[Report This]Date: 04-23-09 - 09:12 pm Title: Trigger (cont)
Beguiled by memories of the past - what a sucker! I’m just kidding. I found this quite interesting. I kept wondering if he’d drink it, thinking he wouldn’t and then . . . ! Very unexpected. Curious to see the results. Good short chapter. It’s always good when you update though I wish it were more frequently.
[Report This]Date: 04-02-09 - 11:01 pm Title: Trigger (cont)
Oh how I've missed you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Who are these people and what do they want with Logan. I love that just the sound of Ororo's voice was enough to calm him. I'm interested to find out what the potion they gave Logan is going to do to him.
[Report This]Date: 04-01-09 - 05:44 pm Title: Trigger
“Did you know there was no alarm?”
“Yep the very second no siren started blaring after I made the cut.”
Flipping hilarious!! That got me laughing. xD Awesome work, keep it up!
[Report This]Date: 04-01-09 - 02:53 pm Title: Trigger
Chet's BACK!!! YAY!
Too many zingers to count, I chuckled my way through this. Don't worry overmuch about this needing a beta, the sentence structures were good, it's only punctuation that needs tweaking, but it was still a great read. I was just thinking about you and your stories yesterday! I love the war lingo and the idea of Logan as a soldier in WWII. No one does that with him. And adding Rose in this as one of his phantoms(?) was genius.
[Report This]Date: 10-18-08 - 06:49 pm Title: A Road Paved with Bones
“Keep your prayers bub, I’m the meanest mother fucker in this valley.”
I Loved that line lol!!!
Great update
[Report This]Date: 10-18-08 - 03:02 pm Title: A Road Paved with Bones
I always love Emma coming around to stir things up, and I love how she rushed right in to scope him out and sample him. I also love the effect it had on Ororo to resume their game, he's already affecting her and making her act bad. Ororo's interesting when she's bad. Poor Hank! At least he got a kiss! The hunting scene was great, it always brings to mind the old Uncanny Claremont issues when he's just doing what comes naturally, except he isn't just reaching out to touch a skittish doe, he's actually going after dinner this time! Good work.
[Report This]Date: 10-18-08 - 02:14 pm Title: A Road Paved with Bones
I dig the sexual tension VERY much. I want him to hammer Ro like a railroad spike. :) I'm glad she's not gonna back down. Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 10-16-08 - 02:59 am Title: A Road Paved with Bones
uh-ohhhh.....
I do think emma is biting off more than she can chew!
this is really good. I love how you emphasized the darkness of logan's inner self.
more, please!
[Report This]Date: 09-24-08 - 11:34 pm Title: Something Dark
Holy Hell, what a chapter!! And Yum, to the Logan/Ororo action. It was hot, hard and intense. Just like them! You have a style that flows exceptionally well. No overdone narratives, but enough to firmly ensconce the reader into the story, while at the same time giving enough leeway for imagination to take hold and make them a PART of the story. That's a rare and wonderful talent. more soon, I hope.
Author's Response: Wow thanks a ton Windy those compliments made me lightheaded , i am such a big fan of yours i got the whole fanboy thing going now lol thanks again and more will be coming soon
[Report This]Date: 09-24-08 - 06:17 pm Title: Something Dark
Wow......wow :)
Author's Response: lol i hope that means ya liked it lol thanks a lot :)
[Report This]Date: 09-24-08 - 05:13 pm Title: Something Dark
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter UPDATE SOON.
Author's Response: Thanks lad ya liked it update be comin soon
[Report This]Date: 09-24-08 - 03:08 pm Title: Something Dark
Hi! Glad you got the chapter. A few of the revisions look like they didn't erase the old errors, the inserted punctuation is just next to the bits t hat were supposed to be taken out, but that's because of a difference in the Word I used and yours, I think. You had it saved as a .wps file, and it kept messing with the formatting when I used the revision tool! But, most of it took.
Great chapter, Chet. I love the dark feel and the imagery, since you know I'm a stickler for surreal environments and characters. Hope you like the working title I used for the chapter, I just needed a filename to save it under. Those words jumped out at me when I read them.
Author's Response: Thanks Cee :) sorry bout the trouble with the beta thanks for everything you did with it though and yes i loved the working title it really jumped at me it was so simple but straight to the heart i loved it thanks again
[Report This]Date: 05-22-08 - 01:45 am Title: In the Blood
Holy moley! Now that's a story! I have to say when I saw you had a new story I was surprised, thrilled and thinking what about the others? I love all your stories but this one is more in line with the comics and you have a really good take on Logan. I like the cast of characters too, love that Cecilia's in it. I've always liked her. Another great story. Hope you update soon AND update your other stories please!
Author's Response: Thanks Darlin glad ya liked it and yes i will get back to my other ones soon glad ya liked the cast too :)
[Report This]Date: 05-18-08 - 06:17 pm Title: In the Blood
You have many unfinshed stories that i would love for you to continue. But i am grateful to get anything from you wheather it be a update or a new story. Speaking of new story, i love it. I always enjoy a different spin on the Ultimate Universe, so i am sure i will continue to read this story. I enjoy your writing very much, i like everything from the characters you have chosen, like Alex and Emma to the relantionships that you created. Hope you update soon, love it!
Author's Response: thank you very much glad ya liked it i will get to the other stories soon glad to know you enjoy these things of mine lol :)
[Report This]Date: 05-13-08 - 08:59 pm Title: In the Blood
The first chapter is very exciting, hurry up with the next one.
Author's Response: Thanks more coming soon :)
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