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Reviewer: rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-27-07 - 06:36 am Title: Ice Cream

Wow, this is amazing! Its sweet and SO ROMANTIC. Sigh I love how they hadn't said a word yet felt the connection. Creative, babe.

Rolletti

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Did you really find the whole story sweet and romantic? Oh well :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: darkhorse2763 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-26-07 - 10:42 pm Title: Ice Cream

Ohhhhhh, yay! I really enjoyed that one! The simple act of dancing, of enjoying ice cream on a summer day.... All that def came to life in this wee one-shot, along with the sparks of desire and interest between a couple who barely exchange a single word. Brava!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I was really worried no one would like this one and that everything I was trying to have come across would get lost. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-26-07 - 06:52 pm Title: Ice Cream

A stranger leaving the train right behind me after watching me for the whole ride... omg, I so totally would have freaked out! LOL :D
Ro stepping up to him handing him an ice cream cone was great though! :) "A cowboy hat, cigar and a waffle cone." Love that visual... hhm... might put that on paper should I ever get some time.

Author's Response: lol yeah that's where the song lyrics fit... "He could have a knife..." I thought about putting more description in, but I liked how that sounded without the additional clothing descriptions. Flannel shirt, jeans, leather jacket... too wordy. I'm glad you enjoyed my craziness lol

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-26-07 - 02:05 pm Title: Ice Cream

This is a great oneshot. I like that she takes some initiative to have face time with him. The waffle cone scene was great. The dance in the park was romantic.

Goodness knows most women wouldn't be so receptive to dancing with some guy following them from a train. But this was darn cute.

Author's Response: lol maybe I should change the summary to "Ororo shows us all what NOT to do when faced with a creepy stranger". I'm really glad you enjoyed this!

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