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Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-07-10 - 01:10 am Title: Chapter 2

This reminds me of Law and Order, and I love the cast. Keep it coming.

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-23-10 - 03:56 pm Title: Ch. 1

Hi!

Betas just edit your chapters and give you feedback, and/or corrections to your draft before you post it, or in some cases, reformat it so it makes the transition from your Word program to this site easier. You just hit the link on the person's user ID page that allows you to email them, let them know you're requesting their help as a beta, and wait for them to reply.

Your chapter is actually pretty decent as is, I didn't see a lot of grammatical goofs or misspellings. I don't read a lot of stories with OC's myself, but this is well written. Keep it going. Bring in those characters that we're familiar with. This has great potential.

Author's Response: Tnx Cee, glad you liked it and I'm glad that it isn't badly written (my grammar and spelling I mean) I've been working hard to get them right and its good to see I'm getting better. I hope I'll be able to write the next chapter soon but I just don't have enough time at the moment... Anyway thank you again for reviewing :)

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