[Report This]Date: 09-07-15 - 03:15 pm Title: Fateful Meeting
Damn, that was hot. Great writing. Loved it and I didnt figure out who it was until right nefore the end.
Date: 12-15-10 - 06:07 pm Title: Fateful Meeting
I remember reading This the first time you posted and being shocked that its raven and after reading it again its still mind blowing. Simply amazing
Author's Response: Thank you very much, Ellen. I'm really thrilled that someone has taken up reading these first stories. I really need to get back to editing them, since I've learned so much about formatting since these were posted. lol
Thanks again, it's really appreciated. - W6C
[Report This]Date: 10-17-09 - 02:45 am Title: Fateful Meeting
Wow. Okay. Wow. I did not see that coming.
Author's Response: And that's precisely what I was hoping when I wrote it. I'm glad it worked for you :) - W6C
[Report This]Date: 07-22-09 - 10:07 pm Title: Fateful Meeting
That is some FIERCE writing ability!
That ending made my jaw drop to the floor!
Author's Response: Thanks very much, Monica. I really appreciate you taking the time to leave a comment. I'm real glad you liked that story. It was fun to write and hoped I'd get that twist in there good. - W6C
[Report This]Date: 07-22-09 - 10:07 pm Title: Fateful Meeting
That is some FIERCE writing ability!
That ending made my jaw drop to the floor!
Author's Response: Well thanks very much for the great feedback, Monica. I'm glad you liked that little twist. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it. - W6C
[Report This]Date: 09-06-07 - 03:02 am Title: Fateful Meeting
i read this story for the first time some months ago and i was like, *ditzy voice* "whaaat? oh. okay." and coming across it again, i decided to read it and really pay attention and i'm glad i did. this is wonderful. absolutely wonderful. painfully passionate. but that's the way love is sometimes...
kudos.
Author's Response: I'm very glad you decided to read it a second time too, Shan. I know it was quite the twisted plot and I was hopin' it wasn't too confusing, but I think it's great that you gave it a second chance. Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate your time. -- W6C
[Report This]Date: 07-03-07 - 07:51 am Title: Fateful Meeting
Wow - I really didn't see that coming. What an intense story. Fab!
Author's Response: Thank you, Clayre. I'm glad the ending surprised you -- as I'd hoped. I'm glad you enjoyed it as well. Thanks for the feedback, it's appreciated very much. -- W6C
[Report This]Date: 09-18-06 - 08:21 pm Title: Fateful Meeting
I have to say this is one of my favorite stories on here. The way you wrote this was so beautiful. They devotion she showed was the best part, besides the end. I have to say I bursted out laughing after I re-read the last few sentances and realized who it was. I loved that part, makes you reall have to pay attention to the story. Again I loved it and this is an automatic favorite !!!
Author's Response: Well, I thank you very kindly for your feedback. I'm glad those points stood out to you. One of the things I wanted the focus to be on once it was revealed at the end, was how much she really does feel for Logan, despite often endin' up on opposite sides in battle. They are, and always have had, respect for one another even when they don't agree on the issues at hand. Thanks so much for takin' the time to let me know what you got out of the story. It's appreciated. --- W6C
Date: 07-20-06 - 06:37 am Title: Fateful Meeting
i just whant to says this really sucked
Author's Response: I've looked up your membership out of curiosity, simply because I've never heard of you before... You state that you're 13 years old... why are you reading stories meant for adults over the age of 17?? My stories are NOT meant for children of your age and you were given plenty of warnings before you opened it that it was not material suiteable for CHILDREN. If you choose to enter into adult arenas, where you don't belong, I suggest you don't bring attention to yourself. I was laughing before, at your need to cut into any writer when you yourself haven't bothered to make the attempt to post your own story, but now I find it even more humorous that you think you would have anything of merit to say about anyone's literary attempts.
Now I know why you thought the story sucked, because its message is too profound for someone of your age to even comprehend. Don't get me wrong, I'm not upset over your comment, but I AM upset that you went into areas that are not meant for children of your age. --- W6C
Date: 07-20-06 - 06:35 am Title: Fateful Meeting
i just whant to says this really sucked
Author's Response: So does your spelling, but I'm glad you felt it sucked enough to say it twice. Your constructive criticism needs a little work too. I'm sorry you feel that it sucked, but we can't all write as well as you; with such profound thoughts and imagination. Thanks for your time. *grins* --- W6C
[Report This]Date: 02-21-06 - 01:10 am Title: Fateful Meeting
Surprise, surprise. Never figured it was Raven all along, but it makes sense. Ororo's usually so regal, and I was amazed at the direction her narrative was taking, it was so raw. Thanks for keeping this reader on tenterhooks for the conclusion.
Even the fact that Wolvie was settling for Raven was interesting enough in itself. A person can always make the easy connection between Logan loving Jean and settling for anyone else...
Author's Response: *smiles* It's funny, cuz the first time I posted this story I thought "everyone's gonna figure it out, I dropped too many hints for it to be a surprise ending"... but I'm very glad it worked the way I'd hoped. It seems to have surprised everyone and that's what I was goin' for. Thanks again, CeeCee --- W6C
[Report This]Date: 12-30-05 - 12:31 am Title: Fateful Meeting
Well that would be every man's fantasy,because you could have any woman you could think of. The real problem with that it would'nt be fair to Raven who is a beautiful,sexy,exotic woman just as she is.
Author's Response: She is indeed and I think if it weren't for the fact that she an' Logan often end up fightin' on the opposite sides of many battles, I think they'd have a chance. I just thought I'd write a RoLo story with a bit of a surprise twist at the end. --- W6C
[Report This]Date: 03-10-04 - 05:43 am Title: Fateful Meeting
Woah! The ending caught me off guard. Good story!!! Good!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad it worked the way I'd hoped. --- W6C
[Report This]Date: 01-13-04 - 05:00 pm Title: Fateful Meeting
Whoa! You are so awesome. I was thinking one thing until the very end and then you shocked me. Again, awesome job.
Author's Response: Why, thank you! Awesome, huh? And we haven't even met face to face. :) But that's why they call it suspense... or is that "shock therapy"... I mean theatre. lololol --- W6C
[Report This]Date: 01-11-04 - 11:18 pm Title: Fateful Meeting
Holy Crap! I was not expecting that ending. That was hella clever of you.
Author's Response: LOLOL!! There's alot o' holiness bein' thrown around here...lolol. You weren't *supposed* to expect the ending... so I guess it worked. lolol --- W6C
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