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Reviewer: Victoria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-13-11 - 01:54 am Title: Chapter 6

ok now that makes me happy that they were able to rescue the baby but i know that was a little to easty but i am loving that everyone including storm was made aware of jean betrayle i am hoping and whishing she gets her harshly and storm and logan dont hold back!!!!!

Author's Response: That one may be a little disappointing. And yeah, I'm trying to figure out a way to make it harder, but my mind's blank.

Reviewer: Victoria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-13-11 - 01:50 am Title: Chapter 5

glad that storm is going on the rescue of her baby however i just feel that something bad is going to happen especially with jean not going she may contact sabertooth before the xmen get there uh come on professor and look into jeans mind uh really fustrated with the clueless professor anywhoo i am enjoying the story!!!!!

Author's Response: Sorry. I'm not used to writing stories with Jean, but I do like frustrating people once in awhile (whether it be in suspense or just down right cluelessness.)

Reviewer: Victoria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-12-11 - 05:29 am Title: Missing

die jean a very horrible and painful death for what you did to that poor inocent baby and you so called bf ororo only for your tacky lust for a man that dont want you at all!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: You are officially my favorite reviewer on the realm :P

Reviewer: Victoria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-12-11 - 05:27 am Title: Chapter 3

kill jean first logan and take pleasure in killing that bleep then kill that sick bleep victor just rip his bleeping head off and shove it down his throat uhh soo bleeped right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Lol.

Reviewer: Victoria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-12-11 - 05:24 am Title: Deal with the Devil

convinced i like although i cant express how much because i curse alot and jean in this chapter would have me bleeping all over the place!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: beeep. :P

Reviewer: Victoria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-12-11 - 05:22 am Title: Missing

ohh i think i like this story!!!

Author's Response: Thanks.

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