Date: 05-30-06 - 01:34 am Title: The Big Picture
I liked it! I was in the mood for something lighter and sweet, and this hit the spot. Lovely RoLo story.
On the concrit side, I did notice a few grammatical errors -- nothing major but perhaps a beta tester could've picked those up.
Nice work overall!
Date: 04-08-05 - 03:53 pm Title: The Big Picture
lol i can just see the kids faces at that last bit keep writing like this its so funny
Date: 08-03-04 - 02:17 pm Title: The Big Picture
u av to carry on writing fics liked this one. cuz i loved it. and u could b the next Pari. nikki
Date: 07-02-04 - 09:31 pm Title: The Big Picture
That was so cool! I love how you put it together!
Date: 07-02-04 - 05:51 pm Title: The Big Picture
I like this fic a lot, ecspecially the ending when you know that they've been together already.
Date: 07-02-04 - 12:41 pm Title: The Big Picture
Very enjoyable. Sweet story.
Date: 07-02-04 - 12:15 am Title: The Big Picture
Though I've already said it to you, I'll say it again. I love this fic, wonderful work and I hope not yer last :) Thank you for sharing it here:) Pari PS: No worries, Storm is perfectly written:)