You must login () to review.
Reviewer: AngelAloft Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-13-11 - 04:07 am Title: The cure

You have done an excellent job of integrating Hawk into the story thus far. Looking forward to seeing how you turn this to a rolo relationship.

Author's Response: Thanks. The RoLo is coming up. In the novel, it shows just a bit more... Kriff I took the book upstairs. Well, I believe it was pgs 169, 179 and 301 where it showed the most. I also would suggest the epilogue, that's pretty good to.

Reviewer: AngelAloft Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-13-11 - 04:02 am Title: Danger Room

Really good re-write of the movie. You weren't kidding when you said you like yourself some Hawk. :) You are unique in that you have not pidgeoned holed yourself into the usual use of the same characters. Well done.

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: AngelAloft Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-13-11 - 03:32 am Title: Prologue

Ya know Beautiful S, I haven't chanced to read a lot of your stuff, but girl you have a flair for writing. Keep up with your talent. I really enjoyed this prologue. It was neat and concise. Bravo

Author's Response: Thanks, but I think most of it was from the novel. I forgot, FCAT''s gone to my head, and right now, I think these reviews have put me in a slightly better mood since I found out some despairing news. (not really, but I consider it despairing).

You must login () to review.