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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-06-09 - 11:28 pm Title: Pieces of an Erased Puzzle

My all time favorite X-Men cartoon! I like this, wish there was more.

Author's Response: Thank you. I do plan to use these characters again. If I do add to this, I hope to hear from you again.

Reviewer: black_rose Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-28-09 - 12:29 am Title: Pieces of an Erased Puzzle

Okay, "One Man's Worth" is by far my favorite episode and I'm SO happy to see someone finally decided to continue it! I hope my review is an encouragement to continue this lovely work of art!!

Author's Response: You may consider me encouraged. Any suggestions as to where I should go from here?

Reviewer: bringirl2001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-15-09 - 11:55 pm Title: Pieces of an Erased Puzzle

I enjoyed this fic- I LOVE one man's worth-- the idea of those two married- yeah- one of my favorite shows- in the x-men series- thanks for writing-

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: The Goddess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-14-09 - 04:33 pm Title: Pieces of an Erased Puzzle

Good idea for aft the cartoon show. Are you doing a second chapter?

Author's Response: Hadn't planned on it, but I do have plans to use these two in future Beacon stories.

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-13-09 - 11:51 pm Title: Pieces of an Erased Puzzle

That's what I'm talkin' about. I love One Man's Worth fic. "Why didn't I smell you comin'?" That's funny, very typical Wolvie.

Author's Response: Thank you. Though I'm not sure what's funny about the line. It just seemed like something he would pick up on. Especially a version of him that's been fighting a war for survival.

Reviewer: NoWhere_Man Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-13-09 - 06:21 pm Title: Pieces of an Erased Puzzle

Hmmm...I was always wondering if someone was ever going to make an addition to that episode. I've had an idea in mind but rather it would be going in the opposite direction. A story of how Storm and Wolverine met. And despite being in war times how they found love and got married.

I have to say this was an interesting read. But the way you have the summary stated, I was thinking that you had planned for a long series.

Also for a bit of critique, have to remember to capitalize the letter in the beginning of each sentence. Dialogue included. There are various areas were that's not done.

Anyway, look forward to more.

Author's Response: Your story idea sounds interesting. If you ever write it, I'd like to read it. I do have plans for using these two in future Beacon stories, though those stories wont necessarily focus on them, but if you have any suggestions for rewriting the summary for this story so that it sounds like a one shot I'd like to hear them. And thanks for the critique. I'll look through the story and fix that problem.

Reviewer: tigerstorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-12-09 - 11:33 pm Title: Pieces of an Erased Puzzle

sounds pretty interesting. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

One thing, could you put a bit more spacing in between the paragraphs and dialogue?

Author's Response: I actually intended for this to be a oneshot. I do have some ideas for a second chapter, but noting solid yet. If you have any suggestions I'd like to hear them. Sorry about the spacing problem. This is my first time posting on this site. I'll fix it tomorrow.

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