Date: 08-19-12 - 03:26 am Title: Comfort
Very touching. Thank you for not making us wait very long for their reunion. I just wish I knew what happened with their daughter and the rest of this story. Excellent job drawing me in with your imaginative fic. A A
Date: 01-03-10 - 09:41 am Title: Comfort
Thanks for continuing, hope there's more chapter (s) to come. ;)
Date: 01-02-10 - 06:36 am Title: Hope
Please continue.
Author's Response: Just updated. Your review gave me the urge to update! Thanks for that.
:)
Date: 12-15-09 - 11:06 pm Title: Hope
More! I am excited to see where this story is going. I would suggest in your writing style to make it more in the third person. it would read a bit smoother, but is also fine. Just a silly suggestion!
Author's Response: i totally agree! i just needed to get the basics out there. thanks for the suggestion! it really, really helps.
:)
Date: 12-02-09 - 02:16 am Title: Hope
Absolutely beautiful! I cannot wait till the next chapter!
Author's Response: awhh! thank you!