Reviews For Aqua Vitae
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Reviewer: NoWhere_Man Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-30-08 - 10:13 pm Title: Trickle, part 1

I'm really liking where this story is going. I love the actions oppose to dialogue route you have taken. Gives more impact to what going on in each of the scene, all the underlining means and feelings between these two.

Very well done.

Author's Response: They're not the most talkative people always, I guess... And I think they're trying to keep their feet out of their mouths at present, treading on a thin, thin ice. Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-06-08 - 05:04 pm Title: Trickle, part 1

Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Red Lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-04-08 - 06:59 pm Title: Trickle, part 1

Nice story. I can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Thank you! Unfortunately it is like pulling teeth from a hedgehog at the moment...

Reviewer: kayjin927 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-04-08 - 06:27 am Title: Trickle, part 1

You can write. Nuff said on that topic, now on to the story. Beautifully wriiten, well detailed and capturing a moment in the history of our favourite couple.

This was an awesome chapter and I am looking forward to the others. All I can say is you make the world a little bit better with writing like this.

SKJ

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Your words warmed the cold, black cockles of my heart. :)

Reviewer: Voli23 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-04-08 - 04:43 am Title: Trickle, part 1

VERY nice and sweet!!! Perfection to the very last detail. :) This could be a one-shot it's so tastefully written. I can't wait for the other installments; I love this different play on their love story.

Author's Response: I continually must bite my tongue to keep the tone right, I have a bad tendency to let everything turn into a crackball comedy. Thanks for reading, thank you for reviewing, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. The other installments are coming as soon as Our Heroes start co-operating, but they're more into going at it like bunnies at the moment.

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