I feel a little (okay, a lot) blasphemous reading some of this. But as long as I remind myself this is a fictional interpretation of Jesus, God and the devil, I feel a little better.

Truth be told, though, this is kind of an extremely amazing work of fiction, soul-sacrificing aside. I've never read anything like it, the description and interpretation you have of hell drew me in and I couldn't stop reading til I got to the end. How sad that this isn't finished! I'd love to have read more of your little universe, and the journey that this Logan and 'Ro are trekking on. Some fantastic stuff, here.

This is a corrupt sensous guilty pleasure for me!

Interesting tale, I hope you update soon. The sex is HAWT!!!

That was bizarre. Fun, but definitely bizarre.

I love Forge, so bring him back. It's funny that he's the Devil's favorite advocate. It fits him. “I just want to start you off slow. I know this must be a headfuck." That made me giggle. That and Ororo telling Logan he looked like a donkey...once again, you came up with some great lines.

Really great pants. That line floored me. This whole thing floored me.

I was upset the last time I looked for the update and saw that the second chapter hadn't been quite added yet, but you delivered. It was grotesque, it was compelling, it was occasionally touching. The piggy back scene tickled me when she leaned her head against him. Neither one of them was expecting her to give in, and it was almost a tender gesture. I love that.

Ororo evil is so seldom used. You do it so well.

Author's Response: Thank you...i was struggling with adding chapters so that was a test. DYK you cant use the word "curls" without the s on the site??? How RETARDED is that!!!!!!

Your summary really captured my interest so every time I popped into the Realm I kept telling myself I should give this a chance. Well I finally did. I'm not disappointed I have to say. It's very different and I always enjoy original concepts. It's quite intriguing and rather a pity no one's taken you up on the Round Robin but also that you haven't continued this.

I'm curious what mission you had planned for Storm, what position with the Devil and let me say I really got a kick out of your Devil. A very interesting idea of Hell indeed. Also, the sex seemed to fit in perfectly with your version of Hell. I'm not so sure of the relationship with Ororo and Remy, they seem intimate but aren't? Well no matter it's a story with much potential.

Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah I feel like because I have such a strong viewpoint in this story its hard for others to come in and take the story. Maybe I'll add two more chapters or so to get the ball rolling better. Also its my first roundrobin of any type so practice, practice, practice!!!

Wow.

The first few paragraphs set this up so well to be a parody in the same vein as "Dogma." Never knew there were disco balls in hell.

But there's almost too much packed into one chapter to drink in. This lightning quick sex kinda thrown into the middle of it, which almost would have been better if it had been "worked up to" so a reader could focus more on the dynamics of who Ororo and Logan are as characters. Sexually attracted to each other, and so far, with nothing to lose. For the moment!

I don't know how this could be a round robin, but I'll be interested to see how anyone adds to it and carries on the flavor of this story. It's clever, it's quick, funny, and decadent.


Author's Response: It was written in an hour and I figured I'd just post it for the heck of it...Thanks for the words. I wanted to establish some elements that if anyone cared to they could play off them but that doesn't have to happen...meh, its all in good fun!