[Report This]Date: 08-11-09 - 11:50 pm Title: We have a SITUATION
I really like this story its different from the rest... u know the whole teacher/student scenario lol
I hope they eventually become a couple but somehow thats gonna prove to be quite difficult
I hope to see an update soon lol :)
[Report This]Date: 07-27-09 - 03:24 pm Title: We have a SITUATION
man, poor Logan and Ororo. It was so funny that they meant well at first with their goodbye until they got to the door...
talk about taking one for the road.
This was great. On one hand, you almost feel sorry for Jean, but on the other hand, meh...she had her chance. I like how this is written, you give each of the characters a lot of dignity without making any of them caricatures of the innocent girl/jealous ex/confused guy triangle. Ororo's not completely innocent, Logan's not that confused and Jean's jealousy isn't completely unjustified. The Professor's the only one keeping a level head!
[Report This]Date: 07-24-09 - 04:37 pm Title: We have a SITUATION
oh my. oh my that was delicious. you are a fantastic care-taker of this story and moving it at an excruciatingly perfect pace. I wonder what is going to happen when he visits her. Will they go all the way or savor the time together and hope to fulfill their desires after the semester. I will most certainly stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: 07-19-09 - 10:56 am Title: I Want You To Hate Me
Love Ro kicking ghis butt
[Report This]Date: 07-19-09 - 10:45 am Title: Where Was That Line We Crossed
Love Ro handling the Waitress
[Report This]Date: 07-19-09 - 10:26 am Title: Schools Out Forever
Happy yo see that Logan turn down Jean I can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 07-18-09 - 09:07 pm Title: Ponytail
Seriously!!! I was so into the almost kiss moment!!! Damn you JEAN!
[Report This]Date: 07-08-09 - 09:47 pm Title: Ponytail
Oh do i hate jean gray!! I can't wait for the next chapter in this story. Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 07-08-09 - 04:51 am Title: Ponytail
Wow, talk about the cat getting let out of the bag. Everything is out in the open now. I really wonder what's going to happen with the Professor and the rest of them.
Not a bad chapter, had a few spelling errors. The think the word you were looking for was "quite" not "quit". Some other small things, no real biggie.
I have to agree with Cee, the Log-Ali exchange was hilarious.
Author's Response: Thanks for catching those for me. Ive made those changes...I'll try not to do the "hot off the press" releases so much...lol
[Report This]Date: 07-07-09 - 04:05 pm Title: Ponytail
aw, man, time for everything to hit the fan.
maybe if she'd summoned a fog first to cover her back, that guy wouldn't have caught up to her so easily. Darn it, Ororo! Way to have your snappy getaway interrupted!
This was good. I enjoyed it, as usual. I like the exchange between Logan and Ali, it was pretty believable.
[Report This]Date: 06-26-09 - 02:06 pm Title: Let's Take it Slow
okay, I didn't need to read about the bile while I was eating breakfast, but all is forgiven. The scene itself was funny.
I also love Sean! His laugh rattling the windows is priceless, and he and Betsy make a cute bickering couple, if you decide to go that route with them. I always wished they had hooked him up with Emma in Generation X, but it wasn't to be.
More, please.
[Report This]Date: 06-26-09 - 05:19 am Title: Let's Take it Slow
I think the claw thing with Psylocke was very well played. Again, this story continues to meet and excel my expectations, can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 06-20-09 - 04:22 pm Title: Reality Check
Perfect. Beautiful.
As much as I love a RoLo love scene, I also like seeing them exercise some self-control so they can get stuff sorted out. This is just so well written.
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