Date: 01-07-12 - 12:21 am Title: Part 3 - Final
wow, amazing and beautiful. great work
[Report This]Date: 10-18-09 - 07:21 pm Title: Part 3 - Final
Perfect is all I can say... I love that they take each other in with their eyes , it says so much..... Him touching her in was that make her moan is so real and can be felt in the reading of this sensual story... and lovemaking for hours in a gentle pleasant bonding intimacy....their climax so beautiful and not wanting to break their bond is soooo pleasing and loving..... wonderful ending with the snuggling into his chest it is so loving and passionate to feel your lover....
Author's Response: Thank you very much for such wonderful critiques of one of my favorite moments in the day of the life of our RoLo pair. I think they're great together in any way they see fit to be with each other at any given moment. It's the love, respect, understanding and unwavering trust that makes these two perfect for each other. Thanks for such great reviews of my story. - W6C
[Report This]Date: 10-18-09 - 06:57 pm Title: Ch. 2
Umm yes, nice progression and might I add mmmm so in the heat of the moment and very erotic...I like that she trust him and he can do anything to her..
Author's Response: That would be the ultimate of love wouldn't it? Total trust. Nothing more romantic than that. - W6C
[Report This]Date: 10-18-09 - 06:48 pm Title: After the Mission
I love this part 1
I can feel everything...You do a great job in description... very sensual the bath with the candles setting the mood...mmm him washing her, playing with the nipples and wrapping her arms around his legs playing with his hair as she feels his arousal in her lower back..... Yes this is very very sensual
good job *winks*
Author's Response: Thanks Linda, I appreciate your wonderful critique and your thoughts on part 1. I'm glad you enjoyed it all. - W6C
[Report This]Date: 10-17-09 - 12:31 am Title: Part 3 - Final
That was very romantic. I could see it vividly.
Author's Response: Thank you Sacred. I like going for the romantic, I'm glad you could see it vividly. Thanks very much for the reviews. I really appreciate it. - W6C
[Report This]Date: 03-01-07 - 05:28 am Title: After the Mission
I think I already reviewed this.
Or not...
Tastefully done. I like the love in it, as usual, radiating out of both of them.
Author's Response: Thank you Cecelia. I do try to always be tasteful an' I hope I never miss that mark. The love an' passion they feel for one another, and the expression of that love is always my main focus. I appreciate you takin' the time to let me know that it worked for you. --- W6C
[Report This]Date: 02-24-07 - 11:35 am Title: Part 3 - Final
Brilliantly sweet. I think this is the tenderest NC-17 story I’ve ever read. Loved reading this from Logan’s perspective. I’m glad you’re on a roll, W6C.
Author's Response: *smiles* Thanks Darlin. Soft an' tender an' romantic... that's what I was shootin' for. That... perfect moment. --- W6C
[Report This]Date: 02-24-07 - 11:28 am Title: Ch. 2
There's hardly anything more sensuous than a man washing a woman's hair. I seldom read NC-17 stories but yours are always tasteful and well done. And too, it's always nice to see things from a male's perspective.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks for the kind words Darlin'. I'll tell ya', we think it's sensual too. *grins* I'm glad you enjoyed it from Logan's pov. --- W6C
[Report This]Date: 01-30-07 - 05:31 am Title: Ch. 2
I'm loving this... infact I love all your work. Please continue
Author's Response: Well thank you, Painted Rose. I'll be posting up another real soon, it's almost finished. I appreciate the feedback . I still need to finish up the next part of this one. Really need to focus on finishin' this one up. Thanks for takin' the time. --- W6c
[Report This]Date: 12-17-05 - 12:39 pm Title: Ch. 2
Perfect. Yup, that about sums it up for me. Perfect. I was right in the room with them, I can see, hear and smell everything. That was amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you, Windrider. I'm glad you enjoyed it. --- W6C
[Report This]Date: 11-24-04 - 05:31 pm Title: After the Mission
Right when it was getting exciting, you go and cut it off. You have got to update!
Author's Response: Just so ya' know... I updated. Chapter 2 is up and Ch. 3 is on it's way. --- W6C
[Report This]Date: 11-18-03 - 12:20 pm Title: After the Mission
Pari you are right! W6C, you better finish this fic! Actually you better finish all your fics! Still love you though.
Author's Response: I will. And I know ya' do. *smile*
Thanks. ---W6C
[Report This]Date: 11-18-03 - 10:40 am Title: After the Mission
Yes of course you should continue, what kind of crazy question is that, huh?!
I am with the others, all manner of torture will be done to your person if'n you don't continue.
Author's Response: *salutes*
I said "I'm on it." I DID say that. Okay I'm goin'. Geez. ---W6C
[Report This]Date: 11-18-03 - 10:26 am Title: After the Mission
I've got the ropes and torches, Pari. I'm wit you girl. So you had better do like the lady says w6c>:( You do have a way of write that gets me wet...I mean...waiting for more:D I'm gonna be checking back here everyday for updates, plz don't disaapoint me;) Sara Alice
Author's Response: Yikes! Ropes an' torches...? Yes'm. I'm on it, really. But I got other fics in the works too, so..... yer gonna check EVERY day? Oooo. hmmm. Guess I better get the next part out huh? Okay. ---W6C
[Report This]Date: 11-18-03 - 10:24 am Title: After the Mission
If you stop I will rally up a lench mob, and hunt you down:( You better continue, Goddess we have enough ppl here that are in the cliffhanger Gang, myself being the leader:D we don't need no more members, now get ta posting the rest:) That was hot and just how it is in 'my' dreams;) Please go on and fast. Pari
Author's Response: HA!! First time I ever heard you say "faster".... oh wait, no that's not true. lololololol
And it was judged on another group that I am the "Master of Cliffhangers" so back off , Pari.
*sticks out tongue* lololololol --- W6C
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