: It wont be long enough to get Jean's view on this situation or her feelings for Logan; you'll have to get that from his view point, but I don't hope to have an update soon though. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-25-07 - 09:07 am Title: Chapter 1

Good start, more chapter(s) please. ;)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and an update should be coming...but I don't know how soon.

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