[Report This]Date: 10-16-09 - 03:28 pm Title: Seven Days
That was Brilliant!!! So beautiful. I'm in awe of how to basically told the entire love story of RoLo from start to finish in a one chapter story, it was short and yet very sweet, and I wasn't at all left feeling like there should have been more. Fantastic job.
[Report This]Date: 09-29-09 - 01:52 am Title: Seven Days
Beautiful ending, wonderful story! I hope you don't stay away so long in future but if you do it's a nice story to leave us with.
[Report This]Date: 09-13-09 - 09:04 pm Title: Seven Days
God it's been a long time since I posted here and a long time since I've seen your post. I didn't know you even had an LJ, so do I. I'm vaberella---send me an email at my yahoo account (starts with vaberella). Anyway it was a bloody great read. It was gutting, I'll assume that Storm died in the last one. I was laughing and loved the way they feel in love and the way your wrote the story was very original and sweet. The last part just got to me since I was expecting the baby since the love and marriage part was fulfilled. It was a twist that hurt. Meh---so of course I cried for him, for them. I think my favorite part was the scene of their fight, assuming it was Friday or Thursday. It was brilliant, very Logan and very Storm. I loved the name calling and him getting his arsed fried. ~sigh~ It stories like yours that always manages to reel me back in. Great work and hope you write more and finish up any of your other stories.
[Report This]Date: 09-12-09 - 11:25 pm Title: Seven Days
Wow, that was a great story. You had so many emotions within it that it felt me almost speechless.
Nicely done.
[Report This]Date: 09-10-09 - 05:33 am Title: Seven Days
i have to say that i logged-on expecting to see a few new stories, but not expecting to see windrider back on the scene. i knew before i clicked on the story that it was going to be beautifully written and powerful. little did i know that i would read it twice, with equal enthusiasm. you were missed. your words remain steady and strong.
quite simply beautiful. this...from a fan over the years.
thank you
[Report This]Date: 09-09-09 - 07:49 am Title: Seven Days
Windy, I have to thank you for this. Slowly but surely I've been trying to return back to the fandom, since my previous commitment seems to be over, but we sometimes need a good push. This was exactly what the doctor ordered.
I have to say not only was this a surprise but it was a pleasant surprise to see your name on the recent story list. Heck you even got Pari reviewing which is no small feat. ^^
This story was a nice change of pace from the stories you usually do. Especially in its presentation. The changing tense and points of view was compelling, it gave the story its own interesting flair.
I especially loved the line about "good old fashion avoidance". That was priceless.
The one question I do have, the section that was right about wedding scene kind of threw me off, i thought Ororo died somehow and it was Logan that despite his ability to heal, that type of pain was something he could never recover from. But then the next line they're both together. So I don't know. Regardless, good story and good to see you're around and still writing. Hope to see more from you in the future. Later lass. ^^
Author's Response: Well, hey there, stranger! First, thank you for this very awesome review! **happy dance**
And you're right. She died. The first 3 days are in a scattered linear order, but I really didn't like that overly much so I changed the last 4 to be random. I think I may re-work that though, so it's easier to follow. You're not the first to mention it, so yeah. I'll adjust that. :D
[Report This]Date: 09-08-09 - 03:51 am Title: Seven Days
That was amazing!! Beautifully written, a story worth telling and you told it perfectly.
Author's Response: **bows** Thank YOU so much for reviewing and hosting this site! It's always wonderful when you pop on and review! **does happy dance**
[Report This]Date: 09-07-09 - 08:48 pm Title: Seven Days
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!
Can I just say I love these? I don't know what it is about this structure, but every line has this nice, poetic yet prosey quality, kinda lyrical, with these excellent images that aren't overdone. You've always had a knack for that anyway, harkening back to Bloodbonds, with the whole "capturing her tears like diamonds" thing, you have a flare for visual metaphors.
Yeah. I'm a sucker for more, but you know this. I'm so glad you visit this fandom once in a while. So, listen to Taco, and go ahead and write more. Go on, now, shoo...
Author's Response: LMAO. You are far too good for my flailing ego, you know that? **HUGS** This style is new to me, it's kind of similar to my 50 sentences style, in that it's like writing on the run. Bare bones, so every word matters. I am glad you responded so well to it! I was nervous about how it would read. :D
[Report This]Date: 09-07-09 - 03:53 pm Title: Seven Days
*reaches for yet another tissue* Where has this wonderful piece of work been all my life? Oh yeah, right.
That was beautiful, windrider, really, really effin' beautiful.
Author's Response: LOL. Awwwwww, glad you liked it! **hands tissues**
[Report This]Date: 09-07-09 - 04:06 am Title: Seven Days
ugh that was awesome. i have really. really. missed your writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! **hugs**
[Report This]Date: 09-06-09 - 08:03 pm Title: Seven Days
this is certainly a departure from the usual. not bad. i certainly like the tickle day. :)
Author's Response: Just glad you like it! **huggles**
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