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Reviewer: nsha Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-13-10 - 12:32 am Title: London

I love this! Such a good story!
:)

Author's Response: Thanks! Wow I should update this...

Reviewer: dragongigi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-17-09 - 06:39 pm Title: the plot begins

Chapter 1 was well written and descriptive. This chapter was confusing. You hint at danger "Logan felt his senses going wild" when he enter the danger room but downplay it to him only sensing Ororo and not the 2nd woman. Why? Also why Storm didn't confront her? You know if a stranger in your house you wouldn't wait. The fighting scene was not as descriptive as the dancing in chapter 1. In other stories I read it was great when you saw it from one of the character's point of view: the frustration in not getting a hit, the pain of the nicks and cuts, the plotting to take her down. Also how did she get in? High tech facility, mutants everywhere and no one sense her?
Sorry about my ramblings. Hope I didn't offend you or your writing. Like the original theme of the story Logan being uncharacter.

Author's Response: LOl no offense taken whatsoever, I did most of the nondescriptiveness on purpose. Wait my friend wait. It will all become clear in time. :)

Reviewer: stormyangel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-16-09 - 09:35 pm Title: A past, a present

It's such an oddball idea but completely brilliant! You have Logan tap dancing in my head now! Lol a very great beginning to a great story! Keep it up!

Reviewer: mika Uriah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-16-09 - 02:25 pm Title: Twists

yeah..So....Uhm..Like...Continue?! Please?!

Reviewer: Pari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-13-09 - 10:36 pm Title: A past, a present

I had to review this because of the other 70 something readers no one else bothered (shame on you guys). First I have to say I was giggling after I read the summary, Logan and river dancer, seriously. So of course I just had to read it. I must say I was pleasantly surprised, it was a very cute little fic, but I cannot and probably will never envision Logan River Dancing, that alone made this read like a comedy for me (I am seriously giggling right now). That being said putting Jean and Storm in the story as you did was brilliant. So kudos for you for doing something different with the characters, I like stories and authors that think outside the box.

Author's Response: Lol thanks. I like doing differant things to. Come on He'd be hot as a river dancer all those rippling muscles. Will play with that more in the story later. First some plot and normal Logan like behaviour.

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